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Heart and Soul

1: That Magic Night ... erm ... Morning

2: Your Lips Were Thrilling

3: The Way You Held Me Tight

4: And Tumbled Overboard

5: In the Moon Mist

6: So Strangely Willing

7: Now I See

8: The Way a Fool Would Do

9: I Begged to Be Adored

10: Epilogue

Heart and Soul

sshg316

151 Reviews   |   151 Ratings, 0 Likes, 127 Favorites )

Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant Malfoy Manor 46,572 Words 10 Chapters Complete
Draco Malfoy Luna Lovegood

Sequel to my SSHG story, Enraptured. A prophecy says Luna and Draco will one day fall in love. That was six years ago, and Luna is tired of waiting around. It's time to take matters into her own hands. Unfortunately, Draco has a plan of his own. First Place in Draconian Measures at the 2007 OWL Awards; Runner Up for Best Fluff in Round Three of the Quill to Parchment Awards.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: That Magic Night ... erm ... Morning

Chapter 2: Your Lips Were Thrilling

Chapter 3: The Way You Held Me Tight

Chapter 4: And Tumbled Overboard

Chapter 5: In the Moon Mist

Chapter 6: So Strangely Willing

Chapter 7: Now I See

Chapter 8: The Way a Fool Would Do

Chapter 9: I Begged to Be Adored

Chapter 10: Epilogue


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sshg316

Member Since 2006  |  20 Stories  |  Favorited by 376  |  199 Reviews Written  |  1,365 Review Responses

Just an avid reader who somehow stumbled into HP fanfiction.  I read and sometimes, I write.


 

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Elise_Wanderer

Lovely story of Luna's mother, and I do so hope that Draco takes the lesson to heart--assuming, that is, that Luna makes it through (but I trust you, m'dear, to give us all a very happy ending!).Yet now we must wait patiently for more!  Evil cliffie, evil!!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

I'm evil, I know. ;)  But I did write on vacation, so more will come very, very soon!  I'm glad you enjoyed my take on Luna's mother.  The basics are from canon, of course, but I couldn't resist extrapolating a bit. ;)As for Luna ... well, you'll have to wait and see! :DThanks, hon!  *hugs!*

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

I'm evil, I know. ;)  But I did write on vacation, so more will come very, very soon!  I'm glad you enjoyed my take on Luna's mother.  The basics are from canon, of course, but I couldn't resist extrapolating a bit. ;)As for Luna ... well, you'll have to wait and see! :DThanks, hon!  *hugs!*

10/10

gabi1791

Wow, I loved Enraptured, but somehow missed the start of this story and I've been reading on and off over the whole day to catch up, only to find the most evil cliffie!!!!! Please update soon, this is a really lovely story and I want to read more!!!!!gab

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Hi, gabi!  It's so good to see you here. :D  I'm go glad you're all caught up adn that you're enjoying it.  And right on a cliffie, too! LOL  More to come very soon -- I wrote on vacation, so the next bit is almost done. :)Thank you so much!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Hi, gabi!  It's so good to see you here. :D  I'm go glad you're all caught up adn that you're enjoying it.  And right on a cliffie, too! LOL  More to come very soon -- I wrote on vacation, so the next bit is almost done. :)Thank you so much!

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Elise_Wanderer

I just love the way Luna thinks, and your ability to take us along for that ride is terrific. You've made it clear that she really does love him, because she understands him and is able to figure out how he thinks. Draco doesn't stand a chance!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much, honey!  Your comments are so fabulous -- exactly what I'm trying to get at.   *glomps* 

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much, honey!  Your comments are so fabulous -- exactly what I'm trying to get at.   *glomps* 

10/10

Lkmaide

Okay thats just plain MEAN!!  You go and write to brilliant chapters and then leave us with an evil cliffie!!!  OHHHH  you BRAT!!  Please come home soon and write us another chapter so Draco can understand he ain't going no where without Luna in his life.  BTW I totally love your line, 'I would have had the Sun, the Moon, and Stars in my arms. . . .' gorgeous!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

I do love cliffies.  LOL  I hadn't planned on including one in this story, but this was too good ... um ... evil to resist! ;)I did do some writing while I was away, however, and the next chapter should post very, very soon!  See? I was good.  :)I'm so glad you enjoyed that line -- it's one of my favorites.Thank you so much!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

I do love cliffies.  LOL  I hadn't planned on including one in this story, but this was too good ... um ... evil to resist! ;)I did do some writing while I was away, however, and the next chapter should post very, very soon!  See? I was good.  :)I'm so glad you enjoyed that line -- it's one of my favorites.Thank you so much!

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Elise_Wanderer

This continues to be delicious! And if Draco tells himself one more time that he mustn't shag her, well, we know where this will lead! Methinks he doth protest altogether too much. I adore the fact that Luna is no dum-dum. That's part of why Draco is falling, falling, falling....

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

LOL  Me also thinks he doth protest too much.  But well ... we'll see what becomes of all his protestations later on. ;)Yes, I decided that I was tired of Luna's Ravenclaw tendencies being ignore.  She's a clever, smart girl ... why not showcase that side of her a bit?  She's also very, very observant, which helps her tremendously.  And Draco ... yeah.  He's falling quite hard ... not that he knows it yet. Thanks, again, honey!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

LOL  Me also thinks he doth protest too much.  But well ... we'll see what becomes of all his protestations later on. ;)Yes, I decided that I was tired of Luna's Ravenclaw tendencies being ignore.  She's a clever, smart girl ... why not showcase that side of her a bit?  She's also very, very observant, which helps her tremendously.  And Draco ... yeah.  He's falling quite hard ... not that he knows it yet. Thanks, again, honey!

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Elise_Wanderer

Draco thinks he's so very clever!

Silly wabbit, Luna's the best choice out there, as he is about to begin finding out....

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Yes, he certainly does think he's clever ... he's about to have his bubble burst by one Ms Luna Lovegood, however. :)Thanks, honey!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Yes, he certainly does think he's clever ... he's about to have his bubble burst by one Ms Luna Lovegood, however. :)Thanks, honey!

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Elise_Wanderer

It is so lovely to revisit this!  Your Luna continues to be exquisite--dreamy and singular and so beautifully accepting of the world.This time around, I particular enjoyed the subtle difference between ogling, not leering, the innocence of that distinction.  I also love the way she is saving up all the little sensations for later fantasy sequences.And I also adore the fact that, while she believes she was playing the piano, she was apparently just sliding her hands up and down the keyboard.  I'm quite sure it sounded like music to her!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thanks so much, sweetie, for revisiting!   And you noticed my favorite bits about this chapter! *squishes you* 

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thanks so much, sweetie, for revisiting!   And you noticed my favorite bits about this chapter! *squishes you* 

10/10

Muggline

Oh, I am sure he will realize a few things now... Thank you for this amazing story which I have found today. I was too eager to read on, so I am only reviewing the last chapter. Í am looking forward to the update, though.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story thus far!  More to come very soon.  Thank you so much!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story thus far!  More to come very soon.  Thank you so much!

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WriterMerrin

Oh no!  You're doing an amazing job showing Draco's delema.  The whole bit with Xeno is quite touching.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much, m'dear! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  More to come very soon! :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much, m'dear! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  More to come very soon! :)

10/10

decmeadow

Awww!  Poor Xeno!  I loved how you coordinated all of the names of the Lovegoods though!  Such a touching story... And goodness!  I hope Luna is okay, and maybe Draco admits a few things...

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews!  The Lovegoods story is one that always intrigued me in canon.  It's just so sad.  I extrapolated a bit, of course. ;)  I'm glad you enjoyed it.More to come very soon!  Thanks, again!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews!  The Lovegoods story is one that always intrigued me in canon.  It's just so sad.  I extrapolated a bit, of course. ;)  I'm glad you enjoyed it.More to come very soon!  Thanks, again!

0/10

timestep

Oh evil, evil child - not sure if that is you or Luna!Enjoy your holiday - stay cool.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Maybe it's both of us?  LOLThank you so much, hon!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Maybe it's both of us?  LOLThank you so much, hon!

10/10

decmeadow

Oh I loved it! 

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you! :D

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you! :D

10/10

decmeadow

As always, Luna is indeed a peculiar breed.  And poor Draco, he has no idea what's happening...

Love it as always

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

LOL  Yes, she certainly is that!I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! :D  Thank you!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

LOL  Yes, she certainly is that!I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! :D  Thank you!

10/10

decmeadow

Draco is already starting to fall! hehe...

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

He certainly is!  :DThank you!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

He certainly is!  :DThank you!

9/10

CharmedForce

Oh, no! I hope Luna isn't injured too seriously, but maybe this will be just the shove Draco needs to give up The Plan.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

*whistles innocently*  Not much I can say that wouldn't give too much away, so I'll just say ...Thank you so much! :D

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

*whistles innocently*  Not much I can say that wouldn't give too much away, so I'll just say ...Thank you so much! :D

10/10

MoreThanSirius

Oh, how sweet that Luna has a bin of lavender airplanes to treasure! Draco in denial is a thing of beauty. I rather think that won't be lasting much longer. That was quite an enlightening chat he had with Luna's father. She wore a set of deep green robes with bronze-coloured piping that were obviously tailor-made and very expensive. Green, eh? Why do I think that Xenophilius was the Ravenclaw and Solange was a Slytherin with Ravenclaw  piping?Oh, poor Luna! Poor Xenophilius! Poor Draco! And they all have to suffer for days without end while someone is off having fun.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

I'm a mean, terrible author, I know.  I left them all hanging for a week -- but in my defense, I did get a chance to write a bit, so the next bit is almost done!  See?  I was good! ;)I'm so glad you liked Luna's bin of lavender airplanes -- it seemed the sort of thing she would enjoy.  And yes, Draco is knee-deep in denial.  *shakes head*  As for Xenophilius and Solange ... I can confirm that at least one is correct (of course, I can do that because it was already mentioned in the epilogue of Enraptured). You'll find out about the other later on.  ;)Thanks so much, honey!  More to come very soon, I promise!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

I'm a mean, terrible author, I know.  I left them all hanging for a week -- but in my defense, I did get a chance to write a bit, so the next bit is almost done!  See?  I was good! ;)I'm so glad you liked Luna's bin of lavender airplanes -- it seemed the sort of thing she would enjoy.  And yes, Draco is knee-deep in denial.  *shakes head*  As for Xenophilius and Solange ... I can confirm that at least one is correct (of course, I can do that because it was already mentioned in the epilogue of Enraptured). You'll find out about the other later on.  ;)Thanks so much, honey!  More to come very soon, I promise!

10/10

decmeadow

Oh ho!  Draco will certainly be surprised when he finds out his plan is going to crumble in his hands.  >:)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

LOL  Yes, he certainly will be! :)  Thank you!!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

LOL  Yes, he certainly will be! :)  Thank you!!

10/10

decmeadow

Ah ha!  I can't believe I didn't see this before on TPP!  I've been waiting to see when this story came out, and to see that there are four chapters!!! My lucky day.And I love how you're making Luna so much more than most... She wasn't sorted into Ravenclaw for anything after all! 

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

*waves*  Hi!  I'm so glad you found it ... and aren't you lucky to not have to wait?  :)  I'm so glad you're enjoying my take on Luna.  She's quite fun to write, and I like showing a side to her that we don't normally see ... the smart, clever side. Thanks so much!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

*waves*  Hi!  I'm so glad you found it ... and aren't you lucky to not have to wait?  :)  I'm so glad you're enjoying my take on Luna.  She's quite fun to write, and I like showing a side to her that we don't normally see ... the smart, clever side. Thanks so much!

10/10

pokeystar

I love Draco in denial, but you are evil.  Evil, I say.hurmph.And I'll bet all my donuts that Solange was Slytherin.  And that Xeno was Ravenclaw.(evil).

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Are you trying to say that I'm evil?  *blinks*  Me?*snickers*Your donuts are safe ... at least one on count.  (See epilogue to Enraptured!)  As for the other one, my lips are sealed for the moment.  ;)I did do some writing while on vacation, so another chapter should be up soon!  Thanks so much, honey!  *hugs*

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Are you trying to say that I'm evil?  *blinks*  Me?*snickers*Your donuts are safe ... at least one on count.  (See epilogue to Enraptured!)  As for the other one, my lips are sealed for the moment.  ;)I did do some writing while on vacation, so another chapter should be up soon!  Thanks so much, honey!  *hugs*

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, my goodness! Like mother like daughter and not in a good way. Too bad, Xeno didn't give draco more deatils about their realationship. Enjoying the ride, thank goodness I bought a ticket!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much. hon!  More to come very soon! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :D

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much. hon!  More to come very soon! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :D

10/10

beaweasley2

I think it was lovely! Too bad they didn't see the elusive creatures - but they heard them. Draco is def falling for Luna! I'm glad. She'd be good for him.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you, m'dear!  Our elusive creatures will return again later, but I think our couple was a bit too busy to go take a look. *winks*  I think Luna would be very good for Draco -- he's certainly learning to not take things so seriously, and you're right ... he's falling for her even though he doesn't want to.  More soon!  Thanks, again!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you, m'dear!  Our elusive creatures will return again later, but I think our couple was a bit too busy to go take a look. *winks*  I think Luna would be very good for Draco -- he's certainly learning to not take things so seriously, and you're right ... he's falling for her even though he doesn't want to.  More soon!  Thanks, again!

10/10

nocturnus

so sweet and in character

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

10/10

Sevariger

PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! UPDATE!!!!  this is one DM/LL that i'm actually interested in.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

*grins*  I'm so glad you're enjoying this story!  I am currently working on the next chapter, so hopefully it will up soon. :)Thank you so much!

0/10

Bettina

Draco is doomed; Luna knows him too well!
A great plot, please continue!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

LOL  Yes, he won't know what hit him!  I'm working on the next chapter right now.  Hopefully it will be up soon. Thank you!

9/10

Bettina

Oh, please, YES. I mean, I do want to see more of this unexpected pairing. Hehe, yes the highest Muggle ranks do tend to force kids into piano lessons, and I love that you make wizards do the same!Four chapters are up, let me see those at least.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Heart and Soul)

Thank you so much!  It really is an unxpected pairing, but I'm really enjoying writing them. :)  I hope you enjoyed the rest what's currently posted!

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