The Sorting
Chapter 4 of 6
Lady WhitehartThe ickle firsties meet the Sorting hat.
Part 4: The Sorting
Severus stood with the rest of the first years in a small room off of the Great Hall, waiting to go in. His stomach had settled for the most part, and now he was quite starving. Lily stood next to him, shaking from either nervousness or excitement. Every now and then, she would reach out and grab his hand, squeezing it tightly. Each time she did this, his pale cheeks would turn a brilliant shade of red.
He really didn't mind her friendly gestures, although it was starting to get a bit annoying, but he was worried that the stern-faced witch -- who had just introduced herself as Professor McGonagall, the deputy headmistress and the head of Gryffindor House -- would notice and deduct more points from him. Lily, thankfully, had stopped grabbing his hand and now was bouncing up and down on the balls of her feet.
Professor McGonagall was telling them that their House was going to be something like their family while they were at school. Something about earning and losing points was mentioned as she shot pointed looks at Severus, James and Sirius. Severus thought about the fact that he had already lost points for his future House, but then again, so had James and Sirius.
His mind was busy with thoughts about becoming a member of Slytherin House. If the hat refused to put him in there because he was a half-blood, then he was hoping for a place in Ravenclaw. Gryffindor was not an option, and Hufflepuff was even less appealing. Besides, he was sure if he ended up in either Gryffindor or Hufflepuff, his uncle might refuse to pay one Knut towards his expenses.
The doors to the Great Hall swung open, and Professor McGonagall was commanding them to follow her. The first-years filed in behind the deputy headmistress. The sight before them was so wondrous that even Severus found himself staring open-mouthed. The ceiling had been bewitched to look like the clear night sky, just like the one outside. Four long tables ran the length of the room, and across the front was the staff table. A tall man with a waist-length white beard introduced himself as Professor Dumbledore, Headmaster. He welcomed the first-years warmly as Professor McGonagall brought out a stool and a ratty old hat. To his surprise, it immediately broke into song.
Long, long ago
when I was new,
were four close friends
with talent true.
A wizarding school
was their great desire:
a place to teach,
shelter, inspire.
Now they're gone,
but what does remain
is a House bearing
each founder's name.
Each House is unique
as you will learn.
Listen, as I describe
them each in turn.
The first is Slytherin,
where you will find
those of ambition and
cunning mind.
Next is Hufflepuff,
the salt of the earth,
where fairness and toil
have the most worth.
In Ravenclaw reigns
wisdom and lore,
scholarship and
knowledge pure.
Gryffindor takes only
the bravest ones:
daring daughters and
courageous sons.
It's now my task
to sort each student.
My methods are both
time-honored and prudent.
A look at your thoughts
and I will know,
into which house
you ought to go.
One final thought
I give to you:
always be loyal,
always be true.
Hogwarts is now
your family.
Try to live in
peace and harmony.
Now place me upon
your darling head.
There's nothing to fear,
nothing to dread.
The process should only
take a minute.
That's right, step up,
and let's begin it!
First, a girl was sorted into Ravenclaw and two boys went to Hufflepuff. Sirius Black was the fourth student to be sorted. The hat took its time trying to decide where best to put the young Mr. Black. Finally the word "Gryffindor" rang out, and the Slytherin table hissed with a smattering of whispers. Severus dared to glance at Bellatrix Black and Lucius Malfoy. Both of them seemed to be deep in conversation. Bella glared with contempt at her younger cousin as he returned her look defiantly.
Severus missed the next few sortings as he tried to determine why Black would want to be in another House. Surely the hat should have shouted out Slytherin before it even touched his head!
"Evans, Lily!"
Severus gave his traveling companion an encouraging grin as she climbed up onto the stool. The hat took only a few seconds to make the decision to put her in Gryffindor. Severus felt his stomach drop to his knees. Suddenly, he was overcome with a surge of defiance. For a brief instant, he wanted nothing more than to become a member of Gryffindor. Then his senses started coming back: he had no choice but to be in Slytherin if he wanted to receive a magical education.
Several other students were sorted before the Lupin boy made his way to the stool. The skinny boy's face looked positively green with anxiety. The Sorting Hat took only a moment to decide that Lupin should be a Gryffindor.
"Pettigrew, Peter!" The round boy stumbled going up the step, falling flat on his face. A Hufflepuff spot seemed to be guaranteed to him. Surprised mumbling broke out when he was announced as a Gryffindor.
"Potter, James!" The hat didn't even touch his head before it shouted, "Gryffindor!"
"Rosier, Evan!" The boy swaggered up to take his place on the stool. He joined the Slytherin table.
"Sinistra, Aurora!" A pretty, dark-haired girl walked past Severus; she, too, was sorted into Slytherin.
"Snape, Severus!" The boy felt his knees go weak as he made his way to the stool. The hat fell down over his eyes.
"Oh my, what an interesting combination we have here! Courage aplenty, a very brilliant mind, cunning to be sure, ambition, and a strong sense of loyalty. Where to put you?" The hat's voice echoed strangely in Severus's head.
Slytherin, Severus thought firmly.
Are you sure? it asked. A mind like yours would be right at home in Ravenclaw, I think.
No, Slytherin, I have to be in Slytherin.
But you have a lot of courage, my little friend. You already have one friend in Gryffindor; you could eventually have more.
Lily and I can still be friends. Just put me in Slytherin already, Severus demanded.
I see I wasn't wrong about the strong sense of loyalty. Definitely not afraid of hard work. Perhaps Hufflepuff would be a good place for you.
Severus was on the verge of ripping the hat from his head, thinking furiously, Don't you even dare consider sticking me in there with those duffers! Now say 'Slytherin,' and let me go!
Obviously, with a nasty temper like that, Hufflepuff wouldn't work out. Please, consider Gryffindor. You have so many of the fine qualities that embody that House.
Don't you understand? I want to become somebody important, to do something phenomenal, and the only way I can do that is to be in Slytherin!
Ambitious and persistent, the hat said finally. If you are sure, my dear boy, then I will place you as you ask.
Get on with it then.
"Slytherin!" the hat shouted to the student body. Relief flooded his mind as Severus pulled the irritating hat off of his head. He glanced briefly at the Gryffindor table, only to see Lily's disappointed face looking at him. He tried to convince himself that it didn't matter; they could still be friends. Yet, out of the corner of his eye, he saw the Potter boy tossing him a look of deepest hatred.
Glaring back at him, Severus made his way to the Slytherin table. Evan Rosier grudgingly made a space for him. He turned up his nose at the sight of Severus's worn and faded school robe. Severus tossed his hair back out of his face, refusing to be intimidated. He waited out the rest of the Sorting with his stomach growling. When the last few students had been sorted, every kind of food imaginable appeared on the tables. Severus joined his peers in the amazing feast.
At the end of the meal, Severus staggered to his feet, feeling full and sleepy. He dutifully followed along with the others as Lucius Malfoy readied to lead them to the Slytherin dormitory. As they exited the Great Hall, he craned his neck, looking for Lily. Severus wasn't paying attention and walked into the person in front of him.
"Watch were you are going, Serveus!" snarled one of the Lestrange brothers, brushing at his robes as if the younger boy had contaminated them.
"My name is Severus," he snarled back. "As in the Roman emperor, Lucius Septimius Severus, who reconstructed Hadrian's wall."
"I highly doubt," began Bellatrix Black, tossing back her thick, dark hair, "your Muggle father would be that clever."
Mother of Merlin, how did she find out? Had she just overheard a bit of family gossip or... Potter! Potter must have been listening outside the compartment door when he had been telling Lily about his family on the train. He had then, more than likely, told Black, who in turn had told Bella and Lucius just to get back at him. If those boys wanted to ensure that he was never accepted in Slytherin, then making his parentage known would be the way to do it. His face turned red with anger, and he blurted out, "Unlike your cousin, I'm clever enough to be in Slytherin."
"How dare you, you filthy little snot!" Bella sputtered in fury. Apparently, Severus had struck a nerve with the girl.
"Enough, Bella," Lucius said firmly, taking hold of her shoulders and turning to the younger boy. "I think little Severus here may be of some use to us. I loved the Hair-Growing Hex you used on Sirius. I hear you managed to tip him into the lake as well, and you got that little brat, Potter, also. Mind you, I don't appreciate 'ickle firsties' who cause Slytherin to lose points, so watch your step from now on."
"I will," Severus said, grinning slightly. A compliment from Malfoy could only mean that the prefect was impressed with him.
They were at the foot of the main staircase when the Gryffindor prefects came by with their first years in tow. Severus caught sight of Lily Evans and waved slightly, trying to reassure her that he still wanted to be friends. Her face lit up with a smile when she noticed him in the crowd.
Somehow the two groups became intermingled as they passed each other. Severus hoped to get close enough to Lily that she might squeeze his hand just one more time. He also wanted to reassure her that the fact that they were in two different Houses was in no way going to affect their newfound friendship. Instead he found himself confronted by Potter and Black. The two boys were threateningly close to him, wands in hand, ready to jinx Severus at the least bit of provocation.
Potter spoke in a tone that would have been menacing if his voice wasn't so high pitched. "Keep away from her, Snivellus, she's a Gryffindor."
"She's going to figure out sooner or later that you're nothing but trouble. We'll make sure of it," Black said, shoving him with his shoulder.
Severus moved to whip out his wand when he felt a very firm hand on his shoulder. It was the headmaster, peering down at him with very serious blue eyes. Severus had the oddest sensation, almost as if the old man knew what he was thinking.
"Is there a problem, gentlemen?" he asked, looking at each of them in turn.
There was a mumbled chorus of "No, sir," as Black and Potter scurried off to join their House.
"Is there anything you wish to tell me, Mr. Snape?" the headmaster asked, his eyes twinkling as he watched Severus.
"No, sir."
"Professor McGonagall has spoken with me about the incident at the dock. Remember that your choices are just as important as your abilities. Do you understand?" The blue eyes seemed to look right through him, causing Severus to shiver.
"I understand, sir." He nodded.
"Very good." The headmaster raised his voice. "Mr. Malfoy! You seemed to have misplaced one of your charges in the shuffle. I would hate for him to get lost on his way to the dormitory."
Malfoy beckoned to him. "You there, come along."
Severus hurried to catch up with the group of Slytherins as they headed down to the dungeons. He had the oddest feeling that he was being stared at. When he looked back over his shoulder, he saw Headmaster Dumbledore watching him with an intense look on his lined, old face. The look was similar to the one his mother had had on her face when he had left with his uncle earlier that morning. With a slight shrug of his shoulders, Severus turned to follow Malfoy and the others to his new home in the dungeons of Hogwarts.
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17 Reviews | 8.65/10 Average
Another great chapter! He fights back, is clever, a bit too hasty , devious, has a mind of his own, fantastic!
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
I'm not a fan of helpless victim Snape that was portrayed in the OotP movie, and will not be writing him as such.
I think you have done a really lifelike explanation of the Snape vs PotterSirius conflict. My brother was picked on terrribly by a group of Potter/Blacks, for the reasons that he wasn't afraid to be himself, didn't suck up to them and didn't have a wealthy family. This started when he was 10, their male teacher encouraged and condoned their behaviour ( I was told this about 6years later by another teacher at the school whose kids I was friends with). I cannot see James Potter and Sirius Black as the heroes JKR wants us to see them as.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
How awful for your brother!Rowling made it really hard to see Sirius and especially James as heros by only letting us see the worst of them in their younger years.
What an excellent use of the broom-riding memory! My own thoughts had been that it was something that had happened on Spinner's End and that it was done on purpose to amuse Lily. Makes more sense that it was a prank pulled on him in class to humiliate. But, oh, his poor nose!
Lilly must have been someone special for Severus to love her for so many years. I'm glad she is being shown as such a sweet and caring young lady.
It's so hard to read of Severus as a youngster, all the bad choises he will make........
Hmmm, I think the teacher unwittingly added fuel to the fire. Very good flow in the story.
It makes sense that James is jealous of Severus, a lot of bullies are insecure (and no matter what any one says James is a bully in my opinian).
Good start, I loved the accidental meeting.
This is off to an excellent start! I love these first glimpses of how things start off wrong between Severus and the Marauders.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thanks firefly. I'm trying to decided how canon compliamt I should make it. Thoughts?
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
I guess that depends on how badly you hated DH. I think it would be interesting to try to be canon compliant and add some depth to the fragmented memories we saw. It would also be interesting to just go AU and see where that leads. That's probably not all that helpful.
I usually don't read anything other than SS/HG, but this story, and the one before it has capivated me.I'd suggest posting them under the same name. I have a series of one-shots that I have written, and it would make it easier to keep grouped together than have them scattered throughout your list of published fics. I would have grouped my own, but RL has made writing rather erratic for me, so I've left it as it is.This is a wonderful series, and I can't wait for the day that William gets what's coming to him.Keep up the good work!
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
I'm glad you tried something new and enjoyed it. Don't worry William will become a victim of his bad Karma. Thanks for the advice. The problem I run into is I don't always write a fic in order. When a scene comes to me, I write it down before I lose it. Unfortunately my Muse has issues with sequence. the Queen of Squick's response: LOL you sound like me.I'm working on a fic at the moment, and I've got the middle and the ending done, but now I have to put my nose to the grindstone and write the beginning and the bit between the middle and end. I'm so lazy... lolGood luck, and if you need someone to bounce plot off, contact me through my userpage.-Liz, the Queen of Squick
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Yay! I'm not the only one with a squentially challenged Muse. LOLHere's hoping you're not sorry for offering the invitation.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
I'm glad you tried something new and enjoyed it. Don't worry William will become a victim of his bad Karma. Thanks for the advice. The problem I run into is I don't always write a fic in order. When a scene comes to me, I write it down before I lose it. Unfortunately my Muse has issues with sequence. the Queen of Squick's response: LOL you sound like me.I'm working on a fic at the moment, and I've got the middle and the ending done, but now I have to put my nose to the grindstone and write the beginning and the bit between the middle and end. I'm so lazy... lolGood luck, and if you need someone to bounce plot off, contact me through my userpage.-Liz, the Queen of Squick
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Yay! I'm not the only one with a squentially challenged Muse. LOLHere's hoping you're not sorry for offering the invitation.
Not bad. I think you should make the chapters fit in with this story. The ending was kind of abrupt. Another chapter will fill it out.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thanks for the advice. That's likely what I'll do.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thanks for the advice. That's likely what I'll do.
I'm liking this story just as it is, so I'm glad you've decided to continue with it as it is. I like that you added in the unfairness pre-Sorting. A detention seems a bit much just for a smile. Minerva certainly doesn't see it that way, but what other way could an 11yo see it?
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Once upon a time I was a grade school teacher (scary thought) and that is exactly how they see everything. don't worry young Severus and McGonagall will make up sooner or later. A large portion of the key chapters are already written and to a point they work with canon. I couldn't see scrapping all of that work. (OK, I like it better than creepy, stalker-in-training Severus. Here's hoping people agree.)
I'm glad you decided to go forward with this. It's very sweet and I enjoyed this chapter a lot.
Lovely story, I'd love to read more of it. =)
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thank you for enjoying it. I just added another chapter.
Bellatrix father was a cousin to Orion Black, Sirius' father; they were not brothers. You wrote: "My brother's eldest son will be starting at Hogwarts this year as well.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thank you for pointing that out. I've made the adjustment. The original was written and posted elsewhere prior to the BFT being released, which is why Bella is at school with the Marauders. I consider BFT 'canon-ish'. The same goes for all interviews with Rowling. And before it's forgotten, thank you for reviewing.
This is so good! I love "Eileen's Hope" too.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I have several chapters that my beta is picking over right now. so there is much more to come.
I'm a bit tardy on the review, but everyone tends to get a little lost in the shuffle, eh?Happy to see a new chapter up;) and thanks for that. Still appreciating your well written story. And with all the HBP and DH death and torture, it's great to be able to read the relative innocence of everyone as a bunch of Firsties.