Intriguing. :)

So much happening, what is it leading to?

Great start!

Brilliant.  I am speechless.

I am breathless at your description.  Beautiful and horrible and utterly compelling.

An immediate hook, followed by superb tension.  What a delight to read.

My heart is thumping and my fingers are shaking with an odd mix of trepidation and excitment as I nervously tap out this review. Well-done.Just reading the first three chapters alone has me committed to this fic, you have weaved a very dark tale and I will be checking daily for updates. This was an ingenuous place and perspective to start from. One aspect I am greatful for is that you are not being cliche about the characters. Ron as a brilliant strategist, Harry is paranoid, Lucius completely evil, Minerva the perfectly stallworth in nature, and Narcissia's love of her child are accurate and make this story believable. The addition of a dangerously dark Snape who is unconsciously willing to do what needs to be done to win, is addicting.And, if there ever was a replacement for the cool calculating nature of Albus you have written it in your Hermione. I could go on, but this is ment to be a review not a study.Kudos to your great beta and co-writer one of the reason I clicked on the title.

Wonderful chapter, many POV's and threads to consider.  Hope that you have many more chapters ready to roll.

Excellent first chapter!  Looking forward to much more.

This was really good! I'm very new to the fandom and have a lot of reading to do!

This story is marked as 'not complete' yet your A/N at the beginning of this chapter makes me think it's finished. Yes?

Off to read Of Debts next. :)

Well done!

I can't wait to read the next chapter - you're very talented at building up suspense!!

Write On!