A Bucket of Hexes
Chapter 4 of 21
Grace has VictoryMichael accidentally collides with a dastardly Slytherin plot.
ReviewedCHAPTER FOUR
A Bucket of Hexes
I puzzled over it all through Ancient Runes, a lesson for which Terry did not appear. Meaning to consult him about the best way to warn off the girls, I went to meet him in the hospital wing afterwards. But Madam Pomfrey shooed me away from the door. "Boot needs to sit quietly in his bandages for half an hour yet," she said. "If he fidgets he'll come unravelled and we'll have to start again, so I'm saying no visitors. Oh... but since you are here, Corner, could you ask Professor Sprout for some supplies?"
She gave me a long shopping list, which had to be taken all the way back to the greenhouse, and then the box of herbs had to be carted all the way back up to the infirmary. After Madam Pomfrey had finished thanking me, Terry was still being kept quiet behind the door, and I was very late to lunch.
I was not the only one. As I rushed down the last few steps to the Entrance Hall, a door to my left was flung open, and there were also swift footsteps to my right the other latecomers were obviously as ravenous as I was. I skidded to a halt with a second to spare as the person on my right, not bothering to slow down, charged straight into my pathway. With an almighty crash, the person on my left was bowled onto the floor, while a number of dense objects smashed around our ankles.
"Troglodyte!" That was Zabini's voice.
"Watch it!" I held out my hand to the person on the floor.
"That hurt! And you've dropped something." These unnecessary observations came from Zacharias Smith of Hufflepuff.
Zabini glowered at us, although the accident had very obviously been his own fault. He was carrying his bucket, and the dropped objects were small white stones. Zacharias, with a resentful glare, began to help picking them up, while I stared stupidly. Those stones... if I could take them away... I actually had one in my hand before I came to my senses. Whatever mischief Zabini was planning, that didn't make it right for me to steal his property. The stone felt surprisingly sticky, as if I could leave fingerprints on it.
"What are you doing? Those are mine!" Zabini rounded on me furiously even though I was handing his stone back to him. "I've hexed them. Don't bring down curses upon yourselves!"
"So sorry!" muttered Zacharias sarcastically. "Next time a lout knocks me out without apologising, I'll not try to help him! Next time I'll be a thug too!"
"How have you hexed them?" I asked.
"Never mind. But now you have poked your fingers where they weren't wanted, don't be surprised if you find you can't tell anyone about this little adventure. Accio, stones!" And they clattered back into the bucket.
"If I was finishing my Potions essay," said Zacharias, "and Zabini was hexing stones, what's your excuse?"
"Errand for Madam Pomfrey. But, listen, Zacharias, about those stones..." I launched into an explanation of the bet. Zacharias, the unlikeliest confidant, listened agog. We sat down back to back, so that I had a clear view of the Slytherin table. But Zabini didn't sit down at all; he ambled over to the Hufflepuffs.
"Zacharias," I craned my neck around to the seat behind me, "can you see what Zabini's doing?"
"Nothing much," replied Zacharias. "He's speaking to one of the girls. No, I'm not knowing her name, she's not in fourth year."
I shifted my gaze cautiously. But Zabini had apparently finished. He was walking away from a block of Hufflepuff girls, slipping something into his pocket and grinning. At the very end of the row he stopped to speak to another girl.
But he can't do that, I thought. That one looks as if she's only in first year. Besides, he's in plain view of the first victim there he can't go chatting up Number Two in front of her and still expect to have a third opportunity later!
"He touched that little girl with one of his hexed stones," Zacharias muttered in my ear. "What's he up to?"
"He was asking her to the ball," I began to explain.
"That kid? Fat chance! Use your common sense more likely hexing her with blisters."
So perhaps that was Zabini's ploy: only ask girls whom no-one could suspect him of asking. But how on earth was he going to stop the girls finding out they were being twenty-timed when they discussed his invitations with one another?
After lunch Terry appeared, his hands as good as new, and we borrowed school brooms to practise flying. But the air was so cold and gusty that it wasn't very pleasant. Padma, stamping her feet on the iron ground, complained that it wasn't much fun for her to crick her neck in order to "watch boys mucking around".
"Well, you have a turn flying, then," I offered, holding out my broom.
"No, thanks, you know I don't fly very well."
"Then make yourself some fire and read a book on the side. Or go indoors and do something completely different. Honestly, it doesn't matter to me whether you're watching or not."
"Nice," she muttered to the dead grass. "My boyfriend doesn't care whether I'm there or not!"
"Don't be silly, of course I care. What I'd like best would be if you would fetch your own broom and fly with us. But only if you want to. If that isn't what you want, it doesn't make much difference to me what other option you take."
"Of course, it wouldn't occur to the great Michael Corner," Padma flared, "to give up his flying and spend half an hour doing something that I choose. After all, it isn't exactly as if you're the offspring of Mercury neither you nor Terry will ever be the stuff of school Quidditch teams."
I thought that was rather uncalled for, so I suppose I was somewhat sharp in asking what alternative activity she'd had in mind.
"I can't decide offhand!" she almost shouted. "I haven't had a moment, for nearly a year, to think about how I'd choose to spend the lunch hour if I didn't have to consider you. But just give me a moment, and I'll think of something, with you or without!" And she stalked off the Quidditch stands, with Morag faithfully trailing five paces behind.
Terry landed beside me. "What was that about?"
"Don't know," I said truthfully. "Girls are just moody sometimes, I suppose. Lately it seems that every little thing is setting Padma off into a dramatic fight."
"Seasoned with too much salt?" he asked. "A sign you're becoming bored with her?"
I stared at him. "No, of course not!" But as we trudged back to the broom shed, it did cross my mind that one possible reason for Padma's touchiness was that she was perhaps becoming bored with me.
Our History of Magic lesson was less torpid than usual. Instead of going to sleep while pretending to take notes, the Gryffindor boys were teasing one another. I couldn't work out what the joke was, but apparently Weasley, Finnigan and Thomas were finding Potter very, very amusing.
Professor Moody permitted neither rest nor play in his classes. He assigned a whole chapter to be read for homework, with threats of a test next Wednesday. But I was so bemused by the idea that Padma might be bored with me that I didn't even write down the page numbers. The four o'clock bell rang, and the weekend had begun.
Was Padma really bored with me?
I tried to remember. The first six months had been idyllic. We had laughed a great deal, and felt very comfortable together, but I had never lost sight of what an extraordinary person Padma was and how lucky I was to have her as my girlfriend.
Then there had been the summer holidays a flurry of exchanging owls three times a week, and thinking of her every hour, and cajoling my parents into arranging for the two families to meet up together in Blackpool for the first weekend in August. I had enjoyed Blackpool all the more after the month's separation; we had seen the sights, being very careful not to let Padma's twin sister or my little brother feel left out, and I had been so pleased when my parents agreed that "the Patils were a very nice family indeed". And I had been overjoyed to see Padma again on the Hogwarts Express on the first of September, and she had seemed equally glad to see me.
So far, so good. Being fourth years had been very comfortable for us. I hadn't asked myself any questions about how long Padma and I would stay together. I had just enjoyed being a couple, had assumed that she was as happy as I was. Perhaps we had been too comfortable. I'd heard the older boys saying that girls fussed if you "took them for granted". Had I stopped remembering how wonderful Padma was and taken her for granted?
I didn't think so. After all, people who know each other well are supposed to feel comfortable together. I didn't have to keep asking Terry if he still wanted to be my friend! And I hadn't let feeling comfortable lead to being familiar (I was always careful to be polite to Padma) or bossy (I never suggested she ought to give up her other friends or activities in order to be with me). Nor had I really minded Padma's recent spate of ratty moods: everyone puts up with the occasional ratty mood from a friend.
It was just that... well, we had been a couple for eleven months now. And for the last two of those months we had been annoying one another fairly often. Why was Padma so easily annoyed lately?
Could the real reason be nothing more complicated than that she found me annoying?
I pushed that highly uncomfortable thought away easily when Terry nudged me. "Did you hear that, Michael?"
"What? No, sorry, I was miles away."
"Marietta Edgecombe just said that Madam Hooch has agreed to run a dancing lesson tomorrow afternoon. Two o'clock in the Great Hall."
"Oh, good," I said, trying to muster enthusiasm.
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Hi. May I borrow some of your plot ideas? I want to have a blind Hogwarts student either accept or reject Blaze's proposal, with Michael's help and humiliate Blaze. You wrote a wonder story, I'd just like tot hrow a disabled character into Hogwarts era. Btw, of course you'd have full credit, but if you had enough time, would you like to work on this with me? I've never written for this site before. I've also come across jerks likethis in real life, saying one thing, doing another. Anyway if you respind, I'd love to jump onto this broom see where it takes us. ;)
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Dear Chocolab,I'm thunderstruck! Do you want to write a fanfic of a fanfic?Yes, of course you can do that. If I can steal JKR's ideas then it's okay for you to steal mine. And I don't care what you write about Blaise Zabini. Nothing you did could make him any worse than he is in my story. Interestingly enough, I wrote this story back in 2003, before the publication of HBP, when nobody knew what the canon Blaise Zabini would be like. I was staggered in 2005 when I found that canon Blaise was exactly like the one in my fanfic! Although I've made some revisions to the original version of my story, I've never, as a matter of principle, changed a single word or gesture by Blaise because I'm so proud of having written him correctly the first time.But if you want to add some canon touches, so much the better!GhV
thank you for the list of questions at the beginning! they were a laugh, mostly because I have asked several of them myself.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
These questions really were a mystery back in 2003, when I wrote this story. I am so flattered that anyone is still reading it. Welcome to ancient history! GHV
I really enjoyed this. I loved the story about the stones, and the Silencing Varnish, and how you told Michael's story from a realistic perspective, and Ginny being a dear, and the whole WORLD NOT REVOLVING AROUND HARRY thing was nice too. ;)
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
I am so flattered that anyone is still reading this story, which I wrote nearly seven years ago! I have to tell you that my son thought of the Silencing Varnish. I wanted to present Ginny as desirable, even though Michael is clearly suffering from an over-the-top infatuation.Thank you so much for writing in, GhV
This is an amazing tale and a very interesting point of view. I am looking forward to the next chapter and hope some of the girls - or all of them - are going to kick Zabinis butt ;-)
Thanks for sharing!
Fran
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Well, I can promise you that SOMEONE will be very unhappy with the outcome of the bet, but I'm not saying who! Thanks for reviewing, GhV
He's such a boy. :) So oblivious. :D
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
And so convinced he's a White Knight!
Aw. Poor girls.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
It'll be worse before it's better. GhV
Poor Michael*laugh*
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
And it will only become worse...
Well, at least Terry will have a fun ball. ;)
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Terry's fun will be well documented at the right time. GhV
I wonder if that's all Padma is upset about. Poor Michael. He's so oblivious.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Padma will clear up the mysteries pretty soon. But Michael might not like it when she does. Thanks for reviewing, GhV
Ooh, more intrigue!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
And more to follow later!
He's just assuming she'll go to the ball with him, isn't he? And she's mad that he hasn't asked. :)
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
How perceptive of you! Are you a woman??
Response from Raira (Reviewer)
Guilty. :)
*grin*Now of course, I want to know what's up with those stones.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
You'll have to wait until chapter 19.*Grins back evilly.*GhV
Have to admit I was kinda leery about starting this story,.. but it was quite prettily written. :D A droll tale.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Thank you!
ah! so this is when ginny weasley finally appears! :D was this chapter hard to write? You must have lucid dreams.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
No, it wasn't hard to write. I always planned for Ginny to appear just like this at this point in the story. Everything was leading up to this moment. I'm glad she appeared lucidly for you.
creative and sincere :P nice insightful wisdom too
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Oh, dear, I hope this doesn't meant that somebody did this to you ...
morag and michael?
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
You never know, do you?But Morag is not to be trusted. She's always soft and nice to the person immediately in front of her and she's a sympathetic listener. However, it doesn't follow that she'll go out of her way to help in any other respect.You can read more about Morag's conflict-avoidant family in my long series, Moons of Deceit.
Very enjoyable. I think you're doing a wonderful job with Michael's voice.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Thank you. And now the romance will be hotting up, at least in Michael's fevered imagination. GhV
Aw. I'm glad Luna had a partner. I like Luna.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
She's amazing, isn't she? And certainly a dance partner unlike any other.
Well, that's an interesting plot twist. :D
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Twisting scheduled to continue...
Ooh, does Michael ask Morag, I wonder?
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
You'll see... Let's just say that Morag won't attend the ball unaccompanied. GhV
I wonder what's going to happen next.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Next chapter now published!
Reading this is so like reading JK's style - I don't mean to offend you, but it was... like being at Hogwarts and listening to him talk. Wonderfuly done.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Dear Beaweasley,Thanks for taking the trouble to review. I am so flattered that you think I write like JKR! There will be plenty more of Michael talking, since he is (in an innocent way) quite egocentric.Regards, GhV
I like reading stories that explore relationships we don't normally see. In fact, I think doing so gives the author a little more leeway in developing the characters.
This is an excellent start! (Now I need to go discharge some of my duties. *lol*)
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Turning the Corner)
Thanks, NSS - it's very flattering that you find time to review amid all your site duties.The Michael/Padma ship is all mine - you certainly won't be seeing much of that in any other fics. One of the challenges I set myself for this story was to give one appearance to each of the 40 students in Harry's year. Some of these appearances are very walk-on, but I've tried to give a little development to each character. See if you can spot them.Thanks for all your input, GhV