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All Tied Up
averygoodun23 Reviews | 6.7/10 (23 Ratings, 0 Likes, 87 Favorites )
Hermione finds herself in a bit of a bind, especially when someone drops in on her unexpectedly.
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Right. I would like to state, for the record, that I WILL finish "She Married Her Choice". I will. Assuming I am in control of my own destiny and accomplishments, that is. ;-)
Unfortunately, real life (mainly an attention craving three-year-old) and inspiration have been keeping me from creative endeavors for a while now. I do foresee a time when that shall pass, but until then, I ask for your patience.
Thank you!
Reviews for All Tied Up
I loved the story, but, who was the girl that Hermione left him over?
Great fun!
Mmmm, mmmm, good! That was just so perfect! So Slytherin of Severus to seduce her whilst tied up himself. And Ron was in it! I may be a SS/HG shipper, but Ron deserves more credit for himself. I mean, he's always second in everthing he does. He needs credit and love.
But Snape needs way more. Snape suffered through so much, and what does he get? A brutal killing just at the end of the war. He was a hero! A bloody hero, I tell you! And he and Hermione are perfectly matched, as well. And he totally deserves her. I have always thought that Snape was underrated, and it turns out (surprise, surprise) that I was right. Now I feel so sorry for him; unloved, unappreciated, forgotten (except by Harry), abused, loathed and despised (though they're kinda the same things. I ran out of other things). Poor Sev.
Anyway, thanks for yet another wonderful read.
Katie
I love Spider Solitaire and I love Sev and Hermione. Unfortunately, I can't write so I've never had a game of Spider spark such creativity. Great story.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Hee. I love all of those as well. Thank you!
Ooh! Very cute, very hot, and entirely plausible. Well done.
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Thank you!
Great story! It's really rather cute in that slightly weird way. You did an awesome job with the writing aspect as well. ~Jen
Lovely, hot and funny. Very enjoyable.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Thank you!
that's a nice story very well written. thank you for you playing spider solitaire.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Oh, don't thank me for playing Spider! It takes away from writing time! But thank you for the review!
"He'd have to play cards with Weasley more often." I love that, what a great Slytherin twist, thanks for the fun read.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Hee. Thank you!
Somehow, I'm thinking the grandkids would get the PG rated version of this story.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Yes, somehow I think you're right. :D Cheers!
Love it!!! Very original - love the dialogue!
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Thank you!
Nice change to see Ron as helping Severus and Hermione together!
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That's what friends are for! Lol. Thanks!
ROFL I couldn't help but laugh at this because my husband did something very similar to me. When he first asked me to marry him, I told him no (I'd been married before and adamantly refused to go that route again.) We stayed together, though, because he was bound and determined he'd change my mind. One night, he set up a very romantic atmosphere in my apartment that included silk scarves on the bedposts.....and then unrepentedly refused to let me go (or come, as the case may be *snicker*) until I agreed to marry him. Eight years and 3 kids later, I've never been more in love with him.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Hee! That's great!
LOL Such a wonderful tale and short blurb!! Write more of them! Shall *I* start the mantra or 'more'? *evil chuckle*
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Thank you, but I think this is all for this little tale. I'm still writing, though, so there should be more short little tales sometime soonish. :-) Cheers!
That was amusing and entertaining! Thanks for writing it =)
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Thank you!
Very nice. Is this a one shot? Will there be more?
Response from averygoodun (Author of All Tied Up)
Thank you. Yes, this is a one shot, so there won't be more. Where could it go, really?
Excellent. I enjoyed it very much.
I've read this on a different site and just read it for the 2nd time. I enjoyed it just as much as the first time.