I liked this - it was short but got to the point. I know you were doing a 100 word drabble but this could be a story. If so, I would combine Chapters 1-3 as the first chapter. It then has a premise - invites to the party, details - them arguing and plot - she refusing to be demanded upon by him. This was by the way my favorite chapter.

Interesting writing - the only thing that I do not like - I just start getting into it and you end the chapter. Please add a little more text and it would be fantastic.

Interesting first chapter - loved her party invitation - good phrasing.

Ah, there is an "ex" situation here! I am glad you updated this story.

is this finished?  seems un-finished...good so far

UPDATE!!!!!!

The big EX word comes to mind...

ok I will ask...what is their relationship, though I like the mystery :)

brief and to the point.

Maybe they should avoid the party and the stares of their freinds and go someplace amusing for Hallowe'en!Thanks for the update.  I enjoyed it.By the way, Happy Hallowe'en to you!

Aww...it starts to get really good and now there are no more chapters to read! Oh well, I guess I'll just have to wait. Update soon!~Jen

Aww...that was quite cute. Great job so far.~Jen

Hmmm...Hermione's last comment was quite interesting. I must read on and try to solve this mystery.~Jen

Oh, things are definitely getting interesting...great writing so far. ~Jen

Very interesting, but I don't really think Draco and Harry will let her off the hook that easily.~Jen

Cute intro chapter. Loved the postscript comment.~Jen

New tropical depression forming, dead ahead!   Storm warning! Storm warning! 

“You can’t tell me who I can and can’t see. You have no right.  At least not anymore.” Curiouser and curiouser!  I am intrigued.(I think my reviews are so short because of the drabble format.  I don't usually like drabbles, but this is different.) 

What???“I didn’t say you can go,” he said imperiously...And he thinks he has authority to control her actions because...?

Oooooooo! Touched a nerve did we?

OHHH a cliffie!  I hope he takes her to the party.

whoooo!  this gets more and more intriguing.  thanks so much

oops!

::snerk:: like he could tell her what to do.

aw! Thats a shame!