wow that was awesome!

Let me begin by stating, that I enjoyed the premise of this story.  It was unique--nothing I'd seen before.  The costumes you chose for the various couples were excellent.  I especially liked the comment about the wolf and chasing girls.   I snickered at that one.  However, as I read, the dialogue seemed a bit stilted--not smooth flowing.  Because of this, I found some sections more difficult to read--such as the discussions with Remus and Minerva and Draco and Pansy.  I don't know if you do this already, but, if not, try reading the dialogue aloud after you write it.  If it sounds off then, it is a good bet that readers may find it a bit off too.  Other than that I did enjoy the story.  Thank you for writing it.