Moving On
GinnyW20 Reviews | 6.35/10 (20 Ratings, 0 Likes, 12 Favorites )
It is the eve of the start of a new term, and Remus is worried about two people that he has known for a very long time.
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I'm a 40+ year old mother of 4 who works full-time, goes to school, and writes in what little spare time I have. Once upon a time I co-moderate the SS/HG Gift Exchange with Shiv5468 and Scattered Logic.
Reviews for Moving On
Very well done. The set up was well played out. The only thing I wished to learn that was not in here is whether the bastard still had his dangly bits in place when Hermione got done with the domestic assault issue. LOL.
Great story. I love how Remus and Minerva work together in this! Severus and Hermione deserve a little happiness after all the things they've been through. :D
this story was very good, please, write a sequel or make it into a chaptered story.
I liked the idea of this story quite a bit, but I felt a little bogged down in all the expository parts. I think it could be improved by more action or dialogue mixed in with the "telling" parts of the story. I know this is difficult with this ship because we all want to explain what happened and then move on to the actual story.Thanks for writing and sharing. I enjoyed getting to read this piece.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
Thank you. I agree, it needs some work. I'd like to make some edits to it and add another part... but that will have to wait until I have more time. Thanks, Keket!
Oh, please do revisit this story line. I know you've been incredibly busy with the exchange, but this story is lovely!
So bitter-sweet. I like that this is from Remus' POV, well done. Yes, I think it may need a continuation to see if they really 'just go for a walk.' ;)
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
Thank you, Broom. Yeah, writing from Remus' POV was a new thing. I've been experimenting with different characters lately, I used to only write Snape or Hermione. :)
Please, please, please don't leave this as a one shot! It is screaming out for a whole novel!!!! I want Severus to really stir up a hornets nest and help Hermione to get Revenge on the Red Romeo!A little lemony goodness between our two heroes wouldsn't go amiss either!Brilliant!!!Blessings x 
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
LOL! Yes, it could easily be an entire novel, though I don't think that I'd take it to that point either. Though I'm dying to write Hermione's reaction to seeing Ron's daughter in the school and such. Plus someone pointed out some very pointed questions that I know the answer to, but I had considered were really 'missing' until she commented. There will at the very least be one more one-shot to follow-up, if not more... we'll see. :)
Thank you! ~Ginny
Please continue this when you have the time. I loved what you wrote so far!
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
Thank you so much! Yes, I think that you're right... it needs more. It will be a few months. I have my WIPs and another one-shot that need attention first... it's like my own little queue. ;) Cheers! ~Ginny
Lovely! Very well done and very sweet :)
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
Thank you so much! Glad that you liked it! :) ~Ginny
Ok I agree you have set yourself up for a lovely story lol
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
LOL,
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
. Yes, I know, it could be a short story or a full-length novel. LOL! I will likely come back to it... I sort of fell in love with it rather quickly. But there are others that need attention first. :) Thank you! ~Ginny
A one-shot?!? Oh, no my dear...you simply CANNOT be allowed to let it go at that, not when you've come up with such a tantalizing premise! We'll give you time to finish your WIPs, but this is just too good to be left as a one-shot.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
LOL! Oh, thank you! I'm so glad that you like the set-up and premise. My muse was feeling incredibly devious last week. But yes, I like it too... there is quite a bit that I'd like to say on the subject. :)
Thank you! ~Ginny
What a great little one-shot and I do think that it would make a lovely little plot-bunney! I enjoyed the interfering Remus and the matchmaker Minerva. Here's hoping that you do return to this after the WIP's are done.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
:) Yes, usually my plot bunnies don't bite quite that hard... this one just infected me so rapidly, I was rather caught off guard by it. I will return to it, but it will be awhile. So, for now, it's as it stands. Thank you! ~Ginny
I like this a lot. It is so hopeful. And yeah, I'm hoping you'll revisit. :-)
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
Thank you, litc! I'm glad that you like it. Yeah, I think I'll revisit it... it'll be a couple of months. Other stories have priority. :) Thank you!
~Ginny
Ack!!! You can't leave it as a one-shot! That is too horrible for us to take. Please have mercy on us and revisit this-I want more!
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
LOL! Goodness! You guys always want more! Though one reviewer had too many pointed questions that left me with the forgone conclusion that I must revisit this. It will just be a little while... I must finish my WIPs first. (Must, must, MUST!) :D
Thank you! ~Ginny
Response from WickedlyWanton (Reviewer)
I know, I know. Just as long as you do it. I also have too many fish in the frying pan (is that the euphemism?) so I know what you mean. I'll be patient, if I have to. But I will be waiting for more updates!
I like this. I'd like to know just what it was that made Hermione smile, so please come back to it one day (so long as it wasn't something along the lines of 'so I'll put the doxies in Lupin's underwear if you starch Minerva's').
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
Thank you so much. LOL! No, nothing that corney. I think that I will come back to it, but it'll be a bit. For now, it's as it stands. Cheers! ~Ginny
Gah! Nooooooooo!!!Oh please you have to at least do another one-shot. I would love to read their conversation.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
:) Oh so nosy,
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
! Eavesdropping on their private conversation, tsk tsk. My muse is giving me so many ideas that I feel like I'm going to have to come back to this. It's just going to be a little bit. Thank you! ~Ginny
Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)
Me? Nosy? Hell yes.
Great story. Really do hope you come back and do more with it.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
Thank you so much! I will do the best that I can! :D ~Ginny
Oh wow. I liked this ALOT. So much there to expand on. But I've read the reviews and know you've got other things in line before adding to this so I won't beg ^.~ I will however put in my two cents that if you "did" happen to take this longer than the one-shot I would most definitely be there to read and enjoy it. So just keep writing and I'll keep reading. 
Oh, that was wonderful! Will there be more? I want to see their reactions at having to teach those students, hear what Severus said to Hermione, and find out how things will be!
Loved it - just read about in on your LJ, and I really enjoyed Remus' point of view.
If you should decide to come back to it, let us know! I'd love to see this continued.
Thank you!
Response from GinnyW (Author of Moving On)
Thank you! I truly liked how this turned out too. It needs some work, but I know what I want to happen next. It's just giving the story a chance to be written... life has been so busy lately. ;)