Very good concept. However it felt a little rushed, especially the jump from harsh Snape to understanding Snape. But it was otherwise entertaining and a good piece of writing. Lotsa Love,

OHmygoodness I thought he had pulled a runner on her! You fooled me!

A great twist on what could have been a very tired theme! I liked it a lot. Well done, and thanks for sharing

Aww...that was rather cute. I wasn't quite sure at the beginning, but I ended up really liking it. Great job!~Jen

Good story. I was worried for her briefly, but it worked out nicely.

That was really enjoyable. I really hope that they can someday stop running. Two people running is much harder than one. I enjoyed their back and forth bickering/banter and the resolution. And I liked how you twisted the ending some. I thought he'd left her too. He certainly can be sneaky when he wants to be. Thanks for the delightful read! :)

I liked the banter between them.  The ending was a nice twist, for a minute there I thought he'd left her too.Nice work.

Phew!  You had me scared there when she woke up and found his stuff missing.  I'm glad they're off together, although I do hope she can get him cleared so eventually he can STOP being on the run.  Thanks for posting this!!!

I got a little nervous that he was really gone again.  Great ending.