Hee.  Again, a wonderful last line. 

Lovely collaboration so far and I look forward to reading more :) Thanks to all of you for writing

Excellent! That was better than a full blown lemons scence. After all, IMO, they *just* acknowledged their feelings for one another.  To have squeezed the heck out of the lemons now would be crazy...make us wait, make us wait! :D  Karelia, I *Truly* wish the potterverse existed now, I would love nothing more than to be able to go through that door into that garden in this chapter...beautiful writing!

The vision was a great idea and the description was very nice, too.  I think it has been made clear to Severus that Hermione is in favor of such activities.

Great story. Loving everyone's different approach to each chapter.

Wow, I'm not sure if you increased or decreased the sexual tension.  I do know their love for potion ingredients is sated. LOL

Nice work! Glad that Severus is fianlly pulling his head out of his arse... lol Woot for Litc!

That was a particularly exquisite form of torture for them. ;-) Good to see that Severus is finally using that formidable brain of his though!

Yay, I'm glad for the update! This chapter was wonderful—I enjoyed too many parts of it to list them all. Also, I thought I'd leave a review here to say that you are all doing such a great job. There is so much creativity, and it flows really well even though there are multiple authors. I look forward to the next chapter =)

Gee.  I suppose the eroticism would be stemmed somewhat by self-consciousness, due to the fact that it was herself she was observing in the throes of passion.  But still I'd think the whole thing would inspire Hermione (not to mention Severus!) to feel pretty aroused, moreso than smug...

I'm just saying...

But anyway, good chapter!

WOW!...Love it, excellent chapter!!!   MORE MORE MORE!!!!

Woo, sexy!  What a lovely garden.  Hmmmm.  What shall I do next?

Still enjoying this and wondering what the corridor will toss at them now!

I enjoyed the Draco/Harry bit *grins*, maybe they get back together? Very good way to make Severus see what's what - hope he gets the message! As always looking forward to the next chapter.

Oooh yay. Now I'm happy. ^_^ (I have a soft spot for H/D)That was very well done. I love Hermione's last line, and obviously she's right. I wonder what Severus will do now....

this is a really good story. i would really love to see how it all ends. i hope an update will be soon.

well i knew draco and harry had to get together at some point!  i thot it illustrated hermione's point perfectly.  you all are doing a great job.  thanks so much

Harry likes all sorts of blonds in this story, it seems. :-D Silly Severus though. He'd better get over the whole "no, we can't, I'm a horrid person" thing soon!

I'm intrigued by Neville. I'm just not convinced that it's Hermione he's after - how about Ginny instead? He'd certainly have to worry about both Ron and Harry's reaction to this, if it were so.

Anyway, another great chapter. I'm really loving the way this is coming together so seamlessly. Well done!

Oh, Son, say it isn't so! Hmm. Well, this could be used to our advantage, couldn't it? Yes, having the Chosen One in your pocket might be something worthy doing indeed. Great thinking.

French blondes! Well, I do go visit the South of France often enough. I suppose this will do. I thought perhaps it was my son. Glad it isn't.

Another blond? Why, that's simply smashing. We do have all the fun.

Meddling Albus always knows something, doesn't he?

Ah, blondes... we're such a sexy lot.

I certainly wouldn't mind being lost in a corridor with dear Severus.

Wonderful chapter! And we got some Harry&Draco-action too! *does a happy-dance*  :-D