Chapter 7
Chapter 7 of 7
themadmermaidGinny Weasley is captured by Lucius Malfoy, but holding her hostage does not work out as either of them expect.
ReviewedGinny couldn't quite put her finger on it, but Narcissa's mood seemed different today. The older witch was almost grave, a dramatic contrast to her usual exaggerated superciliousness. After a few cursory attempts at their normal exercises, Narcissa gave up.
“Ginevra, darling, I think that I have imparted to you all the knowledge I can," she said with a sparkle of her customary ostentation. “In truth,” she continued, “I believe the time draws nigh for you to play your own game.”
Narcissa favored Ginny with a sincere smile, and Ginny was reminded of how beautiful Narcissa really was, even as she couldn't help but laugh. “You sound like fortune teller from a Muggle movie!” Ginny told her.
“Well, darling, after your instruction at Hogwarts from Professor Trelawney, I am sure there's nothing I can teach you on that subject,” Narcissa rejoined airily.
And with this, the lesson ended, but Ginny remembered Narcissa's comment. She was indeed an attentive student, and she knew full well that it was a notice.
Ginny was startled that evening when Lucius swept into the room. She turned from the bookcase that she was half-heartedly perusing at the sound of the door closing heavily, and the expression on Lucius' face immediately alerted her that his mood was dark indeed.
As he strode towards her, she took a moment to be thankful that although he was angry, he apparently was not angry at her. He was intimidating anyhow, but she simply waited calmly to see what would happen.
Stopping in front of her, Lucius studied her intently, finally raising his fingers to trace lightly over her face, and she couldn't help but close her eyes and sigh softly. And then, just as intently, he moved even closer, backing her up to the wall, his fingers sliding down through her robe to pinch her breasts and skim down her stomach, and all the while her soft sighs continued, increasing to breathy murmurings. When his fingers easily slid right into the sticky dampness at the center of her, she actually squealed a little, and his answering growl made her knees weaken terribly.
Emboldened by his odd mood, Ginny let her hands roam over Lucius as he continued to toy with her, filling her fingers with his hair, stroking the bulge at the front of his velvety soft robes. Between both their distracted attempts, they managed to get his clothing sufficiently out of the way, and without further preliminaries, she found herself hoisted up against the wall.
Everything from there was a frantic blur, a confused jumble of Lucius thrusting almost violently into her, his teeth biting almost painfully into her throat and shoulders. She was near to coming, but something about the angle kept prolonging the pleasure while bringing her no closer, and she was squirming against him, and her moans were almost sobs.
Lucius ceased long enough to push her up against the wall more securely and spoke into her ear as she let her head slump onto his shoulders, hanging onto him for dear life. Punctuating each word with a thrust, he snarled, “You are mine, Ginevra Weasley,” to which she could only assent, pressing tiny kisses on his neck and shoulders as she cried his name out and came.
In the grip of dissatisfaction, Lucius gorged himself on Ginevra's flesh—against the wall, over the chair, on her knees on the floor. The more he took from her, the more she gave. The harder he pushed her, the more she yielded. Finally, they ended in the bed.
He laid back and watched her astride him, her eyes closed in concentration, breasts shining with sweat and bouncing with her efforts. As he gripped her hips and pulled her down sharply, she hissed slightly at the almost painful pressure, and a half-smile broke over her face as she arched the column of her neck back wantonly, her hair falling behind her to drag on his legs.
Here it was then, the crux of what was between then, something both simpler and more complex than mere sentiment: his desire to master and her yearning to be mastered. He had no use for love, but he may well have had use for this, if only the game he and Ginevra played had been just between the two of them.
There was no more time for thinking as Ginevra moaned softly and slumped down on him, exhausted. Wrapping her to him tightly, he continued to drive into her until his own exhaled hiss, and then, for the first time, he fell into sleep with her in his big bed.
Ginny sat composed as Narcissa entered the room. Her hair was braided sleekly, and she wore smart new black robes. Her expression was bland, but her pallor showed somewhat as her freckles were more prominent than usual. Still, Narcissa thought, good game face.
“I take it he did not tell you?” she inquired gently.
“No, the house-elf told me. I am ready to leave,” Ginny replied without inflection. Narcissa felt a small twinge of pride. It would take a most astute observer to recognize that tone as despair and not snobbery.
“This is what shall occur--I myself will Apparate you to a secure location. Once you are left there, you may use a Portkey, which will take you back to your family.”
Ginny nodded slowly as Narcissa went on. “I must also tell you that we have a bit before we depart, and I must prepare. However, there may be someone that you would wish to see on the last door to your right, and I am sometimes forgetful about warding this door.” And, opening the door in question, Narcissa left.
Ginny could actually hear her blood roaring in her ears as she turned the knob of the last door on the right, opening it to reveal Lucius' study, just as it had been the first day of her capture.
He stood in front of the fireplace, and at her small hitch of breath, he turned and began to icily reprimand the intruder. “I believe I made it quite clear,” he began, only to stop at the sight of her. “Ginevra,” he said simply.
Without consideration or forethought, Ginny rushed across the room. Once in Lucius' arms, her mind filled with thoughts from the bathroom, seemingly so long ago now. This could be the end. Then, she was concerned with her life. Now, she was worried about something else, and since it was the end, she disregarded the consequences, pressing her lips to Lucius' and burying her fingers in his silvery hair as she pulled his face to hers.
At the slight sound, Lucius turned angrily. Narcissa or house-elf, he wanted no part of them at the moment, but when he turned, he instead found Ginevra. This was a tranquil, serene little thing, neatly braided and dressed, quite unlike his knickerless, squealing little witch. Before he could speak, he found himself with an armful of the girl he was familiar with, a Ginevra kissing him with abandon and whispering, “Goodbye, Lucius. Oh, goodbye.”
He assumed it was the surprise that caused him to kiss her back greedily, and as she sighed goodbye, he growled, “For now, Ginevra.” When he let her go, she took a deep breath and smoothed her hair and robes, suddenly that placid creature again. Then she flashed him a wicked smile.
“For now, Lucius,” she said, and then she was gone.
I'm just like an apple on a bough
And you're gonna shake me down somehow.
So, what's the use, you've cooked my goose
'Cause you took advantage of me!
I'm so hot and bothered that I don't
Know my elbow from my ear.
I suffer something awful each time you go
And much worse when you're near.
Here I am with all my bridges burned,
Just a babe in arms where you're concerned.
So lock the doors and call me yours
'Cause you took advantage of me.
- Lorenz Hart & Richard Rogers, ”You Took Advantage of Me”
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Latest 25 Reviews for An Apple On A Bough
31 Reviews | 3.81/10 Average
A very good story, it gives the reader a lot to think about.
It's a bit late to start trying to " raise Draco right" he is what he is. Narcissais grooming Ginny, but what for.
What is Narcssia trying to do to Ginny?is she turning her into a "sleeper spy"?I will read on and see.
Lucius is showing signs of having feelings for Ginny, not sure if Ginny is still being given potions.
Maybe there is still a little bit of ''Tom'' left in Ginny, she has succombed very quickly.
Narssia has this down to a fine art, understanding wife indeed.
This is why Harry wanted to end it with Ginny, so she would not be a target or a weapon, now she could be both.
This story gave me a similar vibe as Ang Lee's film "Lust, Caution". Have you ever seen that?
Anyway, I've never been a L/G fan but your story made it work, as the other reviewers have said. It's dark, twisted, but it somehow made sense.
I really liked this story. I wasn't sure how I felt, initially, but I came to really like it and I am sad that Ginny is leaving. It is an odd relationship, but it works. I would like you to continue you, maybe as a sequel. Showing Ginny when she gets back to her family, thinking of Lucius. If they get back together. Either case, it is a really good story.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm so glad you liked the story!I am working on some short L/G ficlets right now, and then I will be writing a sequel.
That was a truly excelent story. I sincerely urge you to write a sequel.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Thank you so much!!! I have a sequel in mind, but I'm not so good at self-motivation. I need a deadline looming over my head before I actually do things.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Lucius/Ginny isn't one of my favorite pairings generally, but this was very well written. I also loved Narcissa's characterization. Kudos to you!
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm so happy you liked it!
Great story and I love the way you ended it. We can each imagine what might happen a few weeks or months down the road if they meet again....unless, of course, your muse could be bribed into a sequel
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! I have some ideas for a sequel, it's just a matter of getting them out of my head!
i love this story i read them at work.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Thanks for your review. I'm glad that you liked it.
Response from lamorea_snape (Reviewer)
I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THEM ITS REALLY GOOD . NOT TO SAY I LOVE LUCIUS AND HIM AND GINNY IS GOOD. ARE THEY GETTING TOGETHEIR AGAIN?
Wow. Hot and sexy, but a little sad as well. I liked it all but I think I really liked your Narcissa and the kind of marriage she and Lucius had. Somehow I can imagine it ringing true. Is there any chance you plan a sequel? It could be fun... Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Narcissa was kind of a surprise for me; I didn't really plan on her having a very big role originally. Yes, I am planning another story, I just have to make myself do it.
Is that ending then? I wonder what sort of ransom was paid for Ginny's release? Do you think Ginny & Lucius are able to get together some time in the future? What would Narcissa think? Oh my! I have enjoyed this story. Thank you
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm glad you liked it! I'm going to try to do a sequel so maybe I can answer some of your questions. And that little face totally doesn't look like a wink, does it?
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
WHERE OH WHERE is my sequel? Have you found a new love? Ditched this story line?
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I was actually working on the sequel again, but then we bought a house and with that and moving... I will get back on it, I promise. Knowing that people actually want to read it helps.
Anonymous
Great Ending!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
hmmmm...so what isn't Lucius telling Ginny? And how thick into the middle of it is Narcissa? Does it have anything to do with why she'd be coaching Ginny on manners?
And so the plot thickens. I do wonder what the issue is that Lucius has not told Ginny of. Perhaps the dark lord is losing his battle? I do enjoy the unflattering look at Draco. I can see him becoming a spoilt brat. Lead on!
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I enjoyed making Draco a whiny baby, and I'm glad you liked it as well. One more chapter to go!
Anonymous
Yeah I hope you continue to do more like this. I´m a little bit tired of Draco and Ginny or Draco and Hermione or Hermione or Snape.
I think Lucius is a great charecter and put him with Ginny or Hermione it´s just brilhant.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wish there was more Lucius/Ginny out there.
Obviously Lucius will read the letter before it goes to Molly…Im with Ginny, whatever will she say? I am being drugged, raped but well fed? Goodness. I worry about Narcissa and what she is doing to Ginny. Is she playing with her mind as if she was a toy, or protecting her wifely position?? So many questions I have! Thank you for the speedy update.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Thanks for reading and reviewing... and I hope that as the story goes on your questions will get answered.
Anonymous
Great story....original, and all. Please continue...
Author's Response: Thank you! I am finished with this story; the chapters are just winding their way through the queue. Then I have to write the next one. D:
hmmmm....and what little games does Narcissa like to play when she's bored? Is she somehow trying to set up or get even with her husband?
Ginny's having a good time (even if she doesn't want to admit it) and now Lucius has to go and spoil it by making her think of her Mum.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Yeah, Lucius really killed the mood. Nobody wants to think about their mom when they are getting it on.
Anonymous
It´s just me or Lucius is start to fall in love with Ginny? I really d´like to see that...
Those are some powerful potions they have given Ginny. She seems to be so close to touching reality and then it grabs her back again. I wonder how long she has been there?
Oh this was a short chapter! Was Ginny targeted to be captured or did the DE just get lucky? I assume one of the potions Narcissa administered was a contraceptive? Cant see her wanting any bastard heirs mucking up the family fortune. I look forward to the next chapter
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Thanks for all the reviews! The chapters are winding their way through the queue, as the lovely admins have to correct all my grammar...It's those darn commas!