49: The Man Who Lived
Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin
Chapter 50 of 50
Fawkes_07Epilogue? What epilogue? I prefer to think of it as the Where Are They Now File.
The valley of Hogsmeade stretched out like a postcard in the summer sun, but the crowd of boys on the hillside took no notice. They had important business: the "Great War: 50th Anniversary Special Edition" Chocolate Frogs had just come out.
"Woohoo! Ron Weasley!"
"I got another Tonks!"
"Trade you a Mad-Eye Moody for it?"
"Dream on!"
"What, you've already got a Tonks!"
"I have the Auror. This one's the WOW card." He held it up to prove his point. She was showing off the latest "World Of Werebeasts" T-shirt, with fluffy purple wolf ears poking from the top of her head.
"Who's still looking for a Hermione Granger?"
"Whoa, check it out! When you hold it this way, it's Sirius Black; tilt it a little and: Snuffles!"
"The Remus Lupin card's supposed to do that too. Hey, anybody got a Hagrid yet?"
There was a general negative murmur among the group, and the tearing of new wrappers. Crunching gravel announced the arrival of a smaller boy, panting from his dash up the hillside. "You guys! Come see this!"
The pack rumbled through the woods to a new vantage point. A crowd of grown-ups were gathered below, which was not particularly unusual in and of itself, but curiously, it comprised more heads of brilliant red hair than any of the boys had ever seen together.
"That's the Weasleys and Sons!" said the oldest, in awestruck tones. "My dad said they're building a huge new 'Wheezes' store here, even bigger than the one in London!" This news produced a hushed reverence.
"But why are they all milling around the Shrieking Shack?"
"Obviously, nitwit, that's where they're going to build the store. They're probably here to tear it down right now!"
"They can't tear it down! My mum says that used to be the most haunted building in England!"
"Used to be. Nothing's happened there in, like, a hundred years or something."
"Hey, Hay-Jay! Is that your granddad?"
Turmoil disrupted the ranks of boys as one elbowed his way from somewhere in the middle. "Give over!" He finally reached the front and scrutinized the adults carefully.
"Yeah, that's Papa, all right," said Harry Snape, Jr. "And he's in a right state! There's going to be a row, I bet, but they're lucky; he's been stomping about and growling all week so Nan hid his wand. She always does when he gets like that."
"Looks like he doesn't want them setting up shop."
"Hee hee! He knows he'll never have a minute's peace at Hogwarts again!"
"But what's the difference? They've already got the store in High Street. This one's further away, it'd be even harder to carry things up to the castle without getting caught."
The entire group pondered this mystery for a moment, as Papa (or "the Headmaster," as most of the boys knew him) continued to rail against two of the men, both bald on top with a frame of reddish hair, slightly dulled with gray. They seemed to be laughing at him, which won the respect of every boy on the hillside; only Hay-Jay's gran showed such blatant disregard for Professor Snape's authority in public.
The boys watched for a while, but grew bored as the argument went on and on without advancing either to blows or wands. They began to straggle back to their prior camp, to resume their decimation of the box of Frogs. Soon only the two oldest remained in the trees above the Shrieking Shack. They would be starting their first year at Hogwarts in a month, and therefore had a vested interest in the outcome below. One of them absently unwrapped a Chocolate Frog as he monitored the proceedings. He had eaten nearly the whole frog before it occurred to him to check the card. He gasped.
It was one of the "Limited Edition" Harry Potter cards, the one where he was playing Quidditch in the picture. It was already worth a fortune. The regular cards had a photo of an older wizard whose smile looked kind of sad, but this picture had been taken when Potter had won the World Cup for Scotland, just before he retired from the Hogsmeade Phoenixes and became a Healer. He was neck-and-neck with the opposing Seeker, diving at an insane speed, their robes snapping behind them. Then Potter threw himself into the famous roll, closing his half-hand on the Snitch, righting himself, and pulling his broom out of the dive, all in one fluid movement. Potter threw his head back and the wind whipped all of his wild hair behind him, revealing his face in an expression of pure joy, and on his forehead, the faintest hint of a lightning-bolt scar.
FINIS
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Not enough words or space to say how utterly BRILLIANT this was! Missy/
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
Thank you! I liked it better, too. But I'm biased.
I definitely prefer your version of everything!
AAGGHHH Evil cliffhanger! No fair! Loving this story by the way. It is beyond excellent! If you aren't a published writer of your own you should be!!!Missy
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
aww, thx.
EEEWWW Voldy kisses!!!!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
inorite? blegh!
Oh man, I am so jealous of Harry! To fly with Fawkes would be heaven! LOL I am also jealous of your fantastic storytelling!
Missy/LovesRickman
Am I right in thinking the green lights were where the DE tried to hex the house but the protective spells just absorbed them and as the protective layer faded away it released the dark and they finally took effect??
Missy/LovesRickman
YAY!!!!!! I don't think I mentioned it in the chapter, but I cracked up when Siri tossed the pear back out and nailed poor Remus!
Missy
Rabid Irish Setters has GOT to be the best description of the terror twins I have seen! Loved the wedding!
Missy
i would be interested in getting a printed version of this in full colour. can you possibly let me know how?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
Thank you! You bet! Except just to be 100% clear, only the cover is in color--just like the "real" HP books. I'll PM you with details.
There's so much that I love about this version of book 7. You obviously did a lot of reading of essays and THINKING before you wrote this, for you tie together the background story and plot threads of the series incredibly well, much better than JKR did.I think there's potentially a lot to explore in terms of the adult aspects of this story. Do you see Sirius and Remus as ever having been lovers in this universe? Could Remus be with both Tonks and Sirius?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
Thanks! I did read a lot of essays and think a lot about the loose ends, particularly the whole Missing 24 Hours aspect. I just knew JKR wasn't going to tie things up, which is why I started writing it (about a year before DH came out). I also thought it would be awesome if wizards were descended from Tolkien's elves, hence the crossover. Because this was written for my kids, I didn't fiddle with adult themes but boy, if I were to write fanfic about "Heirs," it would have some intense pairings going on. ;-)
That was an awesome story. Thanks for giving us the pleasure of reading it!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
awwwww, thanks!
That nasty old toad! It certainly explains why she hated Harry so much.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
And why she so had it in for Trelawney and Hagrid.
Could that have been Elrond? Half-Elven? Yay, Sirius saves the day! But where's Draco?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
Bing! You got it!
Draco with a tan instead of pasty white skin, mmmm. And I just love Lupin, he kicks ass as the new Order leader.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
I always thought he had more ass-kicking potential than he showed...
Dumbledore?!? I didn't see that one coming!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
WOHOO! That was the point. I thought he needed to be dirtier.
Ouch! The truth really hurts, but he really did need to hear it, I think.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
Yah, I always thought Dumbledore was a little too kindly and squeaky clean in the other books--I thought he might have some ulterior motives going on.
Wow, what a shocker for Harry - this will definitely test the limits of his tolerance. And this storyline sounds very familar, something like another of your stories. I wonder if it is an alternate universe of that other story or just a different part of the timeline. It's been too long since I read the other story for me to remember.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
*giggle* I like to do a little bit of pseudo-overlap among my fics, but just for silliness.
That was very sweet! I hope his heart doesn't get broken. I'm wondering if that yellow curse in Sirius' head is somehow related to the spell they performed on Harry as a baby, or if it's something related to the modifying of his memory.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
I think everyone's wondering about that yellow curse at this point in the story.
Ha! I was so disappointed at the end of DH that the WW hadn't learned from their mistakes and stopped the sorting. I'm glad to see your world is going to be a bit smarter."A traitor walks the earth." Hmmm. I wonder *which* traitor the hat was speaking of?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
Yeah, there are quite a few traitors it can choose from, huh?
Bleh, I suddenly feel the need to gargle some peroxide. What a lot of subplots have suddenly sprouted! I hope I can keep track of them all until I manage to read through all these chapters. Thank goodness it's a long holiday weekend.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
gargle with peroxide?? do subplots make you feel unclean? If so, why the heck are you reading MY stories, dude?! ;)
Response from Riposto (Reviewer)
The thought of Voldemort's forked tongue in my mouth makes me feel unclean! The subplots I like, though.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
ooooooh, yeah. I forgot how that chapter ended. Yeah, mouthwash is in order, now that ya mention it.
Devilspawn, ha ha! That was funny. Glad Lupin got his courage back, but I suppose a few moments of despair are understandable. Clever Harry!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
*bows* thanks! I just had to have a little comic relief in there, and an irritated demon too small to harm your shoe is just too cute.
I think I could make a guess at who Ondossi's "angel" is... ;) And I'm terribly curious about the dreams that Hermione doesn't want Harry to see, though Harry's love for Hermione, his disbelief that anything he might find in her would change his feelings for her, was very touching. Nice cliffhanger!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
The Angel: you'll find out in about 34 chapters. Hermy's dreams: I'll just say that it was her dream issue that served as the starting point for Fair Exchanges...
Another thing I missed the first time around - because of course this was originally pre-DH. But now, how cool is that - Voldemort killing his servant with a bite to his neck! Did you have an inside scoop?I like the conflicting hints that you've set up, keeping us guessing as to which side Snape is on. I hadn't read far enough into this story the first time to know, but my money is on the white hats.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
LOL, well, you'll find out in about 34 more chapters. As for inside scoop...how do you think I know so much about the Legilimagi? (j/k)
Ha! I knew it, Tolkien. Good chapter, I'm wondering if Ginny is sorry she got what she asked for.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Harry Potter and the Heirs of Slytherin)
Yeah, I don't know, myself. I would think it would be pretty darn overwhelming to have your boyfriend/pseudo-ex run through your head like that. That's why I envisioned her just needing to run at the end, to unload some of that unformed anxiousness and vulnerability.