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A Hero's Worth Chapter 3: Part Three
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Part Three

A Hero's Worth

Chapter 3 of 6

lady_rhian

A six part drabble series. Hermione and other Order members are in St. Mungo?s. Severus has been Obliviated. What will happen?

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There was a moment of silence. Molly shifted uncomfortably. “I must go find Arthur,” she said. She stood and walked over to Hermione, putting a hand on her shoulder. “I understand, my dear,” she whispered. Hermione closed her eyes shut and relaxed her shoulders. Molly acknowledged the gesture and walked out of the room.

“Are you alright, Hermione?” Ron asked. He glanced over at the older Order members who were seated across from him, slightly nodding his head towards the door.

“We’ll be outside,” Minerva said gently as she stood to take her leave, motioning for Fred and George to follow her. Remus and Tonks followed them out.

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“Hermione…” Ron started, but at the sound of the shutting door, Hermione sank to the floor, her body shaking.

“I can’t do it, Ron,” she choked. “I can’t hold it back…”

Ron wrapped his arms around his friend. “Sssh,” he said, rocking her back and forth as he would his baby daughter.

“He won’t remember me,” she sobbed, clutching at her best friend’s shirt. “Percy’s not stupid. He knows how to cast complicated spells, and it wasn’t poorly cast, either… It had meaning behind it.”

“There, there,” Ron said softly. “Only the best mediwizards work in Spell Damage… I’m sure they’ll be able to fix it…”

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Ten minutes later, Ron was still sitting with his back to the wall, holding Hermione. Her sobs were gradually lessening.

Ron looked up at the sound of the door cracking open, thankful that Hermione didn’t notice. Tonks peeked her head in. Ron shook his head.

She shut the door quietly and walked over to where Remus and Minerva stood.

“How is she?” Remus asked, a worried crease streaking his forehead.

“Not good,” Tonks said. “She’s still sobbing. Ron’s holding her. A right good mate, that boy is.”

“How serious do you think it is, Minerva?” Remus asked.

“I wish I could say I was optimistic,” Minerva said quietly. “But Percy knew what he was doing. And a permanent Obliviate…”

They stood in silence, contemplating the consequences.

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An hour later, Hermione and Ron were sitting in chairs in the waiting room. Minerva, Remus, and Tonks sat next to them.

Hermione’s hands were clenched together, her face like steel.

“Cho said they’d be out with the results ten minutes ago. I’m going to go ask,” Remus said, frustrated. He stood and went to the door.

He stopped short when Pansy Parkinson burst through the door, carrying a clipboard.

“Pansy.” Ron stood and walked over to embrace his wife. Pansy hugged her husband. “I don’t know what I would do if that were you,” she whispered.

“The results, please,” Remus said politely.

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“Well,” Pansy began, a bit flustered. “Do you want the good news or the bad news first?”

Hermione closed her eyes. Tonks reached over and squeezed one of her hands.

“The bad news is that there has been a good amount of damage done to his memory of the past few years. It was a deflected spell, too – bounced off something before it hit him, so the intensity wasn’t as forceful as a straight Obliviate. And it is probably due to his…” Pansy paused. “Rather incredible skill, really, that the spell didn’t do more damage than it did.”

“What does he remember?” Hermione asked tersely.

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Latest 25 Reviews for A Hero's Worth

65 Reviews  |  5.28/10 Average

10/10

HBAR

I'm not sure how I've never read this before.  It was sweet snd with a happy ending, which is the best kind.

10/10

jenidralph

A lovely, happy ending. :)

(I apologize for not reviewing the chapters in the middle.  I was impatient to get to the next part.)

10/10

jenidralph

Damn Percy...

0/10

salvamea

oohh soo romantic. nice endingAnd I did like the idea of  really good friend she has in Ron here. And of course their child must be lovely.a quick look into the eyes of the girl, and he knows he HAS to tell another story. best inheritage one can get.heheTonks really would never get over the thought about the cellar-thing. but thanks to Remus, she will be cured soon. hee.wonderful story. short but to the point. thank you for sharing.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you! I am so very pleased that you enjoyed it. Take care!

0/10

salvamea

hey! what is he angry about!!??of course he is a medical wonder. he would not be himself if he weren't.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

*snort* Too true! Severus would never settle for being an average patient. :-)

0/10

salvamea

such a disilluioning moment, when he says I know you, I feel for you, but not more. grrr.but it is not permanent. it is not permanent. that has got to be her mantra. everything will be all right.someday somehow.and she is pregnant. well if that is not ironic.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Indeed; positive thinking is the key!

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salvamea

oh my goodness. " he wouldn't remember me" How deeply hurt can one be. what grief.Percy has to hang for this, I am sure.this break down.A real treat to read your sequel. all compacted in these few lines, but all bursting with emotion. brilliant.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you for the kind compliments.

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salvamea

a grand dame of duelling with words. mymy. she really has it.and Percy is the twit of the century.and got what he deserved.at least Arthurs prayers had been heard, and she didn't do worse to his son. like castrate. or so. and then the break down. *sob*

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Yes, Percy is indeed the twit of the century. Thank you for reviewing each installment; it's a lovely treat when that happens. :-)

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salvamea

hey, what is going on here. (not that I didn't have an idea. but you make it tremendously sound like a "grand entrance"applause for this one. have to read on quick.I'm with the twins. it reads as if there is much fun ahead.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. :-) (I apologize for the tardiness of my response!)

0/10

TCFellows5

Fun!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thanks! 

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thanks! 

10/10

ickle duddykins

Haha, I think this might be my favorite Hermione/Severus memory story, and it's definitely my favorite set of drabbles. The characters are written so well, Tonk and the twins are friggin' hilarious. Thanks for a great story, I love happy endings...and shagging in cellars :o)Sue.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you - what a compliment! This is my favorite drabble series I've written; I'm very attached to it. The grangersnape100 challenge was good for me as I would never have attempted to write a memory!fic of my own volition. I have been so pleased and honored by people's affection for it - thank you so much!  

10/10

FJDS

Loved it!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you! :)

10/10

Stormi

Oh my.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Indeed. :)

10/10

Stormi

Wow!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Glad you're still enjoying it!

10/10

Stormi

I know you are done writing this but I really want a happy ending!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

That is a really lovely compliment. Thanks.

0/10

Stormi

Go Hermione!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Hermione can be pretty amazing, can't she? :)

0/10

Stormi

Great start.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you. :)

0/10

Stormi

Great job! Looking forward to reading more of you works.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you so much! I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it, m'dear.

10/10

KarenDetroit

Lovely little story. Thanks!

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you!

10/10

Chartreuse

A lovely set of drabbles. I was especially delighted with the commentary from the gallery, as it were, which provided such nice continuity.And the end sequence was very sweet, indeed.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoy my work. :)

10/10

wildkitty27

That first chapter was AMAZING, and this one, too! I can't wait to find out what happens next. You've hooked me.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you so much! The next two segments are in the queue, and I just finished up another twelve drabbles of aftermath for the series. :) Hope you enjoy the rest of it!

10/10

averygoodun

“You git,” Fred muttered. “She’s going to tear him from limb to limb, and you’re blocking my view!”

“Sorry,” Ron said. 

Loved that!  Yo've really got a good rythm going here!  You manage to really make the most out of those hundred words!  I'm looking forward to the rest! 

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

I couldn't resist putting banter in for Fred/George...it's just too good of an oppurtunity to resist! Glad you're enjoying the story - the next two segments are in the queue!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

She told that git right what he needed to hear. I'm so intrigued and hope he gets his "mind" back.

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you! We'll have to see what happens to Severus (though if you're validating, you'll know before everybody else - sneaky mod). :)

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

Muahahaha. I love the famous Hermione slap coming into play (and seeing everyone's reactions to the angry witch).

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you. :) It may be a cliche, but it's just too priceless to not use!

0/10

fire_haired_lovely

I like that someone is finally giving the ponce the what-for.Lots of luck, Here's some chocolate (dark oohhhh!)

Response from lady_rhian (Author of A Hero's Worth)

Thank you for the review, and for the dark chocolate. :) Dark is the best, of course. The next installment will be up today (hopefully).

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