This was a very interesting and intriguing approach. I don't normally like dialogue-driven stories, but this is well-laid out.

This was such a delight to read. I loved their private conversation in public. Brilliant, beautiful, charming, enchanting. Carrying over all important information and reasurations, yet never breaking the Secrecy Law (as if that was the most important point there...). I'm off to see what else you have posted here. This is just such a delight, I want more of your writing.

Just found this. I loved the dialogue, weighted with an alternate meaning of ... hmmm. Lots of fun to guess. Hope that someday you'll post the story about the Sussex cafe.

I'm so glad you've posted this story here! I like your writing.

Nicely done. I enjoyed the dialogue and thinking up my own ideas as to what they were truly saying. I'm thinking they'll be meeting again soon. Good work.

very interesting. i wonder what book she was after? hmmm.

This really is an interesting dialog.  I can see that there is a completely different conversation taking place under the surface. 

It might be interesting to have Snape show up in Somerset one day while Hermione is there. I'd love to read a subsequent dialog between them.  Are you thinking about writing one?