hah. I don't know why it made me laugh. very evill!! *cackle* but it's really well written, very slyltherinesque of you. I love it personally.

One can not escape the rule of three for long. Lovely poem, remind me not to get on you bad side.

Lovely poem! Dark, mysterious, foreboding and wonderful to read. Sometimes I had the feeling the rythm was a little off, but the wonderful imagery and rhyme made up for that more than enough.*grabs a blue candle and lights it* (don't have any other colour )

naughty.  You've no idea how many times I've wanted to do this to others, though.  Spose a poem is better than actually doing it, right?As always, I adore anything that comes from your mind, dark recesses or not.

My my Southern, you were feeling rather Wicked weren't you? Love the imagry that creates! sent chills down my spine!I will have to make a mental note not to get on your bad side!

This poem is definitely very wicked... However, scary and frightening as this poem was, you also had quite a bit of grace in it. It was a beautiful poem to read, and really gave me the full specter of feelings one enjoys when reading poetry- fear, delight, joy and sadness. I loved the line, "Downward will the melting wax begin to glide." However, I feel that it would flow more if you wrote "Downward the melting wax begins to glide." That line gave me chills thought, it was so good, even as it is. I really enjoyed this poem, in an eerie sort of way (I imagine you can't get too many "I enjoyed this poem a lot" reviews for this sort of poetry) Anyway, this poem was a pleasure to read.

Very creepy.  Note to self - never get on the wrong side of SW69 !

I was breezing on through and caught this poem. Hmm....this little bit of treachery would come in handy. I've just the candidate for it, too.

Remind me never to piss you off.  Damn, Witch your scary but I still love you.Tamara