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FairfieldHere?s an un-poetic sonnet. The beta was Wickedly Wanton
ReviewedIt ill becomes an old man to sit here,
Thinking of his young lady and her ways,
Bringing to mind all the differences,
Provoking the end far before its time.
Thought continues what thoughtful words began,
But the words remain empty without deeds,
Beyond our wildest imagination,
Though conversation is more intimate.
Thought continues and loses the present,
Making the things said and done out of place.
There is no way to ask for affection,
And acts without words lose all their meaning.
Time the destroyer lives in the mind, and
Thought, its companion, is my companion.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Mistress
3 Reviews | 10.0/10 Average
Profound and melancholically dysphoric--yet beautiful in its evocative vulnerability--lovely work, another exquisite sonnet of yours, as always!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Mistress)
Thanks. It was my first sonnet, and I think my best.
Well done. :) I really like the last couplet.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Mistress)
Thanks. I wrangled with the last couplet for some time before the current one hit me while driving home from a movie.
This is very well done. Clever. I can see you are a poetry writer!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Mistress)
"I went up ... and won unmerited praise." from 'Passing the Examination' by Po Chu-i