tantric tonic

2 Reviews | 10.0/10 (2 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Poetry/Prose Poetry: Other 70 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Second place winner for May poetry contest on The Hideaway.

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10/10

My favourite bit is how you wrap the ending. Storeroom shrine, anodyne. I love it! warty xxx

Response from dara st john (Author of tantric tonic)

Sqeeeee. Ta, very much!

10/10

Great rhythm and rhyme and I like the liberty you take with the punctuation and space. It definitely adds to the poetry.

Response from dara st john (Author of tantric tonic)

Thank you, dear Mistress.

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