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Soul Bound96 Reviews | 7.16/10 (96 Ratings, 0 Likes, 110 Favorites )
Draco and Hermione are back at Hogwarts for their seventh year, Head Boy and Girl. They are happy to go on hating each other until something unexpected forces them together. Where will their journey take them?
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Soul Bound
Member Since 2006 | 17 Stories | Favorited by 103 | 203 Reviews Written | 378 Review Responses
I'm 22, happily unmarried and happily enrolled in the University of my somewhat limited choice... I read constantly and write whenever I have the chance to do so. I sing, I work, I sleep, and I enjoy bickering with my awesome family. That is all.
PS: DMHP. Always.
Reviews for Collide
cool story you have here. can't wait to see what happens next!
Well as for the rating, NC-17 is no where near it, unless you have yet to complete this story. Other than that, brilliant job my fellow writer.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of Collide)
Yes, this story has 22 chapters so far and is nowhere near over. It will earn it's NC-17 rating, just not yet. Can't very well have them jumping in bed yet. :)
Response from treesandtacos (Reviewer)
Haha. Nice, I love it when writers do that. Drives others up the wall.
Do you know I don't think I want them to kiss and live happily ever after. I enjoy reading the witty, nasty come backs they both use when arguing. Just imagine what it would be like to be in the room with them, when they start. Magic, sexual and anger, the air would sizzle. Brilliant chapter, made me smirk.
I am so glad that Hermoine stood up to Draco. I love those two together, but I also hope that Draco does not hurt Hermoine deeply.
Ouch! This is going from bad to worse... they'll be ripping each other apart in no time, if nothing else. But I doubt that it will end that way, something has to give somewhere. But what?Good chapter, hope to see more very soon. Cheers!
I like the angst. Great chapter.
I do love a Hermione like this. She gives as good--and better--than she gets. Muahahaha. I like that Draco's angry, yet interested still. He's trying so hard to be indifferent, and that's making it all the more personal. hehehe
Why, I believe McGonagall has planned this on purpose. Did Albus put her up to it, the meddling wanker! How's Draco going to concentrate on his NEWTs now with her sitting on side of him. Hmmm. You don't think he'll be sneaking into her dorm anytime soon to practice Transfiguring any body parts, do you? Hmmm
Ah, there's the young man I know and love. He won't be taken in by what she's doing. Or at least not right away. He'll keep his distance. I wonder if I should make plans to include the girl to Christmas dinner at the Manor.
Oh, my poor son. He's being taken in by a woman who knows how to taunt a man. I mean really. How can he resist skimpy clothing? He's only a man beneath it all, you know. I'll have to send him some chocolate to make him feel better. It's hard to escape an enchantress.
I've truly tried to raise my son to be a gentlemen, but his father was always going behind my back and teaching him things that his own father taught him. Enjoying living with a Mublo... er... Muggle-born will be hard for him, but I'm thinking it might work. :)
I missed these stories. Good old DMHG. It's great so far. Please update.
Great start!
Oh wow, if Draco had of stayed a little longer he would have realized that Harmione obviously didn't feel the same as Ron. I must say that I do like the Draco/Harmione as a couple. I am sure Draco will continue to take his anger out on Harmione or perhaps Ron. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
I like that Hermione is giving it much less thought than Draco. I felt a little bad for Ron, but shit happens. It didn't pay for her to lead him on. I'm also glad that Draco didn't see her turn Ron out. That's gonna prove to be some good angst. Muahahaha
Ewww! Hermione kissing Ron... He probably does it with a lot of drool too. *shakes head in disgust*Just kidding, of course. :) Good chapter, can't wait to see their next meeting in their common room. Angst you say? Staying tuned for the next installement. Cheers!
I have enjoyed reading the two chapters of this story over a cup of coffee and looking forward to an update soon.
I'm really enjoying this story. I started it months ago when you started posting it, and was really happy to see the latest chapter posted. Please don't make me wait months to see what happens next!
Response from Soul Bound (Author of Collide)
I'm glad you're following it, despite the time between updates. Look for a new chapter soon. Thanks!
More, more, more hehe
Response from Soul Bound (Author of Collide)
Don't you threaten me with those pointy, flaming torches! *glares*...*whispers* Psst... I'll have the next one to you on Sunday.:-)
*Eyes bulged out of their sockets* You updated??? WOW that's something!! I have already resigned myself that I'll have to wait YEARS to know who shot Hermione... Anyway this update was very much welcome!! It was great as I knew it would be but I want MORE!! What about you giving us another surprise and update like tomorrow? Well I'll be waiting... CYA ;)
Oh an early Christmas gift! I really love this story and I'm sooo glad you updated. Thank you.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of Collide)
I'm happy that you enjoyed it, my dear. Happy upcoming Christmas!
That was quite amusing.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of Collide)
Thank you. Glad you think so! :-)
Response from Soul Bound (Author of Collide)
Thank you. Glad you think so! :-)
I completely love where you are going with this story. It is one of the best I have read so far with this pairing and I can't wait to see more of it.
I am really enjoying this story.However, I have some trouble with the following:He sat down in the winged-back chair he’d used throughout the week and rubbed his temples. He’d learned a long time ago that showing his pain to another person only brought more pain, that people will use whatever weapon another person gives them. He didn’t like feeling. He didn’t like to feel raw. It meant he was weak and that he was opening himself up for an attack from someone who would use his weakness against him. He hated feeling out of control, and that was what showing emotion was—giving up control, giving it to someone else.He hated Hermione for being able to show emotion and still be in control, for having friends who didn’t use her feelings against her, didn’t think about what way they could be used to their best advantage. It was something he’d never learned or had for himself—friends like that. He hated her for being whole while he was broken and empty. He hated her for trusting other people, something he just couldn’t do.Draco finally sat down and stared ahead.Ok, if you read the first sentence, and then read the last sentence, well, he was already sitting down. So I was rather confused to see him sitting down twice.Something else that bothered me early on was your writing that he had a TV and VCR. Are these things Canon for a Pureblood Wizard? I'm just wondering because I would have thought these would be "filthy Muggle contraptions" and as such I would be surprised if a Pureblood Wizard would have a TV and/or VCR, let alone even know what one was.Please understand, this is just some constructive criticism. I really do like this story. There are just a few areas that I had problems with.Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter!
This is really good. I like how you're developing the relationship between them.