Mistress

Fairfield

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General Poetry: Sonnets 97 Words 1 Chapter WIP

Here?s an un-poetic sonnet. The beta was Wickedly Wanton

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10/10

Profound and melancholically dysphoric--yet beautiful in its evocative vulnerability--lovely work, another exquisite sonnet of yours, as always!

Response from Fairfield (Author of Mistress)

Thanks. It was my first sonnet, and I think my best.

10/10

Well done. :) I really like the last couplet.

Response from Fairfield (Author of Mistress)

Thanks. I wrangled with the last couplet for some time before the current one hit me while driving home from a movie.

10/10

This is very well done. Clever. I can see you are a poetry writer!

Response from Fairfield (Author of Mistress)

"I went up ... and won unmerited praise." from 'Passing the Examination' by Po Chu-i

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