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Malfoy Manor Being Cold
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Being Cold

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Being Cold

JackieJLH

14 Reviews   |   14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Angst Malfoy Manor 1,575 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Narcissa Malfoy

Things Narcissa Malfoy never told her husband.

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Chapter 1: Being Cold


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9/10

Celtic Spirit

very deep, and very close to what i think Narcissa would have felt when Lucius was sent to Azkaban. Good job!

8/10

vincablack

That was most profound I am left  fealing sad and abreft of words.

8/10

vincablack

That was most profound I am left  fealing sad and abreft of words.

10/10

zambonigirl

This was a very poignant, emotional story, and I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for sharing.

9/10

snapes_faerie

wow, lonely and haunting

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Nicely done. I love how you've captured the cold feeling of being lonely, empty inside, and learning not to care, though knowing you should. It's definitely a mental thing. Sometimes people have to be hard to go on. My mom often says that I'm cold. Ah, I guess I should thaw out some, eh? Teehee. Anyway, your story reminded me of me a little. Sorry about my TMI review.

10/10

jadedseeress

Wow. Fascinating look into Narcissa's head. I think you captured the character beautifully.

10/10

notsosaintly

This was a really excellent, following Narcissa's journey from being lost at being cold to accepting it to embracing it.  The story of a lonely and sad life.

9/10

DawnEB

I tend not to consider Narcissa much, even after her appearance in HBP, but you really conjure up a picture of her that has got me thinking.  Wonderfully crafted, I'm glad now I took a chance on a character I'm not keen on.

0/10

Cat Feral

Brrr! Sad and rather chilling (if that's not too obvious a word, considering the story was all about being cold!) Poor Narcissa. I've often wondered if she and Lucius loved each other or mearly got married because it was expected and then got along fairly well because they had been brought up the same and understood each other....

Very well written! Maybe I'll rec this to a few of those "Abusive Lucius and Battered Narcissa" twits out there! :-D

10/10

Lux_Mund

Excellent story!!!!!

I can perfectly understand her and I feel sorry for poor Narcissa.

Congratulations!!!!! I really liked this fic. 

0/10

EverMystique

Intense emotion. Glad to see this from Narcissa's perspective. I think this is very well done, and highly plausible.

10/10

Gardengrrl13

Wow.  This was a terribly moving piece... I like what you've done with Cissy and Lucius.  It makes sense that he loved her in his own way, and I can understand her sentiments.  Wonderfully humanizing. Great job!  GG

0/10

Cissy_n_Snape

A perfect Narcissa

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