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Second Chances
cormak19 Reviews | 6.63/10 (19 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )
Deathly Hallows Book Seven Spoilers! When Hermione Granger's life takes a turn for the worse, she learns from the most unlikely source that second chances can make you whole again.
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cormak
Member Since 2007 | 1 Story | Favorited by 1 | 28 Reviews Written | 3 Review Responses
I'm 30 years old and inbetween working full and owning horses I enjoy doing art, writing and making music.
I really like the possibility of an older Hermione paired with Severus Snape.
Oh, yes. Did I mention I have a thing for Severus? :)
I apologize about unfinished stories. I have more chapters written for some of them, just have not gotten around to editing or writing more!
Reviews for Second Chances
It's a shame that this story wasn't finished.
Oh my goodness tell me you are continuing this? I simply ADORE that you mentioned Hermione is now tall. At 5’9 myself I have a hard time reading about her petit-ness ad nauseum. I really enjoyed the banter between them. A bit of their old school relationship there, but certainly adult in scope now as well. OUuu and the fight with Ron was wonderfully mean and bitter. I am glad he is out of the picture. This story made me so happy! Thank you!
What a begining! Very powerful!
please finish!great start!
I like this Snape. In DH we saw that he was in fact capable of compassion and love. I can't wait to see where this goes. I never thought Hermione and Ron were a good intellectual match. :)
Great chapter. Someone needs to castrate Ron for how cruel he was to Hermione. Maybe Harry or Snape could do that for him. :)
ohhhh still a slytherin. Love it.
Great start.... more please!!
You should update this very soon!
Dunh, dunh, dunh! Wow, that was a great prologue. I'm excited to read about a cannon compliant fic featuring HG/SS. I've been wondering when someone would take the plunge and write a fic that included a married/formerly married Hermione and a livuing Snape. I can't wait to reat more!
I'm not surprised about the breakup, they were always too different to live in peace. I'm only sorry it took 20 yrs for them to realise that they aren't good for each other. I enjoy your smooth flowing writing style, it makes the story very believeable.
I'm not surprised about the breakup, they were always too different to live in peace. I'm only sorry it took 20 yrs for them to realise that they aren't good for each other. I enjoy your smooth flowing writing style, it makes the story very believeable.
I look forward to more of this. Excellent start.
It looks like a wonderful tale so far! I'm looking forward to reading more!
So THAT'S what happened to Severus. Much better than DH. Can hardly wait for Chapter 3
Poor Hermione...Poor Severus. I really like your characterizations thus far. And I'm glad that you so tidily got rid or Ron. It would have been better if he died...just kidding. Anyways, I love your fic so far and I can't wait for more!
Exciting!
I always wondered what Severus would be like post-war. I never thought he would be so kind and caring, as he's acting towards Hermione. I haven't read Book 7 yet, but I'll be doing so tomorrow, so I don't mind the spoilers. It can't be anything I haven't already heard about. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. I think Severus should accompany Hermione back to the house so she can pack her things up.
Response from cormak (Author of Second Chances)
Severus does appear quite a bit kinder here. He's pretty starved for human contact, but not too much. Some of his bitterness will creep back in. He's just happy to see someone, even if it is Hermione. Enjoy Book 7! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
It is a wonderful beginning, I hope it continues into a "full" HG/SS adventure (worthy of the rating :-) ). You are a very talented writer, something I wish (and many people wish) we were, but unfortunately, we are not, however I do recognize it when I read it. Please continue with your story, otherwise many fans, and perhaps even yourself, may be sorely disappointed.Happy New Year to you and your friends and family!