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Smart Woman's Dream
HannahSmith22 Reviews | 6.23/10 (22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )
Hermione stumbles into Lucius in a bar and spends the night with him. And then what? Isn’t she taking a great risk?
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HannahSmith
Member Since 2007 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 33 | 146 Reviews Written | 268 Review Responses
I started writing fanfic for Star Trek TOS back in the eighties, but only published HP fanfic for the first time in December 2007, here on TPP. I enjoy HG/LM as well as HG/SS and cannot stand the idea of HG/RW. I dislike reading/writing about rape and violence; my stories all have nice endings... so be warned.
Reviews for Smart Woman's Dream
awwwwwww I am glad they worked through the semantics to understand eachother!!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Right! They're still different, but as long as there's communication, that doesn't need to be an obstacle. Took some time for Hermione to get Lucius to that point, of course... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I do love the cat and mouse games between Hermione and Lucius.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! Lucius isn't a Slytherin for nothing; but of course the masks should go at last, for us to have a happy end.
Great ending. You really have captured Lucius's personality. I would love to read a longer Hermione/Lucius fic by you-I just know with your writing style and how you captured the characters personalities that it would be excellent.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thanks a million for your kind reviews of this story! I'm very happy that you like it. I'm wrestling with a longer HG/SS right now, and after that I have another plot for a longer HG/LM in mind - very different plot line, but similar Lucius. Thanks very much again!
Great first chapter - the pick-up, him going home to mull it over, brood about it and then tracking her down for more. Good set-up of tension.
Aww. Lucius's confession of love was so poignant, I have tears in my eyes.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you very much, I´m so glad that you see it that way. I tried to turn him into a convincing human being this time, not the violent bastard you often see and which I do not like at all, or the (very entertaining but not realistic) fun stories (which I do like a lot) where he's under her thumb, but a real person going through some important changes that shouldn't be too easy. (Even though it got VERY rose-coloured and fluffy at the end, I know.) Thanks again!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you very much, I´m so glad that you see it that way. I tried to turn him into a convincing human being this time, not the violent bastard you often see and which I do not like at all, or the (very entertaining but not realistic) fun stories (which I do like a lot) where he's under her thumb, but a real person going through some important changes that shouldn't be too easy. (Even though it got VERY rose-coloured and fluffy at the end, I know.) Thanks again!
Found this story and loved it completely. You do a great Lucius/Hermione fic. I love this story and would love to see you write another. Top marks for this one!!!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you liked it. I've posted another L/H fic recently (An Ex-convict). There's more to come in the near future. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you liked it. I've posted another L/H fic recently (An Ex-convict). There's more to come in the near future. Thanks for reviewing!
Nice story so far. Besides HG/SS pairing, I've always liked the HG/LM. Hope there is much more smut to come :-)
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Well, this story is to be more of a romance (violins at the end!), but I've just finished another short story (HG/LM) with much more smut... just wait and see. I love HG/LM too, there's not nearly enough of it, which is why I decided to start writing it. Thank you for reading!
Very entertaining. I'm curious to see what happens next.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! 2nd and final chapter is coming up very soon.
Ooh, hot. Very good. I can't wait for more.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thanks! Final chapter is to follow very soon...
An actually believable Hermione/Lucius fic. Don't see to many of those. Nice job.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! It's a bit difficult to write about Hermione and Lucius and not have at least one of them going OOC. The only solution is to turn them into round characters so they can change (preferably Lucius, of course). I've got another HG/LM story coming up soon, hope you'll like it.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! It's a bit difficult to write about Hermione and Lucius and not have at least one of them going OOC. The only solution is to turn them into round characters so they can change (preferably Lucius, of course). I've got another HG/LM story coming up soon, hope you'll like it.
This is so nice. I just randomly came across it and I am glad. I like that Lucius learned love. Now I'm all fluffy. Thank you for this story!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thanks, that´s so nice to hear. I´m planning on more Hermione/Lucius. He may not always be as nice as in this one, but I can't seem to make a cruel bastard of him – I'll leave that to other people...
Presenting "Lucius" who has a different persona depending upon the company he is in does not seem out of character, just Slytherin. Your interpretation that Lucius was and is capable of love was well said.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
You know, you're right - glad you pointed it out to me! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Wouldn't have mind a little more smut, but that's okay. It was a very nice ending anyways.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! There's another HG/LM story in preparation with a lot more smut...
Very nice. I really liked that. Will there be a sequel?
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Maybe in a later stage – if I get inspired. But this was my very first fanfic and I'm now experimenting a bit with 2 or 3 other plots. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Wowzers! Hot and I like! Very nice little snut piece! yummmm.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! Nice reviews encourage us to keep writing...
This was a very sweet story. I enjoyed how Lucius gave into his feelings before he ever made fun of Hermione's. It's also nice to know that Severus supports the relationship. You wouldn't want all friends to be opposed to the relationship. Anyway, great story!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Yes, that's exactly why I made him the one to reassure Hermione! Thank you for reading and enjoying!
sweet!Lucius just brings tears to my eyes. This was so sentimental and sweet.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Yes, I realize that Lucius got a little OOC in this story, but I wanted him to deserve Hermione and I did not want her severely disappointed (we get enough of that in real life already) - and for all we know he may have seen the light after his tribulations. Thank you for reading!
Response from peppermint (Reviewer)
Oh, an OOC Lucius is a good thing from time to time. Yes, he's a wonderful bastard when he's cold and calculating, but he's just so cute here :D I love it. Thank YOU for writing it :D
But but, she didn't tell him!!! Its not nice not to remind them that we love them too.!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Well, no, but many of them have us put up with the reverse; and for the first three months Lucius let her think that she was nothing but a temporary fling, while he knew perfectly well that she was head over heels; so let him sweat a bit, too! Knowing Hermione, it won't be long before she will give in and tell him in words as well as in deeds...
Awww, go Lucius! Go Hermione! Well done, very nice story, well-plotted and well thought out!Praises,
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! I've got some more HG/LM plots waiting to be written, very glad to find that people like it, even though HG/SS seems the absolute favorite generally...
‘This is actually our first time together, and I want to enjoy every second of it...’
Ooooh.... I know you mean their first time together since their confession/admission, but with what you've hinted at (potential for a relationship b/w Hermione & Severus; perhaps Draco rooting for a relationship b/w H & S instead of H & L), this just comes across with sooooo much more attached to it. XD
Thanks for sharing!
Very sweet ending. I love how she finally cracked through that hard exterior he put up for everyone else.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! yes, sometimes these things happen - but not often enough.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
Thank you! yes, sometimes these things happen - but not often enough.
So much for that one night stand. I like the way this is unfolding and look forward to reading the conclusion.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
it's always a risk...
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Smart Woman's Dream)
it's always a risk...