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“… she’s a pretty enough girl,” Molly’s voice went on, then, after an embarrassed pause added in a whisper, “but she’s a right bitch.”

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An interesting start ... but I don't think I can quite picture Alastor falling for someone like her - she's young of course, so she knows everything, but her arrogance put me off some. 

Very well done!  I was sniggering and chuckling throughout.  Now back to SS/HG Land.

Excellent writing. All the characters were vibrant and rounded. Dialogue was sharp, and purposeful. I was especially delighted at Alastor's romance. His looks, his temperment, were just as intense as they should be, and yet you made him the leading man. Wow. I am very much looking forward to reading peaks into the future with our two love birds.Thank you for posting. This is exceptional.   *hugs*

The black cargo pants and labeled t-shirts were a nice touch.  *smirk*  Still enjoying this story very much, and am looking forward to your next update!

oho! what a good update cant wait!

I absolutely love the Wizarding Wireless show quotes ... the scene was so comic, I'm surprised their prisoner didn't come clean without the Veritaserum. I am looking forward to the next installment.

Myself, Gin_and_Tonic and DarkChocolat&Nuts helps get me through a rigorous evening of writing. *grin* By the way, I find Polyxena's quick temperment refreshing and her language quirks entertaining. I'm looking forward to more.

This story was recommended to me, and I must say that I am quite glad I started to read it -- and will be continuing, you can be assured.  What was really funny is that you had painted the 'Sex in the City' picture so well that I had already thought she fit the description before you mentioned it.  I love Polyxena's colorful language as well.  Someone needs to tell Mad-Eye to stuff it every now and then.

I enjoyed this chapter immensely! Hahaha! I loved the shows you talked about, and the book was fricking hilarious! Muahahaha. Polyxena is really coming along great. I don't know if it's the name or what, but I can't but help imagining her as Xena: Warrior Princess (Lucy Lawless). They have the same kick ass attitude. Anyway, great work.

i just loved this chapter and love that moody appears so manly and appeling! finally caught up

Whoa! Get you some, Moody! LOL! I think this is the first story I read with him shagging someone. I'm happy for them though. Someone had to show her that not everyone pulls a Weasley. Teehee

I really enjoyed this chapter and the reactions from both of them (him about Bill/her explanation) and her reaction to Dung. Hahhaa! It fit so perfectly with my mental imagery of him.

Nice chapter. Sorry I didn't comment sooner. I've been busy. I like reading about duels. I can see this one in my head plainly. :)

brilliant!! so enjoyable I laughed out loud several times. Very well written Thanks

Enough with the questions!

Loved the story.

Voldemort needs to read the 'Rules for Bad Guys' book: Don't have your followers wear masks at headquarters; search your prisoners; don't taunt the hero, just kill him.And how long did it take to write the perfect fan-fiction sex scene?

This is a pastiche.  Yes?  Good observations on the incompetence of both sides.  Who’d ever guess Voldemort was hiding in Riddle Manor?  I must not give in to the Dark Side … I must not give in to the Dark side ,,, I’ve always been fond of pears ,,, better than a dang lemon drop … I could read ‘Ulysses’ between ‘Crucio’ sessions … I could work on my masterpiece ‘Voldemort’s Wake: Terror Aboard an Irish Steamship’

I love what I've read thus far. I'm working my way through it. I've got a soft spot for characters that are witty and snarky.

Full marks for the observations on the English Ministry.  Brit wizards haven’t invented the Magna Charta yet.  There’s an analytical mind lurking underneath the creativity (if you can excuse the personal comment).

This chapter was interesting. I'm undecided if this is leading to something romantic or what. I like this version of Moody. Great. Poly is great in this chapter, too. We're not all without our grumbles. LOL

she's right cranky. i am just surprised that moody took to her so fast. he's usual so suspcicous of people and not trusting.. the part with bill and her was cute

This is a very different take on the HP world. Interesting character choices indeed. This OC is a bit too mouthy for me. I found I wanted to smack her around. LOL... I'm odd like that though. I enjoyed the jabs at Moody. Good work.