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More Than Fantasy
RachelW14 Reviews | 7.79/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 77 Favorites )
Fast and furious, secretive and stolen; that's how it was at the start, if you asked me how it came to be. -- Remus Lupin tells, in his own words, how he, Severus, and Hermione came to be together.
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Very nice story. I was worried there when Hermione was a 5th year and was very glad to see that things were put on hold until much later. You captured the characters well. I would love to read something longer featuring the three.
this story was written very nicely. slowly and with a lot of understanding. i likehow it slow and took time. i likehowthey all related to each otherand how you mentioned how outsiders took it. it was also a suprise but im sure helped them that they had that three year absence.
I like this story. Its delightful!
one of my favorite situations. Very nicely approached, handled with finesse covering the awkward discussions, etc. Enjoyable read.
Elura
Wow I don't know what else to say just wow. Tamara
a wonderful description of a very special relationship. I like especially that Severus is insecure and yet warms up with a female component in his life. Do you think Minerva was a little bit curious? Jealous,even?
This has to be the 3rd time I've read this story, I cannot believe I have forgotten to review it. I just wanted to say THANK YOU. That actually has to be one of the best Poly fan fics I have ever read. You showed it as it is, not glorified but just real. So thanks.
Response from RachelW (Author of More Than Fantasy)
And thanks so much for your review! I'm so glad this one-shot is still being enjoyed, even if it is horribly out of canon at this point. :-)
I've read and re-read this story. I can't believe I've neglected to review before now. Shame on me! I love this story ... I simply love it! It is so well-written and so poignant. And so damn erotic and romantic, as well. Thanks for sharing.
Response from RachelW (Author of More Than Fantasy)
Thanks :-) It's been a long time since I wrote it, but in retrospect, it's one of my personal favorites that I wrote too. Appreciate the review!
I'm not a fan of threesomes--or of Lupin yet I really loved this story and the dynamic you built between the three of them--I especially love Lupin's voice here.
Wow...the slow building up to the end here was wonderful! i really enjoyed it!
Love it.
I am sitting here, wondering what I could possibly say that could do justice to what I am feeling. It's a beautiful story, so satisfying on many levels. I think I am going to log out now so I can spend a while savoring this. Thanks, Rachel.
Response from RachelW (Author of More Than Fantasy)
Thanks NSS! I spent a lot of time on this for the word count, trying to fit years worth of information into a one-shot. I'm glad it's been enjoyed.
It's taken me a long time to get my act together and read this story. I don't know why the inclusion of Lupin squicked me so much to begin with. I'm glad I finally did read it. It is a lovely story with a great narative, beautiful romance and tasteful sex. Very very lovely... I'm glad there was a third option for her...
I wasn't sure if I was going to enjoy a RL/SS/HG pairing, but I was so desperate for a RL/HG story that I gave it a chance. Thank goodness I did because this was beautifully written. You made it such a believeable scenario, the characters felt natural - it was just lovely. Thank you.