haiku i. and ii.

ravine

5 Reviews | 6.0/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Angst Poetry: Haiku 116 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Two images related to a pregnancy. Rated T due to concept of loss.

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Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: prompted by the Alchera project

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ravine

Member Since 2006 | 4 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 12 Reviews Written | 21 Review Responses

Thirty-something single mom prone to bouts of binge thinking and suspended animation. HP fanatic, grad student, penultimate peon & word-geek extraordinaire.

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Southern_Witch_69

Darn, looks like I'm too late. I just went to see the site, and now it's gone and become something else. Anyway, I liked them. :)

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Raira

How sad. It reminds me of how I felt after my miscarriage.

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Cissy_n_Snape

You've said much with so few words.

Response from ravine (Author of haiku i. and ii.)

Thanks much

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togspled

very very well done.

Response from ravine (Author of haiku i. and ii.)

Thanks much. I appreciate your support

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notsosaintly

I've had two miscarriages, so this was very pertinent to me. Haikus can say so much, so brilliantly, with so few words.

Response from ravine (Author of haiku i. and ii.)

Thanks much - I really appreciate you expressing that you connected with the images.

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