Chapter 5
Chapter 5 of 7
themadmermaidGinny Weasley is captured by Lucius Malfoy, but holding her hostage does not work out as either of them expect.
ReviewedWearing only Lucius' too-large dress shirt and pigtails, Ginny sat cross-legged in the middle of the bed and attempted to play Exploding Snap by herself. The game was not turning out to be a success. Not only was it spectacularly boring, but her mind was on other things to start with.
The door was opened, and Narcissa was in the room before Ginny even noticed. She tried to mask her surprise while she grasped for something even vaguely appropriate to say.
Narcissa stood at the foot of the bed. “You look well... if not well-rested,” she said archly. Ginny kept her face impassive, and Narcissa laughed. “No blush? How you've grown in just a short while, Miss Weasley!”
She sat on the bed and assumed a more serious expression. “All joking aside, I came to see exactly how you are faring.” With this brisk statement, Narcissa's features sharpened in concentration as she focused on Ginny. Ginny felt Narcissa flip lightly through her thoughts, like one would skim a book, and she started violently.
Narcissa raised both hands placatingly. “Now, now. I suspected that you have had little Legilimency or Occlumency training...” She trailed off questioningly, and Ginny set her jaw and shook her head.
“I also suspected that you are not finding your stay here as unpleasant as you first imagined?” she further queried. Ginny shook her head again, but this shake was accompanied by a faint blush, and Ginny began to worry her bottom lip between her teeth.
Narcissa chuckled at this. “Valiant effort, but you're starting to slip a bit. You have some natural talent at deception, but you definitely need instruction.” She stood and looked at Ginny appraisingly. “Some proper clothes, too. Lucius may enjoy keeping you mostly unclad, but I myself have other tastes.”
Ginny was staring at Narcissa with open puzzlement. Breaking her silence, she asked, “Why are you doing this?”
This prompted a genuine laugh from Narcissa. “Because, darling,” she said with fake hauteur, “I bore easily, and I love to play games. I rather think we should start at the beginning.”
Ginny awoke and blinked at the ceiling as she lay unmoving. She wondered if it was possible to bruise one's brain. Despite her nap, she was still tired. You're pathetic, Weasley, she scolded herself. All you do is sleep and fuck.
A rustling of paper caused her to sit up in the bed. Lucius sat on one of the room's small couches, reading The Daily Prophet. He flicked her a glance over the top of the paper before returning his attention to it. “Good afternoon, Ginevra,” he said smoothly.
She responded in kind, trying not be distracted by the front page before her. Next to the headline 'STILL MISSING,' her photograph was gesturing wildly over her shoulder to Lucius and making a shocking variety of lascivious gestures. “Oh, for Merlin's sake, stop!” she exclaimed without thinking and then bit her lip in consternation.
Lowering the paper, Lucius looked at her in mystification before seeing the direction of her scowl. His lips twitched ever so slightly, as if suppressing a smirk. “Ah, yes. Quite one of the most interesting articles I have read in this pathetic rag,” he said.
With that, he began folding the pathetic rag in question. “You must write a letter to your mother,” he said without preamble.
No matter her morning's instruction with Narcissa, Ginny felt her jaw drop and her mouth actually fall open. “My mother?” she repeated disbelievingly.
Lucius regarded her levelly. “Ransom negotiations generally progress more smoothly when it can be assured that the hostage is, shall we say, in one piece.”
Ginny, trying to make sense of her whirling thoughts, absently repeated in a slow voice, “Hostage.”
Standing and approaching the bed, Lucius told her, “Hostage, yes.”
Ginny felt dull and mesmerized, and she heard herself say thickly, “Do you fuck all your hostages?”
“If it pleases me," he said easily, throwing back the bedclothes. Taking in her Muggle t-shirt and sweatpants, he paused and raised an eyebrow at her.
“Narcissa came by to talk to me,” she said guilelessly. “She seemed to prefer that I be dressed.”
“To talk to you,” Lucius said in a tone of voice that made it clear his thoughts on that phrase's veracity. Ginny merely smiled and, dragging her towards the edge of the bed, Lucius dropped the subject.
Following the prompting of his pushing and pulling, Ginny found herself bent over the edge of the bed, her upper body resting on the mattress. Standing behind her, Lucius slid the waistband of her pants down past her buttocks, stopping to remark on her bare skin. “No knickers, Ginevra?”
“Didn't ask for any,” she said in a muffled voice, as her face was rather pressed into the bed.
“I cannot say that I am surprised, Miss Weasley,” he replied, running his hands over her exposed flesh. Pressing her into the bed with his hips and leaning over her, crushing her with his weight, he asked her, “Would you like me to fuck you, hostage?”
She was already squirming her hips against him. “Fuck me, Lucius.”
Lucius was amused by Ginevra's obvious struggle to remain awake after they had finished. Standing by the bed, he was adjusting his robes and hair when she laboriously sat up. She wearily pawed her tangled mess of red hair back from her face and said softly, “A letter.”
“Indeed,” responded Lucius.
Unexpectedly, her freckled face crumpled. “Whatever will I say to her?” she asked in a small, quivering voice.
Lucius was taken aback and did not immediately respond. He found that he was not happy that she was upset. Not that he really felt sympathy, but the idea of sparring with and fucking a weepy, melancholy Ginevra held no appeal. He was also irritated that despite her unabashed enthusiasm in coupling with him, the imagined censure of her mother would cause her distress. He would prefer that it were not so, and the idea of her attempting to dismiss him from her mind increased his disturbance.
Lucius sat down near the bed. “Come here, Ginevra,” he said. She did so slowly, not quite weeping but leaking a few tears from her eyes. She perched on his knees when he tugged her down, pulling her t-shirt down to cover her bare bottom.
He looked at her and said seriously, “You will write to her whatever you wish, Ginevra. The letter will be owled, and then you will continue to do whatever you wish. Yes?”
She looked back at him gravely and said, “Yes, Lucius.” He let the silence linger a moment longer and then grabbed her up and put her over his knees, bare ass on display.
“I have some very strong suspicions about the things you wish,” he said in a low voice, running his hands over her skin. “In fact," he continued, stroking the insides of her thighs, “I believe I know exactly what you want, little girl.” He waited until she was wriggling and breathing hard before he paused his fingers.
“But, Ginevra, you must write a letter,” he reminded her. He smacked her ass smartly several times, being sure to angle his hand to catch the pink folds of her sex with each hit. When he raised her up and stood himself, he paused for a moment to admire the flush of her cheeks. “Quill and parchment are in the desk,” he said, and he left her to it.
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Latest 25 Reviews for An Apple On A Bough
31 Reviews | 3.81/10 Average
A very good story, it gives the reader a lot to think about.
It's a bit late to start trying to " raise Draco right" he is what he is. Narcissais grooming Ginny, but what for.
What is Narcssia trying to do to Ginny?is she turning her into a "sleeper spy"?I will read on and see.
Lucius is showing signs of having feelings for Ginny, not sure if Ginny is still being given potions.
Maybe there is still a little bit of ''Tom'' left in Ginny, she has succombed very quickly.
Narssia has this down to a fine art, understanding wife indeed.
This is why Harry wanted to end it with Ginny, so she would not be a target or a weapon, now she could be both.
This story gave me a similar vibe as Ang Lee's film "Lust, Caution". Have you ever seen that?
Anyway, I've never been a L/G fan but your story made it work, as the other reviewers have said. It's dark, twisted, but it somehow made sense.
I really liked this story. I wasn't sure how I felt, initially, but I came to really like it and I am sad that Ginny is leaving. It is an odd relationship, but it works. I would like you to continue you, maybe as a sequel. Showing Ginny when she gets back to her family, thinking of Lucius. If they get back together. Either case, it is a really good story.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm so glad you liked the story!I am working on some short L/G ficlets right now, and then I will be writing a sequel.
That was a truly excelent story. I sincerely urge you to write a sequel.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Thank you so much!!! I have a sequel in mind, but I'm not so good at self-motivation. I need a deadline looming over my head before I actually do things.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Lucius/Ginny isn't one of my favorite pairings generally, but this was very well written. I also loved Narcissa's characterization. Kudos to you!
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm so happy you liked it!
Great story and I love the way you ended it. We can each imagine what might happen a few weeks or months down the road if they meet again....unless, of course, your muse could be bribed into a sequel
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! I have some ideas for a sequel, it's just a matter of getting them out of my head!
i love this story i read them at work.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Thanks for your review. I'm glad that you liked it.
Response from lamorea_snape (Reviewer)
I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THEM ITS REALLY GOOD . NOT TO SAY I LOVE LUCIUS AND HIM AND GINNY IS GOOD. ARE THEY GETTING TOGETHEIR AGAIN?
Wow. Hot and sexy, but a little sad as well. I liked it all but I think I really liked your Narcissa and the kind of marriage she and Lucius had. Somehow I can imagine it ringing true. Is there any chance you plan a sequel? It could be fun... Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Narcissa was kind of a surprise for me; I didn't really plan on her having a very big role originally. Yes, I am planning another story, I just have to make myself do it.
Is that ending then? I wonder what sort of ransom was paid for Ginny's release? Do you think Ginny & Lucius are able to get together some time in the future? What would Narcissa think? Oh my! I have enjoyed this story. Thank you
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I'm glad you liked it! I'm going to try to do a sequel so maybe I can answer some of your questions. And that little face totally doesn't look like a wink, does it?
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
WHERE OH WHERE is my sequel? Have you found a new love? Ditched this story line?
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I was actually working on the sequel again, but then we bought a house and with that and moving... I will get back on it, I promise. Knowing that people actually want to read it helps.
Anonymous
Great Ending!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
hmmmm...so what isn't Lucius telling Ginny? And how thick into the middle of it is Narcissa? Does it have anything to do with why she'd be coaching Ginny on manners?
And so the plot thickens. I do wonder what the issue is that Lucius has not told Ginny of. Perhaps the dark lord is losing his battle? I do enjoy the unflattering look at Draco. I can see him becoming a spoilt brat. Lead on!
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
I enjoyed making Draco a whiny baby, and I'm glad you liked it as well. One more chapter to go!
Anonymous
Yeah I hope you continue to do more like this. I´m a little bit tired of Draco and Ginny or Draco and Hermione or Hermione or Snape.
I think Lucius is a great charecter and put him with Ginny or Hermione it´s just brilhant.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wish there was more Lucius/Ginny out there.
Obviously Lucius will read the letter before it goes to Molly…Im with Ginny, whatever will she say? I am being drugged, raped but well fed? Goodness. I worry about Narcissa and what she is doing to Ginny. Is she playing with her mind as if she was a toy, or protecting her wifely position?? So many questions I have! Thank you for the speedy update.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Thanks for reading and reviewing... and I hope that as the story goes on your questions will get answered.
Anonymous
Great story....original, and all. Please continue...
Author's Response: Thank you! I am finished with this story; the chapters are just winding their way through the queue. Then I have to write the next one. D:
hmmmm....and what little games does Narcissa like to play when she's bored? Is she somehow trying to set up or get even with her husband?
Ginny's having a good time (even if she doesn't want to admit it) and now Lucius has to go and spoil it by making her think of her Mum.
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Yeah, Lucius really killed the mood. Nobody wants to think about their mom when they are getting it on.
Anonymous
It´s just me or Lucius is start to fall in love with Ginny? I really d´like to see that...
Those are some powerful potions they have given Ginny. She seems to be so close to touching reality and then it grabs her back again. I wonder how long she has been there?
Oh this was a short chapter! Was Ginny targeted to be captured or did the DE just get lucky? I assume one of the potions Narcissa administered was a contraceptive? Cant see her wanting any bastard heirs mucking up the family fortune. I look forward to the next chapter
Response from themadmermaid (Author of An Apple On A Bough)
Thanks for all the reviews! The chapters are winding their way through the queue, as the lovely admins have to correct all my grammar...It's those darn commas!