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Potter Place Fall 2006 Prompt Challenge Buried Secret
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Buried Secret

phoenix

14 Reviews   |   14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 23 Favorites )

Angst Romance Erotica Potter Place Fall 2006 Prompt Challenge 3,279 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger

This was written for the Potter Place Fall Prompt #17. Hermione finds herself pregnant... and has no idea who the father is. She's been in a monogamous relationship with Ron, but he's been off playing Quidditch for longer than she's been pregnant. Who is the father, and how did it happen? (Rape isn't a creative option.)

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phoenix

Member Since 2006  |  54 Stories  |  Favorited by 136  |  1,108 Reviews Written  |  1,209 Review Responses

I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal

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0/10

Madame DeFarge

i do love a Viktor/Hermione pairing.   Ron is a ditz and shouldnt be in the same room with her!!

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

YES!!!!!!!
Totally what I wanted. Thanks! Great! Can't say enough. You rock!

10/10

Maddy Riddle

Lovely story. :)

Good choice for the baby's father. I like HG/VK. And I'm glad about the choice Hermione made. I also like Harry behaviour.

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Thanks. That was the hardest part for me to come up with, actually. I have to thank my beta for pointing him out as a candidate to me. I just don't see her with Ron, and this was a good chance to rectify that. And I think the choice was a bit unexpected. I think most folks would automatically think Snape because that's such a popular pairing. And I do like to think that Harry would finally grow up, as many times as I have him acting childishly, I thought it would be good to give him a reprieve. :D

0/10

MDB

Finally a really sweet little romance for Viktor and Hermione!

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Thanks. I really liked this unique way of getting them together. These little challenges can really stretch your imagination and I liked this difficult little exercise. I do think she is well suited to Viktor and would like to see more of them in the last book. I just don't see her and Ron.

0/10

MollysSister

awww I am glad she didnt go through with the marriage to Ron! Happy endings are a good thing.

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Yup, I'm glad it wasn't Ron, too. LOL This one was a lot of fun as it's a different method of storytelling that I normally use. I do like to do flashbacks from time to time, but this one was more involved than the others. Of course, that was really the only way to fulfill the challenge. :)

0/10

wannabedesigner

That was really sweet.  I have always loved this pairing, and am so glad that they had a happy ending. 

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Thanks. I have a different little Viktor/Hermion fic in mind, but I just haven't gotten around to putting it all together. I had thought this might spur it on, but nothing so far. Too many other projects I think. LOL And I am glad I was able to work this one for a happy ending, they deserve it.

0/10

Trickie Woo

Finally a Hermione romance that I like! I loathe the SS/HG pairing, but I like this pairing. I enjoyed reading it, as I always do with your stories. In some ways it reminded me of 2 old movies, one with Bette Davis and one with Olivia de'Havilland, but with a better outcome than either of those movies.I really wouldn't mind seeing more of these two together.

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Thanks. I really did like the way this worked out, especially since I wasn't sure who the daddy was going to be when I started it. LOL Thank goodness for a beta with a good idea. I never would have thought of this twist. I do have at least one more HG/VK fic in mind, I just need to find time to write it. :D

0/10

snapeophile

I really like how you answered this prompt--and though I'm usually an SSGH shipper, I liked Viktor and Hermione together very much. 

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Thank you very much. This was a really fun prompt to do. :D I pretty much ship anyone with Hermione other than Ron. LOL

0/10

KiraAlexia

A very sweer story.

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Thank you very much. Sometimes an idea just runs away from me and I was very happy with this outcome. :)

10/10

theMadamSnape

Good fic.  I was worried this would be a RWHG fic, but you were smart enough not to end it with that crappy pairing.

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Thanks. The Ron/Hermione pairing stumps me every time I think about it. The only thing I can come up with is that JKR had a crush on a redhead in school. I wanted her with someone she could respect and Viktor fit that description.

0/10

LuthienCelebrindal

Good story.  It's so sweet.  I love Viktor and Hermione.  You should write more about them!!! 

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

Thanks. I do have a Viktor/Hermione story that is sitting on my computer with very little done to it. Someday, I do hope to actually write that one out. He's one of the few characters I could see her with, mostly because we don't know too much about him and can fill in the holes to make him someone she would respect.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Awww, that's so good. I'm glad you took this one up. I saw it and thought it would be a tough one to do. I like this ship as well as my normal one. I'm glad she didn't stay with Ronniekins. :)

Response from phoenix (Author of Buried Secret)

I liked the premise of this one, but was at a loss as to who should be the daddy. I was going to go the usual Snape or Lucius route, but my lovely beta reminded me about Viktor and I knew I had to do it. I never did get Hermione/Ron. Makes me wonder if JKR had a crush on a redhead back in school. I'm glad you liked it. I had a great deal of fun with it. :D

9/10

severuslover

Well, I’m not the biggest Hermione/Victor fan, but I really liked this story. Very unique idea! Keep up the good writing!~Jen

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EverMystique

I like the premise of the memory block bit. I'm just not a Viktor fan. LOL. Nice story.

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