Be a Good Girl
Chapter 2 of 12
from_n_to_hTonks comforts her mother when a sister is lost to her forever.
ReviewedAndromeda threw herself to the bed and cried. How could Bellatrix do this? Andromeda knew that she was the black sheep of the family, and had not spoken to Bella since marrying Ted, but had hoped that Bella’s actions were a result of an Imperius curse. With He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named gone, however, Andromeda was forced to realize that Bella’s actions against the Longbottoms were her own choice. It was the final, horrifying truth. Bella truly believed in the pure-blood supremacy and would go to Azkaban for it. They would never be true sisters again.
Nymphadora wandered in. “Mommy, are you sad? Please don’t cry Mommy, I don’t want you to be sad!” The little girl crawled up onto the bed and into her mother’s arms. Andromeda wiped her tears away, but did not stop crying entirely.
“I am sad, baby girl, but it’s not your fault. I’m sad because your Auntie Bella was naughty and she hurt someone. Do you remember Auntie Bella?” Even though Bella had disowned Andromeda and refused to admit she had a niece, Andromeda resolutely sent pictures and kept pictures of both her sisters about the house.
“She’s the lady with lots of black hair. I wish my hair was pretty like Auntie Bella’s.” Nymphadora’s own hair was magically dyed blond, as her natural color was the most unnatural shade of green. Andromeda had asked the Healers, but apparently none of them knew what had happened. They suggested that perhaps the problem would solve itself once the child reached magical age.
“We can change your hair color to black, baby, but I thought you liked looking like Auntie Cissy.” Nymphadora shook her head and tugged on the locks in question. Andromeda sighed and sat up on the bed, pulling her only child into her lap. “Will you promise me that when you grow up, you will be a good girl and never judge a person until you’ve spoken to them yourself?” The little girl said she would and climbed down from the bed.
“I will always be a good girl, Mommy. I’ll be your very good girl and then you’ll never be sad about me.” Nymphadora turned to run from the room, but tripped and landed on her hands and knees. The girl had been born clumsier than an ox. She looked back at her mother, eyes showing worry that she was being bad. Andromeda leaned over and tapped her daughter on the nose. Sometimes the love in her heart swelled so that she felt it would burst through her body. It certainly helped cut through the grief of losing a sister who had chosen a life worse than death.
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16 Reviews | 4.25/10 Average
haha, the culture club. nice chapter, as usual
Response from from_n_to_h (Author of Unusually Loved)
thank you. I do like my pop culture.
i loved this chapter (and the last one too. i missed it the first time around) i love seeing young tonks become the tonks from the books.
Response from from_n_to_h (Author of Unusually Loved)
Thanks, my dedicated reader! I love Tonks, and seeing her in the books suggests that she had a history equal to The Golden Trio. I am trying to give her a good time.
Dear from_n_to_h,
I am enjoying your story very much! I love Tonks, and I wish there was more in the canon and fandom dedicated to her.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Sincerely,
Mrs. Mystified
Response from from_n_to_h (Author of Unusually Loved)
Thanks for reading! I love Tonks very much, she's easily my favorite character. I've been told by others that I'm a bit like Tonks myself. :) Perhaps a lot of us can identify with her, and that's why she's so well-loved by her fans.
Response from Mrs Mystified (Reviewer)
Dear from_n_to_h, I think part of why she's so easily loved is that she's one of the few (possibly the only) character that's really spunky!
She was so refreshing in OoTP, when everything was sort of gloomy, there was good ole' Tonks with her colorful hair!
I was glad to see Remus come to his senses in HBP and date her.
So, when is the next chapter coming.....?
Sincerely,
Mrs. Mystified
Okay. I'm hooked. It's a cute little story, and I positively need to know "What happens next". May I scream, "More, more!" without sounding like a fangirl?
Response from from_n_to_h (Author of Unusually Loved)
You may always scream. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story!
Thanks for the review! Yeah, Risk just seemed like a Percy kind of game to me...And I made Andromeda the kind of mother I would be. I don't raise no whiners. ;)
Response from from_n_to_h (Reviewer)
sorry, everyone. this was supposed to be a response and now I can't delete it.
I really like where this is going. I hope there is more posted soon!
Response from from_n_to_h (Author of Unusually Loved)
I'm trying to keep up with having 2 constantly in the queue. Thanks for the reviewing me!
Great story, love, beautiful prose.
Response from from_n_to_h (Author of Unusually Loved)
Thanks my lovely!
Teehee! I love that you let Charlie be her first "love" in this story. Good plot! Their reactions were perfect!
I like the relationship with her dad. I find it interesting that she is "closer" to him than her mum (feeling comfortable in this type of convo anyway).
Muahahaha... Traditions rock!
Good decision about the Ravenclaw choice. I also like that she didn't get things first time around like some do in most stories.
hehehe... naughty Tonks. I like the decision explanation about her name choice
Ah, I love the outcome of the talk, and you know, I adore Hooch. She's just perfect here, dear.
I liked Andromeda's reaction to Tonks' letter. I'd be incensed, too.
I like this take on her feelings about her family. Excellent.
Great start to your story