Fruit Loops

michmak

9 Reviews | 3.33/10 (9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )

Humor Potions Under Duress 1,674 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Innocent fruit loops are drowned as Snape attempts to teach his son to...well, read it and find out.

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Chapter 1: Fruit Loops

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Member Since 2005 | 12 Stories | Favorited by 112 | 0 Reviews Written | 3 Review Responses

Mother of three, working out of the house in the field of public relations. I have a very understanding husband and lots of quirks, which probably make me more irritiating than interesting. I used to write lots of fanfiction, but have fallen away from it the past little while, mostly due to personal issues (although some fandom issues surfaced as well). Snape/Hermione is still my 'ship of choice, and that won't change despite what Rowling presents in the last book.

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HermioneJeanSnape

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

If I ever have a son, I am so, so making that happen. My future husband will have no choice. That is wonderful, and well done you, listening at the door :)

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jade2099

Hey...when you're desperately trying to ptty train a child? I say...whatever works. VERY funny! :)

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Mrs Alfred

Lovely! :-) "Use your own" is priceless. I thought the son's voice and characterization was spot on. I could hear and picture him so easily. Thanks for sharing a precious family moment. *hugs*

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snapeophile

Sweet and lovely. Severus retained his snark, too!

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GeminiScorp

This was very entertaining. I couldn't stop laughing after the line, "No, Augustus, no. USE YOUR OWN!". Nice job!

10/10

mmesnape

Bwahahahaha! That's was truly funny! I could actually imagine it in my mind's eye... my hubby was lucky compared to Sev. We had two girls... hehe! Lucky boy!Great fluffy offering. Bravo!

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EverMystique

fruit loops and cheerios are wonderful potty training tools. But, when Severus hollared for Augustus to use his own, I about died! LOL. Very cute story.

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Seventh

Oh lords. When I have a son, I am most definitely getting Jay to do the fruit loops thing. Thanks for the idea!!! I loved this story and its plot, and I also liked the way Hermione convinced Severus in the first place - Naughty Hermione!

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Madame DeFarge

I have 2 sons. I wish I had thought of Fruit Loops

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