I see you haven't updated this in a while, but I hope you do soon. :)

Great story so far. I can't wait to read more! :)

Are you going to continue this?

I'm loving this story. I can't wait to read more of it! :) ~ Emily

I am a little bit confused. Who was the person that gave her the Incendium potion? It's a really interesting concept though. Good chapter. I like the idea.

Hi,  I think I read this story at Ashwinder at one point and waited on pins and needles for more updates.  I hope there's more after the 12th chapter, which is where I think it left off!  I loved it and can't wait to read more, thanks,marti

Well I am very sorry there is not more of this story. What a twisted but interesting start.! 

This is one of the best stories out there. I wish I could find the full copy of it, even uncompleted. It is just so good.

Please continue!! :)

I was glad to see this start here.  It's one of my favorite stories.  It's good, too, to reread it after a hiatus.  More, please!

Hi wonderful, is this story posted some where else, it seems so familiar.  I like it though, if this isn't posted elsewhere then it's enough like another story that I know I will enjoy it.cat_jumped1

I really love this story.  I first started reading in on SH, I would love it if you would continue.  The interaction is wonderful, you get to see a more private and unguarded side  of Severus.

Hm, interesting to see you in another archive. I hope your beta had resurfaced by now and you had your needed brainstorming session. ;-)

Oooh, if you've started posting here, the new chapter can't be far off, can it?

*bouncy* 

Very intriging start! Good Bellatrix!

A new and interesting twist on a HG/SS story!  I am looking forward to future chapters!