Snow-Doused Fire
Chapter 1 of 4
Celestial MelodyBellatrix and Tom Riddle--two of the most enigmatic characters in Harry Potter--have puzzled writers and readers alike since their equally horrifying introductions. Why did Bellatrix believe she was Lord Voldemort's most dedicated and favored follower? Why did the Dark Lord indulge a woman whom he could have squashed like an insignificant bug; why did he allow her to continue in her 'delusions,' if, indeed, they were delusions?
I believe that these allowances are not simply coincidences. Why should the most feared dark wizard of all time cater to a pawn? There must have been prior connections between the two to create this bond.
In "Black as Snow," we glimpse a snippet of Tom Riddle's life at Hogwarts, his (hypothetical) introduction to Bellatrix, and, afterwards, the special bond the witch and wizard shared ... then, and now.
Created for the wonderful rita_skeeter in MNFF's Ravenclaw Christmas Exchange, 2006.
ReviewedAuthor's Notes
As I do on so many of my other stories, I will take the time to thank everyone who has helped me with this story on the first chapter ... and the first chapter only.
That said, I would like to give a huge bouquet of dark pink roses and many *huggles* to:
- Jan (Magical Maeve), of MNFF
- Theresa (notsosaintly), of TPP
- Evie (apollo13), of MNFF
- All the wonderful Moderators/Administrators of MNFF and TPP
Snow-Doused Fire
1943
A cold sleet fell lightly to the frozen ground. Each minuscule drop of frozen rain shaping the ice sheet shattered sharply as it touched the dead and brittle earth, adding its unique hexagonal shape to the steadily growing frost graveyard slicking the barren ground. Strangely, there wasn't the slightest hint of wind; nothing stirred the spindly gray branches of the trees reaching upward like so many skeletal fingers, grasping futilely at the hidden stars, reaching, hoping, searching for an answer, a spring that seemed never to come. It was not a normal winter's night. Where was the whirling blizzard? Where was the tortured scream of the late-migrating birds tossed and turned brutally by the gusting zephyrs? Where was the snow, turning the skeletons of winter into objects of beauty? Gone...never there, really. This winter's night was not one in which to be out wandering; yet, beneath the branches of one of these trees (a truly magnificent Horse-chestnut, standing thirty-five meters tall, its uppermost branches tangled together to form a crown-like mass of brittle, brown, skeletal limbs) huddled a cloaked figure, its head bowed and held tightly by raw, wind-bitten hands.
This depressing, wintry scene was watched closely by the heavily-bundled figure of a tall boy of about seventeen, his handsome, white face shadowed by a tangle of dark locks. No expression lit the angles of his finely-boned face as he moved closer to the tree, his hand shoved deep into his pocket, protectively clutching something. The boy's eyes narrowed against the driving needles of sleet as he neared the huddled figure.
The form under the Horse-chestnut shook violently, whether from the cold or from some inner emotion, it was hard to tell, but whoever it was did not seem to notice the stealthy footsteps of the approaching seventeen-year-old boy. Perhaps it was the patter of sleet on the dead earth that masked the crunch of the boy's gentle footfalls, but as the handsome lad stepped ever nearer, the cloaked, prone form continued to quiver and tremble beneath the frozen branches of the Horse-chestnut. Coming closer, the boy heard a whispered plea, repeated over and over in a petulant, high-pitched feminine voice:
"Please give it to me. I need it. I love it. It's mine. Give it to me. I want it."
The voice, infinitely girlish, soared occasionally into the deep alto of womanhood, yet held a high note of cold cruelty and loss that rang an answering and similar cry in the bosom of the watching boy. Creeping closer, the tall pale lad stooped to the crouched figure on the ground...it was his duty, as Head Boy, to care for all other students ... Not that he upheld this duty stalwartly, but he'd be thrown out of Hogwarts, the only home he'd ever known, if he left this ridiculously ignorant student out here to die of frostbite.
"Hey, you," he whispered, drawing his clenched and gloved hand from his pocket; in his firm grasp, he clutched a long thin wand. "Hey, you," he repeated as the figure on the ground continued to shake, rocking back and forth, the same plea issuing forth brokenly from the black hole in the hood of the cloak. "You shouldn't be out here. What House are you from? Fifty points from whatever it is for failure to observe school rules. Now, come inside; you must be freezing. Don't you know that you shouldn't be out here this late? Who are you?"
During this speech, the girl on the ground had paused, her movements stilled in fright, but as the lad ended his admonishment, and reached out a derisive hand to the small figure opposite him, she suddenly sprang into action. With a gasp, the cloaked girl started jerkily, jumping to her feet, her thick, fur-lined hood falling back as she did so. Despite himself, the crouching boy gasped as a completely unexpected sight met his staring eyes: the surprised girl, whose own heavily-lidded eyes were wide in shock and surprise, was exquisite. Never had the tall youth ever seen a more stunning figure; she had dark, almost black, hair..."Raven," the youth whispered to himself, his chiseled lips silently forming the word, oblivious to the girl's probing stare...and brown eyes flecked with amber, their deep glow as ever-changing as the fire that gave 'burn stone' its name.
Those same striking eyes quickly settled under steamy, exotic lids, though they continued to flicker with ill-concealed emotion as if lit from the inside by a golden candle flame, and stared condescendingly down at the boy crouched on the frozen ground. But not for long did they stay proud, for those eyes were accustomed to quelling the heart of any they deemed too insignificant of their interest; however, once the glowing pair had settled arrogantly on the pale lad kneeling on the icy ground, they flickered again, confusedly, and a red flush crept guiltily up the eyes' owner's pale neck, flushing her white cheeks.
The boy, not long speech-bereaved or embarrassed, rose swiftly and gracefully to his feet and looked down at the stunning girl standing cowed before him. Neither spoke a word, but for the lad's earlier questions. Possessively, lustfully, the boy's gaze traveled over the trim body of the slender girl, no, woman, standing before him. Her cloak masked her body from head to toe, but a light burst of wind...its presence, along with the heavy, snow-laden clouds, signifying the oncoming blizzard...swirled the dark material to the side, revealing an elegant waist, full bosom, and the Hogwarts' school ensemble of stockings, skirt, and sweater.
His dark eyes traveling slowly and lasciviously up the girl's body, pausing briefly to caress the woolen material covering her ample bosom, the boy noticed, too, the quick rise and fall of her chest, and smirked. He often had this nerve-wrecking effect on girls, but never on one as captivating as the creature shivering before him. Why hadn't he ever seen her in the halls at school? "What House are you in?" he asked abruptly.
The girl, her high cheekbones flushed scarlet, blood against the snow white of her skin, seemed to lose her poise and, stammering a little, said, "S-Slytherin House; do I know you?" A confused look had settled on the girl's elegant brow; hers was a face that recalled centuries of specialized breeding, yet the indecision displayed so prominently in its fine lines served only to empower the lad watching her: He loved seeing others' confusion, fright, or fear, for, despite her beauty, she was still a pawn to him. Smiling a gorgeous, clear smile, the tall boy stepped deliberately towards the girl. With an involuntary squeak, she stepped back, her booted foot scrabbling a little at the tender, exposed roots of the groaning Horse-chestnut tree, clipping off pieces of silver root-bark in the process.
The boy's response was coordinated, intimidating, and perfectly suave; he looked the beautiful girl straight in the eye and, his high voice scintillating downward into a warm drawl, murmured, "Of course you know me. How could you not? I am He, remember?"
She, of course, had no idea who this handsome stranger was; she had made it quite clear that she'd never set eyes on him before in her life, yet the lad's easy manner produced the desired affect on the prostrate young woman before him, drawing her passionate emotions like a moth to a candle. The girl stood, frozen, transfixed by the black eyes of the handsome boy standing before her; her throat was working quickly as she tried desperately to swallow, but no sound issued forth. Something about this boy was making it impossible for her to function properly. She couldn't breathe. Flecks of ice crusted her lustrous dark hair, her finely-shaped eyebrows, and the wind...which had picked up dramatically by this time...whipped the ice-laden strands into her eyes, obscuring her vision as the boy moved fractionally closer. Breathing faster and faster, the girl's wind-whipped hands rose to her throat, clenching the antique clasp of her cloak tighter as the tall boy finally reached her.
Smiling, the beautiful lad swept his eyes once more over the girl's body, finally allowing his gaze to creep slowly back to her flushed face; his black eyes bored into her glowing, glistening dark brown ones. At that searching look, the girl completely lost her carefully-controlled demeanor. With a carnal growl, she flung herself into the boy's arms; he seemed to know this would happen and tightened his hold around her waist, lacing his hands possessively around the trim figure. As she tilted her sharply-pointed, lovely face up to his, the girl saw a flicker of answering passion reflected in the boy's midnight-black eyes, and suddenly his red, feverish lips were pressed to her own, greedily seeking, pulling, biting.
Viciously, the boy bit into the girl's thin lower lip, eliciting blood and a mewling cry from her that was quickly silenced as the boy's tongue pushed itself into the girl's mouth. Sighing, the girl collapsed against the boy's taut, carefully-maintained body, her hands scrabbling up his back, his neck, to finally tangle in his dark hair. The two bodies burned with boiling fire despite the freezing sleet raining down on their entwined bodies, and, as if in answer to the flame within their bodies, a shimmering green glow emanated slowly from their embracing figures, growing steadily brighter and highlighting the couple's dark features even as snow began to fall softly then thicker and faster on the couple.
Suddenly, as if the white snow had woken him from a dark, forbidden pleasure, the boy pulled his mouth from the girl's, his flushed face a contrast to the creamy winter around him. Panting, he pressed a long, gloved finger to the girl's equally flushed forehead, the chill of his finger creeping forth from the wool. "Who are you?" he asked again. Never before had a woman had this effect on him; never before had he allowed a woman to get close enough to have this affect on him.
The girl, her heavily-lidded eyes as dreamy as if she had been drugged, also seemed to wake from her trance. But as she opened her swollen, red mouth to answer, a particularly vicious gust of wind whipped around the couple, and the girl's outline began to fade, her beautiful body losing color as if she were only a drawing: First her outline blurred, then her voice disappeared fully, lost to the winds of winter, the brown of her eyes faded fractionally, and then her entire body began to lose its substance.
With an animal cry, the boy flung himself closer to the girl, desperately trying to hold her. Her vague features frightened, the girl lifted arms of light to the boy, reaching for him as well. Despite their efforts, however, the girl continued to evaporate at an alarming rate as thick, pelting snow dashed the boy this way and that. As she disappeared, the boy began to cry, true tears of pain and anger flowing down his smooth face; another possession belonging to him, perhaps the most precious one he'd ever owned, was being taken from him. Cold tears, not of love but of cold, quiet fury, ran down his structured, pale cheeks, clouding his eyes, freezing his elegant nose with their icy rivulets of moisture, but, somehow, despite the swiftly-falling snow and his tear-clouded eyes, the boy managed to catch the last candle-like glimmer of light in the girl's enchanting dark eyes before a final gust of wind swept her fully away.
*
In the Slytherin dormitory dungeons of Hogwarts, a flushed young boy of about seventeen years woke with a start. Raising himself on shaking elbows, the boy reached up a pale, long, thin hand to his head and pushed the damp, dark locks from his eyes; if the hand hadn't been, in fact, a hand, one might have received the illusion of a long-legged white spider creeping brazenly into a flattened patch of rain-beaten weeds. Tom Riddle sighed shakily; his dream had seemed so real ... and that girl had been positively stunning! He could still remember all her characteristics very clearly: Her taste, her smell, but her eyes most of all, her captivating, flashing eyes burning with that carefully concealed fire. She was enchanting; he had to see her again.
Though his reminisces were pleasant, such dreams were not the stuff of greatness ... or remembrance. With a yawn, Tom dragged himself wearily from his bed and, shivering in the damp cool of the dungeons, padded across the heavily-carpeted stone floor to a trunk containing his most prized and precious belongings. Flinging the trunk's lid open on rusted hinges, Tom pulled out a half-melted tallow candle, a brass candlestick holder, a heavily-embellished book of blank parchment, a paring knife, and an owl quill with a pot of black ink. Holding the items delicately in his elegant hands, Tom strode back to his bed onto which he promptly plopped, spilling the various possessions clasped in his hands onto the mint green wool sheets.
A distant cough sounded, echoing through the catacombs of the Slytherin dormitories. Yet another reason not to live in the dungeons, Tom thought as he rolled his eyes and concentrated on the task of shaving his quill into a point. Oh, but how Tom loved the dungeons. They had the closed-in comfort that towers and the open air withheld.
Sniffing greedily, Tom inhaled the sharp, clear scent of winter that permeated his room, conducted into the depths of the dungeons by a specially-made air hole connected and cleared (magically) to the roof of Hogwarts castle. Tom had been offered special quarters due to his status as Head Boy in the upper regions of Hogwarts, but he preferred the safe feel of his room in the dungeons to the open-air terraces of Hogwarts. The room reminded him of an armoire he'd once owned ... long ago, at the orphanage. Tom's face contorted in silent rage at the unwanted memory of the orphanage; he dropped the knife and quill, snatched up his wand and, in a clipped whisper, muttered, "Accio table."
Instantly, a heavy table zoomed across the room, making no sound at all as it skimmed several centimeters from the stone surface; Tom savagely plunked the brass candleholder down on the rich ash surface of the heavy table he'd just moved, a dark scowl marring his lovely face. Fiercely, Tom jammed the tallow into the candleholder and, pointing his wand at the unlit candle, mumbled, "Incendio." Immediately, the candle flame flared to life, and Tom found himself thinking once more of the flickering flame buried deep in the enigmatic, vision-girl's beautiful eyes.
As he stared dreamily...a position possessing sure embarrassment if he were to be found...at the stone ceiling of his room, Tom felt something moist creeping onto the knee of his pajamas. "Damn!" he yelped, leaping agilely from the bed like a graceful, long-legged antelope. The pitch-black ink from his overturned, insecurely-capped inkpot had begun to leak and soak into his pajamas like drops of dark blood. With another muttered curse, Tom pointed his wand at his knee: "Scourgify," he spat, and again, "Scourgify," as he pointed his yew wand at the creeping pool of darkness on the warm, woolen sheets. Sighing in exasperation, Tom grabbed the bottle of ink and set it beside the candle on the table before climbing back into bed. Grasping the quill, a rather commonplace feather in such elegant hands, Tom dipped the sharpened end into the bottle of ink and, opening his book, placed the ink-soaked tip to the parchment; it spread, shining and grasping, on the parchment before Tom, contemplating the point of this midnight writing, began his first sentence. "Last night, I dreamed of a temptress..."
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8 Reviews | 9.5/10 Average
This is an extremely well written and fascinating tale. Perhaps it is becasuse I recently cosplayed Bella at Portus and found myself contemplating the character more, but I am all agog to discover how you will weave in the bonds of her relationship to the Dark Lord. I also love the depth of thought you have put into the policits and intrigues within Pureblood society. I eagerly await more.
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Thank you! I really appreciate your comments. And how wonderful that you got to play Bella! She's definitely one of my favourites. I do try, you know, to thoroughly research before I write my stories, so I'm thrilled that that came across to you.Once again, thanks for your thoughts. I will try to update as soon as possible, but I think you know how that goes, eh? =)~Julia
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Thank you! I really appreciate your comments. And how wonderful that you got to play Bella! She's definitely one of my favourites. I do try, you know, to thoroughly research before I write my stories, so I'm thrilled that that came across to you.Once again, thanks for your thoughts. I will try to update as soon as possible, but I think you know how that goes, eh? =)~Julia
I loved the reaction of Mr. Burke, and also the jack in the box.
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Thanks again,
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
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I'm glad you're enjoying it. Mr. Burke was fun to write, the old goat, and the jack-in-the-box was another image that I wish I could paint. *giggles* C'est la vis; I'll settle for "drawing" it with words rather than painting it.
You have my thanks, though, for reviewing. 'Tis very encouraging. =)
~Julia~
I loved the imagery, and your fantastic ability to paint the scene with words. I can't wait to see the solution of the mystery of why she disappeared.
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Thanks,
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
, =)
I'm glad you liked it. This story--if you can call it that--is mostly about imagery and creating a picture with my words. It was supposed to have some form to it, but I like to think of it as more of a ... Monet. *giggles* After all, it's a painting, not a movie.
I just realized how little sense that made, so I'll say "thank you" right now, and remark upon why she disappeared. It was a dream. Plain and simple. =) Tom Riddle had a dream about a girl in the future and ... that was that. =)
Thank you, again, for your compliments. It warms my poetic heart to know that this story was appreciated.
~Julia~
wow. Bella... wow. sounds just like how i would imagine her as a child. I never have, but if i had, this is how... oh never mind. you know what i mean. I didn't think I would, seeing as this is a like... not golden trio... story, but im findign that I really like this story so far and am anxious for more!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Thanks
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
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I'm glad you can "see" Bellatrix and can imagine her being as self-obsessed and spoiled as I do. *giggles* The next chapter should prove even more entertaining in regards to Bella's character.
This story, as I've written in my summary, was for a gift exchange, so it's not something I'd normally write, but I had fun doing it and I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Thanks, again!
~Julia~
I liked it very much. Good Bellatrix. Thanks for posting. I liked the way you set it up.
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Thank you very much, Southern. =)
I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this and thank YOU for being a wonderful moderator. There should be more of this, but it won't probably be up 'til later. You all need your Christmas/holiday break, too! *giggles*
Thanks again.
~Julia~
<33 Once again, words cannot describe how much I love this story - the description, the plot and the characterisation are all perfect. I can't wait for the next installment. The encounter between Bellatrix and Tom was brilliant, and I also enjoyed the interaction between Bella and Rodolphus. Lust-hate relationships are veeery interesting. xD
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Hurrah! 'Tis my favourite of all the stories I've written. The next installment should be coming soon. It's very vivid in my mind, I just need to find some time to sit down and write it. GUH!
And I do love lust-hate relationships; they're fun. *sniggers evilly* =P
Thank you! I absolutely love your reviews. XD
~Julia
<3 I have as much love for this chapter as for the previous one. The first encounter between Bellatrix and Tom Riddle was great; I loved how it was 'love at first rescue' for Bellatrix. I have to wonder why Tom did rescue her though... Maybe he felt some sort of connection to her?Please, update soon! :D Reading your story makes me want to write, even though I know what I write won't be as good. xD
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Oh, thank you! *hugs* I'm so glad you liked this one. As for the rescuing, Tom did it not only because he recognized Cygnus Black (who was a very influential wizard), but because he semi-recognized Bella's potential. However, he would swear up and down that he knocked her carelessly out of the way. *grins*
And, 'tis updated, by the way. =) I hope you like the new chapter and I'm sure that whatever you write will be absolutely lovely.
~Julia
ZOMG I LOVE THIS. Your writing style is awesome; so poetic and descriptive. It took me a paragraph or so to get used to it but then, I was hooked. I've never read a fanfic about Tom Riddle at Hogwarts before, and despite knowing that he's the most evil wizard since Grindelwald (probably before Grindelwald as well) in this fic he's really cool. I've also never thought to explore the relationship between him and Bellatrix before, and yet reading your summary, I thought, Yeah, that's a good point. Why does he seem to keep her so close? Off to read the next chapter now :D
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Black as Snow)
Hee! You have definitely made my day. You leave such descriptive and comprehensive reviews. *huggles reviews* They make me very happy. =)
And, yes, I believe that there was a great deal more in the Bella/Voldemort relationship than canon dictates. And I'm thrilled that you like the style; most people find it too ... wordy, I guess. But I love to paint with words. =)
Once again, thank you!
~Julia