Epilogue
Chapter 4 of 4
phoenixDraco Black has lost everything, including his name. Can he recover from his Fall from Glory and make something of himself?
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Draco’s shop had been open less than a week. Business was by no means brisk, but he had already had a handful of customers. He hoped that word of mouth would improve business. After all, his customers had asked for potions that were generally used less than ethically. If word got out that those types of potions were for sale, it should improve traffic to his shop.
Unfortunately, Phaedra had not ignored him as he had hoped. She had instead insisted on overseeing the opening of the shop. It had been all he could do to keep it from rivaling Madam Puddifoot’s in femininity. He wanted a shop that looked more like Snape’s dungeon; that was the proper look for an apothecary.
In the end he had reached a bit of a compromise with her. It still wasn’t what he had wanted, but it was close enough. And as she turned her attention elsewhere, he could make the subtle changes necessary.
He knew that he had very little time to turn a profit, but he had finally gotten Phaedra to agree to cut costs. Things would be tight, but he had faith that he would succeed.
The bell on the door rang to let him know he had a customer, and he looked up from the books to see the unfortunate sight of Lucius Malfoy. The color drained from his face.
Lucius looked around, disapproval on his face. “How… quaint,” he said condescendingly. “I see you actually decided to work. It must be a first.”
Draco knew that he had been less than attentive as a Malfoy, but his outlook had changed. “So, did you come to ruin my business?”
Lucius clucked in disapproval and replied, “Manners, Draco. I know I taught you better than that. It’s not becoming of a business owner to be rude to a customer.”
He didn’t believe that for a minute since he knew that Lucius had Severus brew all his potions. “You? My customer? I doubt it. What do you want?”
“I merely came to see what you were making of your life. I must say it is more than I expected, though you have chosen a very difficult line of work.” He opened one of the jars and sniffed at the contents. “One with many potential pitfalls.” He smirked as he turned to face Draco.
Once again, Draco was filled with a sense of dread. He knew there were dangers when dealing with some of the controlled ingredients, which is why none of them were displayed. While it was rare for Ministry officials to visit Knockturn Alley, it did happen from time to time. And if Lucius prompted them to conduct a surprise inspection, Draco had no doubt they would. “Is there something I can assist you with?” he asked in what he hoped was a polite tone. He was tired of Lucius and his lectures.
“I don’t think I’m in the market for anything… today. But I will keep your shop in mind when I am.” He grinned slyly, indicating he would be keeping an eye on Draco.
Draco couldn’t take it anymore. “You destroyed me once. Does it hurt your pride that much to see me trying to make something of my life?”
“Not particularly,” he said drolly. Without saying another word, he left the shop.
Draco involuntarily shivered. He could only hope that Lucius really wasn’t concerned. Besides, there was nothing he could do. The majority of their money was invested in the shop. He would just have to wait and see, and be very careful about any of the more questionable activities he was going to engage in. If there was one thing he had learned from Lucius, it was that failure was not an option.
Draco Black was determined to succeed.
~The End~
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A/N: Thank you for much for reading and especially thank you to those who left reviews. I will be going through my reviews soon to reply to them. I really appreciate them.
I hope that all of you enjoyed this final installment of the Glory Trilogy, and thank you for being patient in waiting more than a year for me to post this episode. It was a great challenge to write a story in three parts from three different points of view.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Fallen From Glory
16 Reviews | 7.81/10 Average
EXCELLENT!!!!
I would love to know what happens next-----
I do feel sorry for Draco, but this is what he gets for his affair and not thinking of the consequences. He obviously did not think Lucius' rage and vengefulness would be so severe; though, he should have expected it, especially after Phaedra married Lucius.
I'm surprised he didn't sit his NEWTs though.
It's a sad thing to find out that the woman he started an affair with and finally got her, and to finally realize he may have been in lust with...
I'm shocked that she kept that vast amount of money from him. They're a couple; married. As my parents once explained to me, when you're married "my money is your money". So I'm terribly shocked that even when they're under financial duress, she won't tell him until he explained that they'd be worse off than the Weasleys.
I'm glad he's determined to succeed, and I hope he does.
I enjoyed reading this story/series very much. I was shocked with all the events that transpired in the first fic, but now I feel sympathies for Draco just a bit (not hating him anymore LOL). =)
Short, but a very fitting ending. Great job, not only on this story but the entire trilogy. You're an amazing writer. Keep up the wonderful work!~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed this series. It was a lot of fun for me to write. And I have finally got the muses back into business, though I have to try to mix in other stories with all the Anything Goes Prompt ideas I have as those have to be submitted anonymously.
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed this series. It was a lot of fun for me to write. And I have finally got the muses back into business, though I have to try to mix in other stories with all the Anything Goes Prompt ideas I have as those have to be submitted anonymously.
Again, wonderful chapter. You write very well. Can't wait to read how this all ends. Great job!~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Thank you. :D This is one of the more fun stories I've written because I do get to spend time really getting into each of the three main characters.
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Thank you. :D This is one of the more fun stories I've written because I do get to spend time really getting into each of the three main characters.
Another great chapter. I'm really glad Draco is sticking it out for his daughter, if nothing else...I'm actually starting to feel slightly sorry for him.~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Thanks. I'm glad to see your opinion of Draco changing. For me that was one of the hardest things about this installment after building up for two stories what a bastard he is.
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Thanks. I'm glad to see your opinion of Draco changing. For me that was one of the hardest things about this installment after building up for two stories what a bastard he is.
I like how this story starts...Draco having problems, being miserable. He deserves it; in this story at least. Great job so far.~Jen
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
LOL He really does deserve it, the little bastard. That's what you get for trying to out-scheme your scheming father.
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
LOL He really does deserve it, the little bastard. That's what you get for trying to out-scheme your scheming father.
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Thanks for your encouragement. I did read them at the time. :) I've just been quite remiss on answering reviews. Bad me.
HI HI HI !!! first off I can't believe you moved over here without updating on fanfiction.net !! LOL any hoo I read the whole seris so far and I am on pins an neddles as whats gonna happen now so hermoine had a boy whats his name or will we find out larter ? PLEASE POST THE REST!!
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
THanks. I'm glad you have enjoyed it. I have falled woefully behind on uploading stories everywhere, ff.net included, though I have some that I cannot load there. I have another chapter I have to upload and then one more for this one. When RL allows, I'll get it up. :D
Lucius kept his dominance, oh dear. Wonderfully written, no doubt, but I'd have hoped that Hermione and Draco had more self-esteem.
Loved reading this trilogy tonight, and really admire your dedication for finishing it! :D
Thanks for sharing!
SWEEEEEEEEEET!! it's over though!!
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
I'm glad you liked it. This was one of my favorite series. I was kind of sad to see it end, but I think the natural progression had ended with each of them getting their side of the story out.
You left a few open questions... but this was an interesting story. Good job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Glad you enjoyed it. I did want to leave it a little open so that folks could imagine the ultimate ending that they wanted. :D
In a way I actually feel sorry for Draco... I do hope that he pulls things together.
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
You feel exactly how I expected folks to feel. When I started out I didn't want Draco to be likeable, but I managed to convince myself. Even though he did it to himself, I do feel sorry for him, too.
Well written, cliffhanger ending making oneself say, "and? Where did the rest of the encounter with Lucius go? I need to know what will happen next."Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
Thanks. :D I do love little cliffhangers if I can work them in. I do have the next chapter up and need to give the final chapter one last run through before posting it.
This series is one of my favorites and I'm so glad you've continue with the last portion.
Response from phoenix (Author of Fallen From Glory)
I'm glad to hear how much you like the series. I have been wanting to write this last portion for a very long time and it really feels good to have gotten in finished. Now if I can just finish the other projects I have in progress. LOL Look for the update in the next couple of days.
Well, it appears Hermione has adjusted to being a Malfoy. This was interesting, I enjoyed reading from the different viewpoint. Although, I think Lucius's may have been my favorite.