Look Thou, Kind Masses
notsosaintly6 Reviews | 6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
An angsty haiku series about relationships.
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Founder of The Petulant Poetess. Editor and full-time mother.
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I really enjoyed reading that. I could feel the emotions you were trying to get across.
Very touching, mate. I feel your pain.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Look Thou, Kind Masses)
Thanks. Every time I revisit it, I find I can still relate. Suppose I will for a very, very long time.
Very niceDon't read a lot of poems but this one is very nicely written.Seems like your had a "litte" marriage stress at the time, I hope that changed.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Look Thou, Kind Masses)
It did, thank you. I've been married for 14 years. Marriage is like a roller coaster. Gratefully, I've been avoiding those huge descents.
Very emotional and thought provoking. I believe I need to go think on it for awhile. Until next time. Tamara
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Look Thou, Kind Masses)
Thank you for reviewing my poems as well.This was written a few years ago when I was going through a rough time. It's not that things have changed; I just have learned to deal with them differently, and when you do that it becomes better.But still, little bits of me are in whatever I write. I think people who know me in real life would be shocked if they read this stuff. But there it is and it is a part of who I am.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
I understand exactly what you are saying. The only difference in me is that I can't get the words to come out right. Well, without sounding stupid anyway. Thanks for responding. T
i really like your website and (while waiting for the stories i'm following to be updated) thought i'd take a look at some of what you've written in the past. the title of this piece caught my eye, so i read it first. i like it very much - esepecially that image of the gold band so tiny, yet it fits around your soul.