Remembrall
Chapter 2 of 10
snapeophileEmma questions her sanity. The Death Eaters regroup after failure. Severus Snape arrives to collect the Horcrux for the Order.
ReviewedA/N: I'm so grateful to my wonderful beta, JaneAverage. And JKR still owns all you recognize.
Chapter 2: Remembrall
Emma rushed into school. She was late but would be damned before she would answer any of Roberta’s questions. Waking up alone, with bruises and a pounding head in one’s own hallway was not exactly an indicator of good mental health. Emma forced on a smile and, when asked, made up a lie about slipping in the shower. She had the feeling that Roberta didn’t buy it. She also had the powerful feeling that something not right had happened that morning. It wasn’t that she couldn’t remember, but rather she did not trust the veracity of her memories.
She knew she had seen two men, one very large and bulky, both wearing silver masks. They were pointing what appeared to be magic wands at her and yelling Latin or French phrases. They definitely were focused on her bracelet, which was worth a bundle. So why didn’t they leave with it? And, most importantly, did this all really happen? Was it a hallucination, or dissociation? She resolved not to tell anyone, and prayed that no one would notice her shaking hands and quavering voice, or the fact that she could no longer remove the bracelet from her wrist.
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Walden Macnair and Gregory Goyle, Sr. stood at the coffee bar in a bakery near Emma’s school, having followed her there after the attack. They, too, were visibly shaken.
“Macnair, what the bloody hell happened back there? I couldn’t touch the bint, my hands burned like fire when I made contact with her skin. Not one spell worked on her. We couldn’t cut the bracelet off her. Why the fuck not?”
“I have no idea, Gregory. She, or the bracelet, is obviously protected by powerful dark magic. I’ll wager if we kill her, the Horcrux will be destroyed.”
The two Death Eaters sat in stony silence. They felt their lives slipping away as they realized they could not complete their mission.
Finally, Goyle spoke. “I say this: let’s kidnap her and take her back to the Dark Lord. Let him figure out how to get the damned bracelet. We’ll be punished, but hopefully still alive after this all ends.”
“Fine, Gregory, fine. But we will have to gain her trust first and make it appear to be her decision. We cannot do anything against her will—the dark magic will not allow it. However, I have something to confess about that particular Muggle that may please you. I have a connection to her. She is the headmistress of a school for autistic children. My son’s school. Ian.”
“But . . . I thought the Dark Lord had you ‘take care’ of the boy. Said he was a stain on your pure blood.”
“Yes, well, I was willing to comply, but my wife had other ideas and she deceived and disobeyed me.”
“You’ve acted against the Dark Lord’s wishes?” Goyle asked, incredulously.
“Indirectly and regrettably, yes, by not controlling my wife’s behavior. She paid the ultimate price for her weakness, as you know,” Macnair replied casually, as if discussing the New York City weather. “But my connection to the Muggle is in our favor.”
“Quite.”
“I would, of course, be indebted to you for your secrecy on this matter, Gregory.”
“If we survive this, Macnair, I’ll take your secret to my grave.”
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Severus Snape slipped virtually unseen around the corner nearest Emma’s school. He had cast no Disillusionment Charm, yet he blended into the New York City neighborhood like a native. Tall, rangy, and wearing black head to toe, he adjusted his leather messenger bag and took in the lay of the land.
Dumbledore had tracked Ravenclaw’s bracelet to a purchase made at an auction house here, and Aurors from the US Ministry of Magic easily identified the purchaser. He and his two young sons had died in a cab crash, caused by an illegal Imperius Curse which had been cast on the cab driver. Snape felt a momentary twinge of sympathy at the children’s deaths; the Dark Lord’s depravity toward children was one of the main reasons Snape had turned to the Light.
Pinching the bridge of his nose in frustration, Snape audibly cursed the brilliant old hag, a distant cousin of Dumbledore, who had circumvented Voldemort’s magic and retrieved the bracelet from its hiding place. She had had no idea what it truly was, and had sold it immediately.
Dumbledore suspected the bracelet to be protected by Dark Magic, so it was Snape, with his relevant experience, who was sent—no, forced, he thought bitterly—to Muggle New York to get the bracelet before the Dark Lord did. The mission had been deemed too dangerous for Harry Potter to join, so Dumbledore reluctantly had involved his inner circle in the Horcrux hunt. Thank Merlin for small favors, Snape had thought at the time. No Death Eater revel could be worse than babysitting that arrogant prat Potter in New York.
Snape crossed over to the small patch of grass which passed for a park here and sat down on one of the benches. He wanted to observe the school, and the Muggle woman, before he decided on a course of action.
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Today was Thursday, field trip day. They were going to the American Museum of Natural History on Central Park West. They would take the cross-town bus at the end of the block. “The subway is a bit too real-world for them,” Emma chuckled to herself.
It was a beautiful New York fall day: unseasonably warm, brightly sunny, just perfect . . . except for her morning, which she tried not to think about. In fact, it was fairly easy to block it out while at work, as her students demanded all her attention. Tonight will be difficult, probably another round of Pinot with a NyQuil chaser in order to sleep, she thought, before pushing it forcefully out of her mind.
The walk was energizing, the day was warming, and she absentmindedly rolled up the sleeves of her pink cotton button-down shirt. Rick’s shirt. Comforting. They reached the corner and rehearsed bus procedures and etiquette with the students while they waited.
Snape couldn’t believe it. She had strutted right past him, flashing Rowena Ravenclaw’s bracelet for all the world to see. Clearly, she has no idea what she’s wearing on her wrist, he thought.
At first he had noticed her, not the bracelet. He was, after all, a man. And she was a woman: attractive, in her late thirties, of average height, with a distinctly feminine figure and shoulder-length dark blonde hair in a simple braid. Smiling as she shepherded her charges down the street; laughing, encouraging, holding hands with a nervous student as they walked. The teaching inverse of Professor Snape, he snidely thought.
Snape bent down to gather his bag and stayed down. With his excellent peripheral vision he had noticed Macnair and Goyle on the other side of the busy street, heading toward the Muggle. He swore softly to himself and cast a Disillusionment Charm. Unseen, he strode along the border of the park to within earshot of the group.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Ravenclaw's Bracelet
15 Reviews | 2.6/10 Average
Sad... and who was the witch with blue hair? Tonks?
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Yes, this was written pre-DH, of course and then Tonks was still an Auror *sobs* Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Great story.
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you for your comment. I'm so glad you like it!
i like it. sevvy is one of my favorite characters. he needs a little joy in his life. please, continue.
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Loireloa, I'm so glad you liked this story and I thank you for your comments. However, I cannot *coughs* promise that Severus will be happy in the end...this story is linked in time and events to HBP and we all know how that turned out. ;-(
"Oh! It’s magnificent! And huge" ROTFL - that line still gets me every time, 'phile! *snort* so Emma's blonde with big boobs, eh? *cough*marysue*cough*
I love Snape's summary at the end of this chapter, and I can just imagine his snarky tone too. Poor man, he's got so much to deal with. Onto the next chaptah, quickly!!
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Okay, Honey, I resemble resent that, 'blonde, big boobs' remark!! I'm so glad you are enjoying this story and I thank you for your review!
Frickin' Macnair... That poor woman, 'phile! Her whole life's turned upside down! I love the drama though! - have told you that before - and oh! to have Sev look deep into MY eyes and tell me it'll be allright.... *swoons*
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you, dearest! Unfortunately, Snape doesn't always do as he's promised . . . muahhahahahahah
Y'know, I like how easily Snape can switch between himself and Steven, but we all have different parts of our personalities. Who's to say that the Steven character mightn't have been who Severus turned out to be if his childhood/early life was easier. *sigh*
Cliffie = evil.
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
What an interesting idea, Honey! Perhaps he can be Steven . . . You'll have to stick with the story to find out! I truly appreciate your reading and reviewing!
Poor emma. But I wouldn't mind Macnair grabbling me :).Hmm Walden and Severus, there's an idea.Seriously, the confusion emma feels comes across as natural and you address many concernsa muggle would have when confronted with a situation of fleeing.
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you so much, Drox, I appreciate your review! And, Macnair? Ewwwwww. Emma's confusion will only get worse . . .
nice start!
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you! The next chapter is in the queue. Hope I can keep you 'hooked'!
Oooooo, I still say that this chapter rumbles with disquiet. We feel that there's something about to happen: your words suggest a very big 'something' and yet we're only being given small bits to work with.
There's so much information hidden in the words of this chapter, both the backstory and prompts for future interesting (and dare I say, dangerous) events.
Anticipates more!
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you so much, dear! Yes, there's lots more coming along. The next chapter is in queue right now!
This fic is flowing very nicely. You show Snape's spying abilities well with his alternative Steven persona and how he keeps that separate from Snape.And that is an evil cliffy....
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you so much, Droxy! I really worked hard on Snape in this fic. I'm glad he's resonating well with you. And what's angst without an evil cliffie or two?
Ah so Snape arrived...and equally nasty as we'd expect.I like that you painted Walden as handsome, it says so in the book. But it is a cold grace that one would expect from an executioner like Walden.
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you so much, dear! I love that Macnair's cold grace despite his evil soul has showed through!
I liked the line about Snape and Potter and why Harry wasn't invovled in seekig this horcrux.The whole bracelet itself is interesting and well done.
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you--I spent a lot of time trolling British museum pages to develop the bracelet--it's an amalgam of 11th British/Roman/Norse styles. And my beta, JaneAverage, was instrumental in the Harry stuff--I had left it out, thank goodness she has incredible canon knowledge (as do you).
Very suspensful begginning and angsty apartment scene. Messing with DE's is a bad thing...
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Oooh, thank you so much! The apartment scene was a challenge for me to write, I'm glad you like it! And yes, I generally try to avoid DE's (present company excluded, of course ;-0 )
Naughty Snape, using *that* voice to woo the woman! Still, I'm grinning with excitement at what's to come!!!
I also like that Emma instinctively distrusts Macnair, 'cause he IS such a sleaze and a thoroughly nasty man.
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Thank you so much, Honey! Yes, their "meet cute" was a fun scene to write. And a man like Macnair, despite his British manners, would shine through as a nasty sleaze to anyone, I think!
*Mission Impossible music plays in background*
Ooooo..... the thought of Severus Snape in New York gives a girl shivers of delight! ;o) And that Macnair, he's a real piece of work, isn't he.
Response from snapeophile (Author of Ravenclaw's Bracelet)
Yes, exactly! Mission Impossible music--isn't our Sevvie the ultimate spy in his NYC black clothing? I'm so glad you are liking this. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Response from HogwartsHoney (Reviewer)
The CONCEPT of Sev in Prada or something equally as devine is simply too much !!! *droooooools*