On the Shores of Darkness

purpleygirl

3 Reviews | 9.0/10 (3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Angst Erotica Slash Forbidden Forest 25,520 Words 2 Chapters Complete

Remus Lupin Severus Snape

Only through the Dark can Remus be saved. SS/RL.

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Chapters (2)

Chapter 1: Part One

Chapter 2: Part Two

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Member Since 2006 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 1 | 5 Reviews Written | 46 Review Responses

Likes: To throw obstacles at Snape and watch with morbid fascination.
Dislikes: A sad lack of said obstacles.

I always welcome constructive criticism, if you feel like offering it. :-)

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9/10

Merlinsbeard

I'm not really into slash, very much into Lupin, but I absolutely LOVED this story!

It's great to see the vunerable and needy side of both men. A very emotional story.

Response from purpleygirl (Author of On the Shores of Darkness)

Thank you! :) That's great that you loved it in spite of it being slashy! :D I didn't originally intend to write so much in Lupin's POV, but I hope he wasn't too OOC. I don't find him that easy to write.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and it hit your emotional buttons! ;)

10/10

KingPig

I'm sorry if I sound really dim, but I'm curious as to what Snape was going to say had his finished his line, "...It may already have begun to break down because I have not followed my ur—”

Have not followed his "ur"....? What's the rest of that word? Sorry, again, for my dimness, I'm just dying to know!

Response from purpleygirl (Author of On the Shores of Darkness)

Urges. :) Sorry for being rather cryptic on that! ;)

I hope you enjoyed the story nevertheless. :)

Response from KingPig (Reviewer)

I really did enjoy the story! I love it! And thank you!

8/10

kickthemoon

Really enjoyed this, dark and hopeful at the same time.I'm not too keen on any ship with Snape, because he usually ends up so out of character. But you did well here, he wasn't expressive at all (case in point - 'solicitude'!! He can't even say the word 'love' ).And I like Lupin too, though as I don't tend to read so much of him I can't tell how yours compares to others - I thought he was pretty good however. Good mixture of goodness/vulnerability/strength.

Response from purpleygirl (Author of On the Shores of Darkness)

Thanks! :)

Mmm. I love dark and hopeful! *g*

I can't imagine Snape ever saying that word, so it stands to reason, I figured, the Dark would have their own speshul word for it, to save themselves having to voice it. ;)

I'm glad you liked the Lupin in this, too. I thought he was a bit passive at times, but I guess the circumstances didn't help... *g*

Thanks for commenting!

Response from purpleygirl (Author of On the Shores of Darkness)

Thanks! :)

Mmm. I love dark and hopeful! *g*

I can't imagine Snape ever saying that word, so it stands to reason, I figured, the Dark would have their own speshul word for it, to save themselves having to voice it. ;)

I'm glad you liked the Lupin in this, too. I thought he was a bit passive at times, but I guess the circumstances didn't help... *g*

Thanks for commenting!

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