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Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace
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Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace

septentrion

21 Reviews   |   21 Ratings, 0 Likes, 13 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges 1,769 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Original Character Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Harry and Ron are persuaded that Hermione has done something to Snape to get him to marry her. My answer to the 31st Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges (details at the end of the fic).

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10/10

MollysSister

And its just like Severus to not tell hermione that he knew about the potion! Men!

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

*rolls eyes* he likes to keep secrets :)

0/10

MMADfan

Very cool to have made Hermione actually do what Ron & Harry accused her of (or, at least, attempt to do it). I had expected it to be a scurrilous accusation without foundation! *grin* Amusing little story!

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

I expected people to think so, which made the idea of her doing it even more appealing. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

10/10

ubiquirk

I'm taking a mini-break from writing and trying to catch up on reading.

I love the double-layered twist you did at the end of this!  Very nicely done! 

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you,

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

. Your opinion means so much to me.

9/10

Dreamy_Dragon

That was so sweet, I loved Severus's reaction to the accusation and his explanation

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you. I thought he had the right to be sweet on his wedding day.

10/10

Stormi

Wow! That was good.

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you.

0/10

droxy

OK I read this soemplace else!   But I still find it adorable.

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

It's nice of you to review twice, Droxy.

10/10

Soul Bound

So cute! I really got a kick out of the dust attack line. lol Nice one...

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

I think it's one of the most popular lines of this little piece. Thank you for your review.

10/10

blue artemis

I love that.  I figure it would be very hard to get a potion past Snape. 

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Except perhaps Veritaserum (no odour, no taste), but then he's a superb Occlumens, he could probably fool it. Thank you for reviewing.

10/10

pickles

Yippee someone used my suggestion.

You are so cool.

Love it.  Mentioned it to the husband person.  Hopefully he will read it in the next few days.

I like the spin Hermione did give him the love potion but he decided to go along and see what her game was.

Poor Harry and Ron I'm sure they didn't think their friend would go to this extreme.  

Thank you again.  You've made my week - considering I've been taking care of the sick kids since last Wednesday night. 

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thanks to you for such an inspiring prompt. It was in itself a spin on the traditional "Snape did something to Hermione." I'm very glad you liked my fic. Take care of yourself.

10/10

rlc

What a sweet piece of fluff!  Nice twist!  Thank you.

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you for reading.

9/10

firefly124

Nicely done!  What a twist!

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you very much for the review.

10/10

Battle of Lissa

This was wonderful! I wish I had a knack for writing fluff. It's so hard to write sometimes, and even harder to read if it isn't done right.But this was a very cute and touching one shot.

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

And this is a wonderful review. Fluff isn't my speciality, though I'm afraid to have indulged in it lately. But I always slip, whether I want it or not, a bit of sarcasm and humour. Thank you for letting me know what you think.

0/10

michelline

Great premise.  I hadn't read this version before and I'm glad you took the time to write t his.  Nice job. 

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you. Believe me, it wasn't a chore to write this.

10/10

amsev

Ah, excellent, funny one-shot.  I just wish it were longer! Love your writing style.

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

I tried to make it longer, but my writing style doesn't allow it. It's good thing, then, that you like it nonetheless. Thank you for reviewing.

9/10

elsolel

This is great.  I really enjoyed the way you fleshed out the prompt. 

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you. I aim to please.

0/10

GinnyW

*snicker* Very cute and a nice twist. :)

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you.

0/10

Cerydden M_Layne

Loved your story, but you knew that already.  I do like the ending about it being a favorite story for generations of Snapes.  Thanks for your work!

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you for your review. 

0/10

Bentwaters

Heeheehee  That was fun.  And that's quite the priest to not mention all the "oddities" that happened around him.  ^.^   Very cute. I enjoyed it alot and thank you much for sharing.

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

This prompt was so tempting and had so much potentiality for humour that I couldn't resist it. I had much pleasure in writing it, and even more to share it. Thank you for reviewing.

0/10

Word E Smith

I like how you've changed around the "Snape has done something to Hermione" cliche.  However, I have to say - quite pessimisstically, I might add - that I can't see Snape and Hermione having a good marriage in this fic.  She was deceitful from the start and willing to love someone under the thrall of a potion and he, apparently, didn't think that important enough to address.I liked the story, though.  I've been reading too much about gender issues recently, perhaps?

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

That prompt caught my eye and I tried to write an answer. You may be right about being worried for their marriage. This isn't a good start. Thanks for reading.

0/10

MollysSister

Awwwwwww how sweet!

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

Thank you!

0/10

snapeophile

Hahaha!  Love the 'many generations of Snapes' bit.  There's so much to like here--that Hermione was guilty, that he knew all along, that H and R got their comeuppance, that HG and SS ended up together.  Nicely done!

Response from septentrion (Author of Speak Now Or Forever Hold Your Peace)

I'm very glad that you found this so likeable. Thank you for your review.

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