Looks like the man can finally get some sense knocked into him.  The idea of Snape being sent off to Siberia is utterly perfect, though.  And Hermione's barren state automatically prevents this from becoming too cutesy down the road.  Looking forward to much more!

And the plan has legs!!!!  YAY!!!!!!!!‘No one could ever possibly have enough regard for your so-called dignity to satisfy you, Severus Snape." -- the absolute best line out there.  Too true Minnie!!  ^.~Love it, can't wait for more.

Ahh we get them "together".  Not quite the way it was supposed to go, eh?  hehehe  Just par for the course when it comes to our beloved Severus.Loved the meeting at the Lupins'.  The three of them were great.

THat was a great chapter.  I can't wait to see what Snape has to say about all this. 

Hmm, makes me wonder about the conversation between Snape and McGonigall.  What else did she say to him?  Had to be powerful stuff if it got him to consider Hermione's deal in a good light.   Ack!  Maybe Minerva just smacked him about the head, trying to knock some sense into him?  LMAO!Looking forward to the next chapter, nice job!

Can't wait to hear what the stupidest idea ever actually IS.  Although we all know already, I think.  Of course, if I were trying to guess creatively, I'd argue for...she owes him a life debt and is offering to take his place?

Delicious writing as usual.  Looking forward to the next chapter. 

This is truly brilliant - not just the premise for Hermione to attempt to marry Snape, but the whole business with McGonagall and Moody and all.  Very original and fresh.  I'll be looking forward to future updates!

I am enjoying your story very much.  You've given these favorite characters a new feel.  Hermione is confident, but with moments of insecurity.  Severus is trying, but not totally unreasonable and I like how you have portrayed his relationship with Minerva.  The business they started is also a fresh approach to life in the HP world.  I look forward to seeing everyone’s reaction in the coming chapters.  Good luck and thanks for sharing,

ohh... I'm enchanted with your story and want to read more ASAP! Good job!

Definitely not one of Harry's best moments in this story, but it didn't feel over the top. I forgot to mention how much I love your other "minor" characters in this story, Minerva and the Lupins felt like well-formed characters, but without detracting from the main story. You weaved their characterization into the plot very well.Severus' POV was well done and it worked very well in this chapter- conveying restlessness and agitation. Poor Hermione, it feels like SPEW all over again.

Sheesh! Why can't he accept the fact that he has to get married??? Hmph! I would marry him! *winkwink*lol

LOL!  The next chapter came faster than I thought it would... Anyway, nice chapter again.  The reaction to Hermione's proposal (from Harry to Lupin/Tonks, to Snape himself)  was hilarious.  Now, they all think that she's nuts... certifiable... loopy... gone off her rockers.  She will have to work her arse off to show her good intentions are well thought out... or are they??  O_o Great work as always... next chapter soon?

Yikes!!  They released the DE's to their spouse's and mother's?  They are idiots, aren't they?  I foresee some kind of 'tête-à-tête' between Hermione/Harry and that lot... and maybe a little Snape in the mix?Good stuff, looking forward to the next chapter.  :)

I don't really envy Minerva her upcoming discussion with Severus--even if she did do nothing to deserve his ire.  Another great chapter. 

This continues the way it started; excellent!

I LOVE the whole scene in and entering Minerva's company.  Too great!  And ok, Harry's not a total brat, but he's still got lots and lots of growing up to do.  Guess it's not surprising considering he's only just now able to grow at all.The chapter title is the best tho.  ^.^

Very nice story. Hope to read more soon.

It breaks my heart, what happened to Hogwarts! On the plus side, Snape's allowed to take more showers than he normally would! *snerk*

I love this story. I actually like it even more because of how you portray Harry. Yes he's a tad too simple, but he's loyal in a way that's endearing. I did hate Ron when I first read this fic, but sometimes doing the honorable thing is the worst course of action. The right way is not always painless.

I can't think of anybody better than Moody for a security company. Not so much for the social/sales part of it, but for the solutions part--definitely.

I knew it, I knew it! :D I remember leaving a review for this fic and mentioning that I had a suspicion as to who the author was... and then I doubted it for a while. But then I was sure it was you ;) Though I have to admit that it was partly because I sort of cheated. Cheated meaning the following..... I remember you mentioning in a journal a long time ago something about cell phones and your exchange fic.... and I think your story was the only one where cell phones were used. Oh and one of your icons on your sock puppet account... I recognized it as a variation of an icon you had made for His Draught of Delicate Poison. The one of Severus looking out a window...

Anyways, enough of my inane rambling, haha. I loved this story! It was definitely one of my favorites on the exchange. Oh, my favorites always end up being the ones you write :D I still think the Avada Coladas are brilliant. And Harry is depicted rather accurately in this chapter. Can't wait for the rest of the story to go up :)

And best of luck with the rest of Unseen as well. D-day July 21st, AHH!

Copa...copacabana.....  UNGH!!!! now you have me hearing that song in my head! Good Job!!!!! I can't wait to see what dreadfull song you will leave us with in the next chapter.  Really, seriously, great job update soon.

Avada Colada...freaking hilarious.  Makes me want to make some now actually...

OO OO OO!!!!  I'm tickled pink to see this!  And giggling like mad at Avada Coladas and Lola the Copacabana girl.Of course Harry is being a brat and Severus is being wonderfully Severus-y so it's all just set to go from here.  Can't wait to see more.  

Great start!  I love the little things that you always put in your stories that really add so much.  The Avada Coladas are super!  I laughed out loud when I read that.  And Lola the Copacabana girl--very funny.  I can't wait to read more!