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Releasing the Beast Within

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Releasing the Beast Within

Lady Whitehart

11 Reviews   |   11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Humor Hogwarts Castle 2,934 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Bellatrix Lestrange Fred Weasley George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Peter Pettigrew Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

Voldemort needs another spy inside Hogwarts. Wormtail gives Animagus lessons. Crookshanks gets some exercise. Consume beverages with care.

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Chapter 1: Releasing the Beast Within


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Lady Whitehart

Member Since 2007  |  23 Stories  |  Favorited by 20  |  49 Reviews Written  |  170 Review Responses

may07releasingthebeastwithin.JPGJust a quiet soul who loves to write. How else can I unleash my inner vixen? I love the character of Severus Snape, which is why he is in most of my fics. Romanic stories about Snape will see him with either Lily, Sinistra, or an OFC. Have fun!

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Reviews for Releasing the Beast Within

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10/10

mick42

Brilliant, I hope she gets stuck that way.

10/10

sregner

"Consume beverages with care"  No shit

Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Releasing the Beast Within)

I hope you weren't drinking anything. Thanks!

9/10

beaweasley2

Very cute... enjoyable - but I have a hard time seeing Bella purple. Even a little bit purple...

Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Releasing the Beast Within)

I know, but Arnold was purple so I had no choice. At least Bella was equally horrified.

8/10

kimjo2

she deserves to be pink.  great story but i would have loved to know what snape's form would have been.  thanks!

Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Releasing the Beast Within)

And vilely brilliant pink at that. Snape will be something that has Pygmy Puffs on its food list. That way if Bella ever says eat me, he can oblige.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Bwahahahaa! I love it. Great characterizations.

Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Releasing the Beast Within)

Glad to have entertained you!

10/10

LovesRickman

So cute!
Missy/LovesRickman

0/10

EverMystique

LOL. Making the psychotic woman into a Pygmy Puff. LOL. Very funny, and worth reading. Thank you for sharing.

0/10

silvairelining

I just loved this one. Made me giggle the whole way through - protecting her pile of kibble included. :-) This one goes on my "favorites" pile to re-read every time I need a laugh.

I'd love to see you write a whole bunch more just like this.

Silvairelining

9/10

pj4990

Excellent, nice to see humour which is a bit different and doesn't just send up the usual cliches. Would be nice to to see the story continued, what other torment did Bella suffer and what information did she gain, and did she manage to make Snape pay? I'd love to see what revenge she saw fitting!

Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Releasing the Beast Within)

I've toyed with the idea of adding chapters to this, but for now it will remain a one-shot. I'm trying to keep my plot bunnies under control.

0/10

Trickie Woo

I enjoyed it tremendously, especially the Cary Grant/Irene Dunn banter between Severus and Bella. You've given me much to speculate about, like Sirius Black's genitalia and the best shade of pink for Bella. I feel that Pepto-Bismal would be the perfect pink for Bella. Are you going to continue this saga? I think you could really mine it for laughs.

Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Releasing the Beast Within)

Glad you liked it. I probably could, but I have other things I need to finish first.

8/10

Gelsey

*cackles*  Oh, how wonderful.  This was brilliant!  That Bella would be a puffskein ... *giggles*  <3

Response from Lady Whitehart (Author of Releasing the Beast Within)

I about died when I stumbled across that theory.

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