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Potter Place Fall 2006 Prompt Challenge The Perfect Mistake
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The Perfect Mistake

1: Chapter One

The Perfect Mistake

cocoachristy

29 Reviews   |   29 Ratings, 0 Likes, 79 Favorites )

Romance Potter Place Fall 2006 Prompt Challenge 5,876 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Two Years after Snape rejects Hermione, she finds herself in a troubling predicament. Will he help her?

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10/10

LovesRickman

Loved it!!!!!!!Missy

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks!

0/10

Dopeydora

Nice story, I am glad it had a happy ending :-)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! All of mine will!

8/10

RenitaLeandra

I do so love it when Severus and Hermione find their way to one another. :) This was a lovely story that I thoroughly enjoyed that also happened to be quite well written.*goes off in search of your other fics...*

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thank you Renita! I do too! I appreciate your kind words, you've made my day!

10/10

Gardengirl

I loved this on the exchange, and it's still great! I'm glad that Severus didn't go postal on her for not remembering; he was unusually accepting once she explained her condition. I love happy endings!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks GG! Glad you liked it! I think its because he knew what mixing alcohol with the potion she took would do. I have to have them happy!

0/10

miz

Really a sweet fluffy story. Love the characterizaions!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! Glad you liked it!

10/10

laperchette

Thank you for this story! Very sweet. I admire how you worked the challange premises into this story - very convincing and in character. I think that was difficult! Thank you!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks so much. It was hard trying to think of a realistic way for her to get pregnant! Glad you liked it!

0/10

bunnygirl79

What a beautiful story, and very Snape’ish also:). Of course he's mind reader, how can somebody think otherwise, I loved that comment in your story!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks so much

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! I am happy you enjoyed it!

10/10

Sampdoria

A lovely story, thank you for giving it to us!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

0/10

droxy

Lovely read!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thank you Droxy!

9/10

firefly124

Oh, this was very enjoyable, though I think my favorite exchange was this one:

" What do you think I am? A mind reader?” “Yes, actually.”

*g*

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! I am glad you liked my little joke there--you are the only one to comment on it!

10/10

ancientgirl

Loved it.  Thanks for sharing.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks so much

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! I am glad you liked it!

10/10

Pearle

Great story! Very creative way for her to get pregnant, potion + alcohol, I like the set up. It made it realistic. Thanks for sharing.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! I am off to read your fic soon!

8/10

Bentwaters

Very cute.  The ending is just a wonderful bit of fluff icing.  I don't think I'll stop smiling all day after this!  Thanks!!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Wow! Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! ((I have to have that bit of fluff!))

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

You know what I think already. Hehehe... *smiles*

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Yep I do... Thanks!

0/10

Brisinggammen

Lovely response to the prompt...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

!

0/10

septentrion

Nice story.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thank You!

10/10

pickles

excellent one shot chris

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thank you Patti!

10/10

Ronni

Well I loved it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks,

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! I am glad you did!

9/10

lady_rhian

What a delightful ficlet you have given us here! Believable premise, lovely progression, very sexy. Thank you for sharing. :)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks so much

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

!  So glad you liked it!

10/10

Soul Bound

This was great.  I almost wish there was more angst, or something, though.  It kind of felt like she gave in too early.  I mean, the man completely trampled her.  She pined after him for two years and there was probably a lot of pain and anger burried there for her.  Then she was perfectly willing to make a go of it all of a sudden.  I'm sure it was no picnic in the begining, but that's what I would like to have seen - a glimpse of them hashing it out, of her dealing with her hurt from how he treated her, and of him opening up.  I don't have anything bad to say about you or the story though, just that it was a wonderful story that there wasn't enough of!  If that makes sense... lolThanks for sharing it!

Response from Soul Bound (Reviewer)

Oops, double review. Ignore me.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! Usually, I LOVE lots of angst, and if this fic had been longer, there would have been plenty of it! I love angst with a happy ending!  I am glad you liked what I had though! Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Gardengirl

Awww, that's great. I really enjoyed it! Why didn't you tell me you were posting something new tonight? I had to blunder onto this all by myself

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thank you, M! Sorry I forgot to tell you, but I am glad you found and liked it!

10/10

Soul Bound

This was great.  I almost wish there was more angst, or something, though.  It kind of felt like she gave in too early.  I mean, the man completely trampled her.  She pined after him for two years and there was probably a lot of pain and anger burried there for her.  Then she was perfectly willing to make a go of it all of a sudden.  I'm sure it was no picnic in the begining, but that's what I would like to have seen - a glimpse of them hashing it out, of her dealing with her hurt from how he treated her, and of him opening up.  I don't have anything bad to say about you or the story though, just that it was a wonderful story that there wasn't enough of!  If that makes sense... lolThanks for sharing it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! Usually, I LOVE lots of angst, and if this fic had been longer, there would have been plenty of it! I love angst with a happy ending!  I am glad you liked what I had though! Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

Cerydden M_Layne

Sadly, I've never had indulgence of a party punch of uncertain content end up so well in my life.? Ah, well.? Thanks for the story and the happy ending.? I love the happy endings!?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

LOL Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! Me either come to think of it! Glad you enjoyed it!

0/10

GinnyW

YAY! I adore this little fic, Christy! Wonderfully sweet! :D

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thanks, my dear! Glad you liked it! ((You know me--has to end sweet/happy!))

10/10

LuthienCelebrindal

That was so sweet.    I loved it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

Thank you

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Perfect Mistake)

! Glad you enjoyed!

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