Why

Mollie

5 Reviews | 3.4/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )

Romance Snapshot Songfic Potions Under Duress 1,037 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione and Snape have a fight one night and she threatens to leave. One-shot.

Start Reading

Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: Why

About Mollie

Validated
Author

Mollie

Member Since 2006 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 3 | 24 Reviews Written | 8 Review Responses

Reviews for Why

Displaying all 5 Review

0/10

Rageful Jewel

This was very good story, for it showed a more realistic portrayal of the relationship they would have if they decided to become a couple. Sure I read stories about how Snape treats Hermione decently yet with those stories I'm suspending my disbelief, for I can't imagine Snape ever being kind. He might tolerate them but not be kind to them.Though in the end, I wished Hermoine walked out, instead of staying. The relationship is clearly not a healthy one and it needs to end before something irreparable happens.

Response from Mollie (Author of Why)

Thank you for the review. I know that I should have had her walk out on him, but I just couldn't bring myself to do it. I love this coupling so much. I might write one eventually where she leaves him, but for the time being, they remain together. Thanks for your review.

8/10

ancientgirl

Sorry, I forgot to put a rate here.

0/10

ancientgirl

Nice one shot. I don't know that song, but it it worked well with this.Thanks for sharing.

Response from Mollie (Author of Why)

Thank you for reviewing. The song is country by the way.

Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)

Ah, okay that's why. I mainly listen to rock music, but like I said, it worked very nicely here.

0/10

EverMystique

Sad and realistic. Nicely done.

9/10

CharmedForce

Very powerful story... you showed their pain well. Great job!

Displaying all 5 Review