Interesting adaptation of Alice in Wonderland, even if Harry sounds a bit 'girlish'. Maybe the fact that he fell down the hole changed his gender?  Looking forward to the next chapter.  Cheers!

This is a fun story so far!  I saw elsewhere that you were inspired by a pic in the snarry_slash community on LJ.  You should post the link here.  I am sure others would love to see the inspiration for your story! 

I was especially taken by how Harry morphed into the Alice figure with the dress and the pinnafore and the bow in the hair, and it just seemed to be so natural to him.  Isn't it fun to see what you can do in an Alternate Universe?