Already in Trouble
Chapter 3 of 6
Lady WhitehartThe firsties arrive at Hogwarts, and the hexes fly.
A/N: I've been thinking about this, and I've come to the decision not to make this bend to strictly fit DH canon. There are several chapters already completed, and this was made to be a continuation of Eileen's Hope, which has already been semi-shafted by the new canon. Hope you don't mind. Read and enjoy. Reviewing is desired but not required.
Part 3: Already In Trouble
The boats bumped up against the dock on the far side of the lake at the base of the castle. One of the boys behind Severus jumped onto the dock and steadied the boat so the others could climb out. Severus went to step onto the dock when his legs suddenly became weak and went out from under him. He landed with a painful thud on his bum. His legs must be numb from the boat ride.
"Are you all right, Severus?" Lily asked as she scrambled out of the boat.
"I'm fine," he lied, rubbing his legs. He realized that he had been hit with a Jelly-Legs Jinx. He looked to one side to see James Potter bending over, pretending to tie his shoe. Sirius was looking around with a look of mock innocence on his face. One of them had cast the spell; Severus was sure of that. He just had to get them back!
Severus tried to remember the countercurse as he pointed his wand at his legs. Thankfully the jinx was weak and was beginning to wear off by itself. He rose to his feet and followed the rest of the first-years up the winding path to the castle. He kept his eyes on James and Sirius as the two laughed and joked with Remus and Peter. Severus envied their friendship until he realized that Lily was at his elbow, telling him about her parents' reaction to her letter. He wanted to kick himself: he did have a friend and a really good one at that.
"How do they decide what House to put you in, Severus?" Lily asked, curiosity and anxiety evident in her voice.
"My uncle said one of the school relics decides, but he didn't tell me anything else," Severus replied, trying to reassure her.
"So I won't have to do any magic or anything like that, will I?"
"Probably not," Severus mumbled, keeping his eyes on James and Sirius, looking for an opportunity to hex them. Lily seemed to relax a bit.
Before long they were walking into the entry hall of Hogwarts. They were greeted by a stern-faced witch wearing dark brown robes trimmed in plaid. The woman had a very commanding way about her. Her sharp eyes carefully looked the group of first years over. Severus knew right away that she was someone who was not to be trifled with.
She raised her eyebrows at the sight of Sirius Black's wet robes. Hagrid ambled over to her, and they started speaking in hushed tones. The witch's lips immediately formed a thin, angry line.
"You, you and you," she commanded without preamble, pointing at Severus, James, and Sirius in turn. "Follow me."
The three boys followed her obediently. James and Sirius glanced at each other, then at Severus.
Severus kept his head up and his eyes fixed straight ahead. They were just as guilty as he was. He knew that his uncle wouldn't mind him getting into trouble for hexing those two, but his mother would be very disappointed if he managed to receive a detention, or worse, before classes even started. Still, what he had done on the train was self-defense. The incident on the dock would be a little more difficult to explain.
"Now, who are you, and why are your robes dripping wet, young man?" She wheeled around to face them, asking Sirius the first question.
"I'm Sirius Black, Professor." Sirius pointed at Severus. "It's all his fault! He used a Trip Jinx on me at the dock, and I fell in the lake. If Mr. Hagrid hadn't pulled me out, I could have drowned!"
"I see." Her eyebrows contracted. "And your name is?"
"Severus Snape, Professor. One of them used a Jelly-Legs Jinx on me when we got to the castle," Severus quickly added, trying to diffuse some of the blame onto the other boys.
"Only after you used a Leg-Locker Curse on me!" James said abruptly, snapping his mouth shut as the witch glared at him for speaking out of turn. "Sorry, Professor."
"When I want your input, I will ask for it." She spoke so sharply to James that he winced as if he had been physically slapped. "And you are?"
"James Potter, Professor," James whispered, hanging his head contritely.
"Need I remind you that each of you is underage and therefore not allowed to do magic outside of school unless it is under very exacting circumstances. Even though you were technically on school property at the time, you are not to hex another student for any reason. Have I made myself clear?"
"Yes, Professor," they chorused gloomily.
"For your punishment, Mr. Potter, you will lose five points for whichever House you are sorted into," she said harshly. Severus felt a grin breaking across his face. He suppressed it a bit too late. "You, Mr. Snape, will cost your future House ten points, five for each hex. You will also be doing a detention with me; I don't approve of students who find the punishments of another student amusing. Now, back to the group you go."
Severus couldn't believe it -- ten points and a detention. It just wasn't fair! She never asked why he would bother to hex them in the first place. If she had known about the incident on the train, perhaps the punishments would have been handed out more equally. Well, maybe it was for the best that she didn't know about what had transpired on the train. He at least was getting away with casting the Hair-Growing Hex on Sirius. Ten points was less than fifteen points. Still, losing points before he was even sorted wasn't going to endear him to his new House mates, even if they were mildly impressed that a first year knew how to cast curses.
James and Sirius turned to walk away, Sirius's wet robes clinging to his shivering form. The witch stopped the two boys and dried the dripping robes and cast a Warming Charm on them. They were still a bit messy-looking, but they were now warm and dry.
Severus walked moodily in the witch's wake, trying not to think of what a terrible impression he was making already. He wasn't paying attention to where he was going and walked right into her when she stopped.
"For goodness sake, Mr. Snape! Please keep your mind on where you are going. I do have one question before you rejoin your peers." She watched him in a way similar to how hawk would observe its prey. "How does a young wizard learn so many curses even before his first year?"
Severus returned her gaze without flinching. "My uncle taught me, Professor, so I wouldn't get bullied much."
"I see. You do realize, Mr. Snape, that there are ways to solve one's problems other than resorting to the use of curses?" the professor asked pointedly.
Severus stiffened. "Yes, I do, Professor."
"See that you remember that in the future." With a final nod she ushered the grumpy boy back to the group.
A/N: Next up, the Sorting.
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17 Reviews | 8.65/10 Average
Another great chapter! He fights back, is clever, a bit too hasty , devious, has a mind of his own, fantastic!
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
I'm not a fan of helpless victim Snape that was portrayed in the OotP movie, and will not be writing him as such.
I think you have done a really lifelike explanation of the Snape vs PotterSirius conflict. My brother was picked on terrribly by a group of Potter/Blacks, for the reasons that he wasn't afraid to be himself, didn't suck up to them and didn't have a wealthy family. This started when he was 10, their male teacher encouraged and condoned their behaviour ( I was told this about 6years later by another teacher at the school whose kids I was friends with). I cannot see James Potter and Sirius Black as the heroes JKR wants us to see them as.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
How awful for your brother!Rowling made it really hard to see Sirius and especially James as heros by only letting us see the worst of them in their younger years.
What an excellent use of the broom-riding memory! My own thoughts had been that it was something that had happened on Spinner's End and that it was done on purpose to amuse Lily. Makes more sense that it was a prank pulled on him in class to humiliate. But, oh, his poor nose!
Lilly must have been someone special for Severus to love her for so many years. I'm glad she is being shown as such a sweet and caring young lady.
It's so hard to read of Severus as a youngster, all the bad choises he will make........
Hmmm, I think the teacher unwittingly added fuel to the fire. Very good flow in the story.
It makes sense that James is jealous of Severus, a lot of bullies are insecure (and no matter what any one says James is a bully in my opinian).
Good start, I loved the accidental meeting.
This is off to an excellent start! I love these first glimpses of how things start off wrong between Severus and the Marauders.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thanks firefly. I'm trying to decided how canon compliamt I should make it. Thoughts?
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
I guess that depends on how badly you hated DH. I think it would be interesting to try to be canon compliant and add some depth to the fragmented memories we saw. It would also be interesting to just go AU and see where that leads. That's probably not all that helpful.
I usually don't read anything other than SS/HG, but this story, and the one before it has capivated me.I'd suggest posting them under the same name. I have a series of one-shots that I have written, and it would make it easier to keep grouped together than have them scattered throughout your list of published fics. I would have grouped my own, but RL has made writing rather erratic for me, so I've left it as it is.This is a wonderful series, and I can't wait for the day that William gets what's coming to him.Keep up the good work!
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
I'm glad you tried something new and enjoyed it. Don't worry William will become a victim of his bad Karma. Thanks for the advice. The problem I run into is I don't always write a fic in order. When a scene comes to me, I write it down before I lose it. Unfortunately my Muse has issues with sequence. the Queen of Squick's response: LOL you sound like me.I'm working on a fic at the moment, and I've got the middle and the ending done, but now I have to put my nose to the grindstone and write the beginning and the bit between the middle and end. I'm so lazy... lolGood luck, and if you need someone to bounce plot off, contact me through my userpage.-Liz, the Queen of Squick
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Yay! I'm not the only one with a squentially challenged Muse. LOLHere's hoping you're not sorry for offering the invitation.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
I'm glad you tried something new and enjoyed it. Don't worry William will become a victim of his bad Karma. Thanks for the advice. The problem I run into is I don't always write a fic in order. When a scene comes to me, I write it down before I lose it. Unfortunately my Muse has issues with sequence. the Queen of Squick's response: LOL you sound like me.I'm working on a fic at the moment, and I've got the middle and the ending done, but now I have to put my nose to the grindstone and write the beginning and the bit between the middle and end. I'm so lazy... lolGood luck, and if you need someone to bounce plot off, contact me through my userpage.-Liz, the Queen of Squick
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Yay! I'm not the only one with a squentially challenged Muse. LOLHere's hoping you're not sorry for offering the invitation.
Not bad. I think you should make the chapters fit in with this story. The ending was kind of abrupt. Another chapter will fill it out.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thanks for the advice. That's likely what I'll do.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thanks for the advice. That's likely what I'll do.
I'm liking this story just as it is, so I'm glad you've decided to continue with it as it is. I like that you added in the unfairness pre-Sorting. A detention seems a bit much just for a smile. Minerva certainly doesn't see it that way, but what other way could an 11yo see it?
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Once upon a time I was a grade school teacher (scary thought) and that is exactly how they see everything. don't worry young Severus and McGonagall will make up sooner or later. A large portion of the key chapters are already written and to a point they work with canon. I couldn't see scrapping all of that work. (OK, I like it better than creepy, stalker-in-training Severus. Here's hoping people agree.)
I'm glad you decided to go forward with this. It's very sweet and I enjoyed this chapter a lot.
Lovely story, I'd love to read more of it. =)
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thank you for enjoying it. I just added another chapter.
Bellatrix father was a cousin to Orion Black, Sirius' father; they were not brothers. You wrote: "My brother's eldest son will be starting at Hogwarts this year as well.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
Thank you for pointing that out. I've made the adjustment. The original was written and posted elsewhere prior to the BFT being released, which is why Bella is at school with the Marauders. I consider BFT 'canon-ish'. The same goes for all interviews with Rowling. And before it's forgotten, thank you for reviewing.
This is so good! I love "Eileen's Hope" too.
Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Meant to Be... Enemies?)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I have several chapters that my beta is picking over right now. so there is much more to come.
I'm a bit tardy on the review, but everyone tends to get a little lost in the shuffle, eh?Happy to see a new chapter up;) and thanks for that. Still appreciating your well written story. And with all the HBP and DH death and torture, it's great to be able to read the relative innocence of everyone as a bunch of Firsties.