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Vision
CiraArana12 Reviews | 4.67/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
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Very interesting, and I hope you do write more, this could be a really interesting story, nice work!
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thanks! I think I will continue Vision. Muse has taken an interest and keeps bugging me for more. Last night, I even dreamt of the plot for second year. So, yeah, I think there will be more. ^-^
That was a very intriguing snapshot. It will play about on my mind for a little while yet. Well done.
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thank you very much. *bows*
This is really charming, especially that last little fillip at the end.
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thank you very much. *bows*
Great one-shot - but it does have potential for more. Poor Severus he will have to think about this for a while...
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thank you. *bows*
I think there will be more. My muse has taken an unexpected interest in the story, and keeps bugging me to write more. If she keeps it up, I will. ^-^
Oh, yes, it will keep bothering Severus, this vision he had. And he won't like the solution one bit. *grins*
Quite a pleasant one shot. I wonder if it was just his subconscious or more...
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thank you. *bows*
Oh, the original vision wasn't his subconscious at all. The dreams he had, afterwards, come from it, though. Because apparently his subconscious has already understood the vision, even if Severus is still wondering. ^-^
Quite a pleasant one shot. I wonder if it was just his subconscious or more...
Hmm... this be a good premise for a story. It has potential. Hope your muse urges you upon this path. Nice work. Cheers!
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thank you. My muse has indeed taken an interest and keeps prodding me to write more. If she keeps it up, I will. ^-^
That was really good! :D Except... now I want to know what the vision was about. ::pout::
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thank you!
Well, I hinted at it in the last paragraph: he didn't see a girl of eleven, but a young woman of about 20 when she first walked up to the Sorting Hat. And only when she was sorted did he see the girl.
Response from mistaria (Reviewer)
Well, you explained what but now why. ;)
I enjoyed this. It would definitely be great to read more, but it can certainly stand on it's own. Thanks for sharing.
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thank you for reviewing.
I think there will be more. My muse has taken an unexpected interest in Vision. ^-^
This is great. I look forward to reading whatever you might do with it after this--if anything. :) Nice work.
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thank you. I think there will be more. My muse has taken an unexpected interest in Vision and has been pushing me to write more.
Very interesting. I do hope you elaborate on this story.
Response from CiraArana (Author of Vision)
Thanks.
My muse has taken an interest, and if she keeps bugging me for more I will write more. ^-^
Intriguingly lovely, thank you.