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Sacrifice
Crazed889 Reviews | 9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
In response to a challenge set on Ashwinder -Hermione is about to get married when a certain Potions master realizes she should marry him instead. He has forty-eight hours to stop the wedding and get her to marry him.
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That was so sad, but beautiful in a dramatic way. It made me cry.
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
Why thank you :DAnd yes...I admit my aim was to make people cry. I hope you enjoyed it!
That was so sad, but beautiful in a dramatic way. It made me cry.
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
Aww thanks! Im glad you liked it and that you felt for the characters enough to cry for them, it means I did my job! :)
Although I normally do not reply (mostly because of the fact that my English is far too pretentious for someone who isn't a native speaker) I must now, because I find that I disagree with those stating that this story isn't HGSS. I myself must admit I'd love to see them together, holding hands and singing happy songs, whilst cuddling fluffy bunnies, but not all Potions Under Duress-fiction should per se involve an 'active' romance. It is dedicated to the relationship between the two, romantic or otherwise and I fail to understand where this story isn't. It's intricate and bitter, wellwritten and somewhat mysterious. The story evolves around Severus and Hermione. Compliments to the writer.
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
Thanks for the great review! Im glad you enjoyed the story and hopefully the sequel will be more of a fluffy ending for you haha. No promises though since I dont really know whats going to happen in it until I sit down and write it!
Hmmmm...this story needs something. I found the junping back and forth with the times almost unfathomable. The motivations and the reasons for the actions of the characters are basically unknown which makes me not sympathetic at all to any of them...except maybe Snape.
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
I guess maybe the sequel will reveal more understanding of why Hermione is doing what she is doing. Thanks for the review :)
I'm torn between wanting to cry in anguish, smash furniture and mirrors, and wanting to pinpoint what's missing in this. I ended up totally confused.
I think what's missing is the "why" and the "what"! Why are they doing this?? Is Hermione simply trying to make up to Harry for Ginny being killed? There's mention of another prophecy, but what does it intail? Why are they making a sacrifice?
Personally, I think this story belongs under the heading of 'Hogwarts Castle' rather than 'Potions Under Duress' since it obviously not "dedicated solely to the relationship between Severus Snape and Hermione Granger."
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
You'll understand more once there is a sequel writen - and I intend to write it in chronological order so that it is less confusing lol.
*prods* that ending left me all misty eyed -_-Lovely little story.If I was her my resolve would have broke when the flower came out of the envelope.*sniffle*
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
Haha yeah I think mine would have too...I mean...who can resist Snape! But Hermione is a very strong willed person...and thats all Im saying.
Now that was very sad and bitter sweet. Almost makes this didn't end, that he could still have a chance to be with.. I'm going to cry now. Makes me think of my old ex. He was a good guy and i let him et away ..*sigh* Love the story. Very different.
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
Thank you so much for reviewing, Im glad you liked it. My mission was to get people to cry!
Well, I think this is reall Hogwarts Castle. It was also a bit cnfusing.
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
So is your english... Thanks for the review though.
I feel sorry for Snape here, and I enjoyed this and remember it fondly when it was posted at Ashwinder. Thanks for bringing it over.
Response from Crazed88 (Author of Sacrifice)
Hehe, I thought you might! Thanx for the review...maybe the next one will be more in his favour :p