Simply lovely!
Missy/LovesRickman

What a wonderful way to end this story, with happy tears.

Severus has lost the dark mark, good he does'nt need it to remind him of the past, now he can make a fresh start .

A wonderful use of the promts. On to the next chapter, to see what else lays in store, for Severus and Hermione.

Awesome story, great way to use your books prompts I think. I'd actually love to hear more from this story in the future if you were inclined to write more!

Such a fine fine story!  Love all of your original characters too. 

What a beautiful and touching story.

That was a very sweet story. Loved the ending, and loved the creativity behind the healing of the Caladrii.

Elura

OMG... *cries* That was very touching!! How nice... Neville's parents to be cured... I love this. Oh, and not to forget, Severus's mark also gone... *cries*

This is really lovely. Really. *sniff*

:)

This was an absolutely beautiful story. I had to go get a new box of tissues at the end. Lovely! Just lovely!

Very original with the kind of ending I like most!

Oh what a good ending I even said it aloud when I finished

Now THAT is a wonderful ending

I've seen this sort of thing with the Dark Mark before, but it feels fresh and effective in this story anyway, and I'm intrigued by the mystery you set up--about why certain things were healed, others not.

What an interesting concept--and good voice and storytelling.

Awww...that just about made me cry! I've always wanted Neville to get his parents back, he just breaks my heart! :)

Oh, nice! I like how well you write the villagers' voices. Switching dialect like that is hard to do, and you've done it quite well.

You sneaky thing! You've expanded it! And I see you are continuing your fledgling lemon writing with style and pure hotness. Well done! :)

Oh man, that's great.  I always wanted  Neville to get his parents back.  He is one of those unsung heros.  Awesome work.Tamara

Great chapter.  It has all right feel to it.  Tamara

You truely are a brilliant author to take this challenge and come up with this, is amazing.  Tamara

I said it before, and I'll say it again, I love this fic! It simply amazes me how much mystery you can smash into a short subject, and still take time to show what a caring relationship our hero and heroine have. Well done! :)

Really well done. Beautiful.

I like Owen's owl's name. Did you intentionally name it after the Grail? This was a very different story, it would make a wonderful novel-length post with some background and a little cornstarch!

Oh, the end was so sweet. And, though I dont usually like stories where Snape and Hermione are married, I enjoyed your fic very much. I bet that Neville was really happy. Did you write this whole fic just so they could be reunited as a family again? It was sweet for whatever reason you wrote it, anyways.