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Chapter 5 of 6
blackaces924Hermione receives an invitation. So does Snape.
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An hour later found Hermione in her own apartment, fixing on a pair of silver earrings.
“How does this look, Shadow?”
A baby black panther padded across the bathroom, twirling its body around her legs and purred most satisfactorily.
“Men can be such gits! I can’t believe that Severus had the nerve to say…” She paused when she saw The Look that Shadow was giving her – sniffing indignantly at the mere notion that his mistress should tar him with the same brush.
“You, darling, are the only exception.” She bent down to hug him and stroke his smooth, shiny coat.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Dateless on Halloween
63 Reviews | 6.35/10 Average
It seems rather obvious that they are trying to make each other jealous. Or maybe jealous is the wrong word - are they trying to show each other that they each are no longer interested in the other? It's been my expereince that that approach rarely works. lol
Hmm. Shadow could be Sev in disguise!
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
HAHA ! Thanks for reading :)
Oh! The plot thickens.
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
more is coming :)
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
more is coming :)
"For Gods sake, Granger, bring a dated" hahahaha :)
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
thanks!
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
thanks!
Anonymous
Oh, I remember when I first read this! You do so much with so little, and I checked constantly for updates... Well, it's taken awhile, but now we have a black panther and the evening is about to properly commence. Rowr!
Would it be too impolite of me to ask for another update... soon?!?!
Author's Response: LOL. Can't tell you how much I love your stories as well, Lulabelle ! ;)
Unfortunately the Muse has gone MIA lately, but I have written the next drabble, so I can promise you another update *grins*
I'm so glad you updated!!!!!!! Please keep up the good work!P.S. A panther????????????
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thank you :) yes, hehe, I thought it would be a good idea. something different :)
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thank you :) yes, hehe, I thought it would be a good idea. something different :)
I like it so far. The panther is charming, yet a bit scary all in one. (Just for the fact that it's a panther.)
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Sorry I haven't properly commented the previous chapters. I was enjoying myself too much.So the two have a history together. Very intriguing. And does Hermione have a date or is she just trying to make Severus jealous. Oh, so curious ...Looking forward to reading more. Cheers. /M
Dear Severus is rather intimidating sometimes.
I am so happy to see the update, I was afraid we had "lost" you:-))Please add more soon????(I just love stories like this that manages to say so much with so few words)
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thank you for your continual support of all my stories,
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
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Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thank you for your continual support of all my stories,
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
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I'm so glad you're not abandonning the story. I understand from the previous chapter that they have a back story together. I hope we will learn more in the future. And I love the baby black panther as a familiar. So much more elegant (and smug. That reminds me of someone...) than a cat.
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thank you
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
! :)
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thank you
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
! :)
Usually I avoid 100-word chapters, since with dial-up internet, it takes longer to load the page than to read it. But i wanted a short-ish bedtime story and this is really pretty good. Thanks for sharing it. you are using your 100 words to give us a lot of informaiton. Loved the invitation and Hermione's response.
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thank you for reading! Hope u enjoyed it :)
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
Thank you for reading! Hope u enjoyed it :)
Cats do have a way of letting us know they are less than pleased with us.
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
thank you for reading and reviewing,
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
:)
Response from blackaces924 (Author of Dateless on Halloween)
thank you for reading and reviewing,
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:)
Ah, the light is dawning on me, very nice.
Ok, why is Severus under the mistaken impression he can tell Hermione where she can go?Nice flow especially for a drabble.
Ohhh I think the boys hit a sore spot with Hermione.
I smell mischif in the air.Good start neat stopping point.
Oh my. Gotta click fast--
And the plot thickens!
Another delightful chapter!
Okay, I'm already officially in luuuuurv with this!
Anonymous
Ah, yes, I remember reading this a while back and thinking, "More?" So glad you gave us this little update. You're very good at the tension between them in situations where they were once together and now are not. I mean, it feels like a rubber band stretched tiiiiiiiight!
So here goes again... More! (not a question this time, notice?) LOL
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing :) I already have V and VI written. so more should be coming. aren't you glad? *evil laugh*
potty and ferret! lol
Good to see you back. "Not anymore" did she said. MMmmm interesting.
Okay good chapter - I hope that you do turn this into a full story - it would be interesting to see what happened between them and what will be between them in the future.