The Mortality Potion

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Romance Potions Under Duress 8,067 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione helps Snape brew a potion to destroy the Dark Lord; they both become a little more attached to each other than before.

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Chapter 1: The Mortality Potion

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0/10

orm irian

This was pretty good, but I thought the ending was a bit abrupt. Also, it seemed odd that she calls him 'sir' just before she kisses him... But a good one shot--vivid interactions and a concise storyline.

9/10

blue artemis

That was well done.

Response from squirrelhappy121 (Author of The Mortality Potion)

Thank you!

7/10

Kore

Meh, this was enjoyable enough, and a pleasant read. I felt that Snape was flashing a few too many smiles thought.

Response from squirrelhappy121 (Author of The Mortality Potion)

Oh geez, do you think? I was trying to make him as snarky as possible.

8/10

LillaQ

You had me hooked from the start! Really exiting story.

Response from squirrelhappy121 (Author of The Mortality Potion)

Thank you! That means a lot!

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