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Potions Under Duress Sanctuary
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Sanctuary

1: Picking Up The Pieces

2: A New Beginning?

Sanctuary

minuet99

17 Reviews   |   17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )

Drama Angst post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 15,704 Words 2 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione Granger has not borne the effects of war well. Severus Snape encounters her at a farmer's market when she collapses and takes her back to his home. What happens next?

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Chapters (2)

Chapter 1: Picking Up The Pieces

Chapter 2: A New Beginning?


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minuet99

Member Since 2007  |  7 Stories  |  Favorited by 9  |  3 Reviews Written  |  64 Review Responses

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Reviews for Sanctuary

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10/10

MerinaSnape

I really liked this! :)

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thanks, Merina!

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thanks, Merina!

0/10

Trulyamused

very nice. Well done.Truly

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you. :)

10/10

amsev

I simply love this story.  I read it elsewhere and was delighted to find it again here.  Very nice progression of emotional events.

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much to leave me a review. :) 

0/10

snapeophile

Lovely, sweet story.  And you are so right, what a nice change to see SS doing the 'comforting' and healing in your piece! 

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you so much for your lovely review. It warms my heart. :) 

10/10

maria

Beautifully written!

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you!

0/10

Gwenog Jones

I loved how you succinctly described the characters' changing emotions and depicted the actions that helped to mould their lives.  I think, that sometimes what is said in fewer words can have more of an impact thatn stories containing tons.  Wonderful writing!

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you very kindly. What lovely words to say and written so well! I really appreciate your feedback!

10/10

sinbad

What a hopeful, if undefined ending.  Hermione lucked out when Severus found her.

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Yes, she did. And I purposely left it open because I thought at one time I might continue the piece. Thanks for leaving a review!

9/10

jade2099

Interesting to see how Snape helps Hermoine.  It's definitely not easy helping someone manage depression.  I like how this story is flowing and look forward to the next chapter. :)

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you, very much.

10/10

Zigflorian

Great start!

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you. :)

10/10

Sampdoria

A very interesting start to a story. Sometimes during the story I feel I have read it before somewhere, but even if I had, it was well worth the read. I hope you will update soon and not at least give us some answears to why Hermione is as depressed as she is.

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

It was posted as part of the Winter 2006 Exchange and has been posted at OWL & Ashwinder as well.The other chapter is in queue and will be out in a few days... 

8/10

mekareami

Great start :) I look forward to reading more. Thank you for writing

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you for lettling me know you that you're enjoying it. 

10/10

MaevePotter

a very sweet story... I hope to read more soon! Do you have more written already?

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Yes, the story is complete in two chapters and the other one will be posted soon. Thanks, I hope you enjoy the rest!

10/10

maryperk

Very good start.

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you.

0/10

ickle duddykins

I do so love the HG_SS Exchanges, it's like an early Christmas :o) I get to read wonderful, creative, and very original fics. Like this one.I think you're right about the reversal of roles. Severus is usually the flawed character and Hermione typically is the one to turn it all around; then, or course, they fall madly and passionately in luuuurve.This one is unique and I appreciate the spin you've put on the story. But they still fall in luuuurve. Hurray!Thanks for a great fic,Sue.

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you. :) Its nice to turn them around a little bit.

0/10

faula_tara

awwww  so sweet and its donr in 2 chappters i was worried it was going to be to continuedthank you for sharing your story

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you for your kind words. :)

10/10

irishredlass

minuet99I applaud all of your hard work. How you must have agonized to pull this work together?  A splendid job!  I loved how outwardly Severus appears to be slightly OCC yet, his internal turmoil is the Snape we all know and love.  I also love the OCC as I think that this is the TRUE Severus.

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you so much. I'm sorry I haven't responded sooner, I've been a bit offline and didn't see this until now. 


I'm glad this Severus rings true to you.

10/10

irishredlass

minuet99I applaud all of your hard work. How you must have agonized to pull this work together?  A splendid job!  I loved how outwardly Severus appears to be slightly OCC yet, his internal turmoil is the Snape we all know and love.  I also love the OCC as I think that this is the TRUE Severus.

Response from minuet99 (Author of Sanctuary)

Thank you. Severus Snape is a highly conflicted man which makes him a delight to play with and write about. 

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