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The Black Sister Tango
Fairfield7 Reviews | 10.0/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Fire and ice with two Black sisters.
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Beautiful homecoming for Cissy. For Lucius. It seems both are capable of appreciating the other fully, further discovery of the other.Duty calls--what's a wizard of Lucius' calibre to do but heed it?Thoroughly enjoyed this compact, intense intimate tale--all the elements revealing each step of the way the characters' experience and perceptions--Debby's eavesdropping and delicate sensibility is dealt with in stride cordially with a cordial. With Narcissa's prescience comes a sense of peaceful humour about Lucius and his shenanigans--very unique lady, Lucius is a lucky wizard in more ways than one
Response from Fairfield (Author of The Black Sister Tango)
Thanks for all the commentary. In some ways, this was a second homecoming, and Cissy is starting to think that she and her sister do enhance each other and the relationship. Lucius suspects his prescient wife was more proactive than she wants to admit.Only a wizard of Lucius' calibre could hold steadfast through all the witches' doubts and hesitations, and perhaps only he could accept the Black sisters for what they are.Glad you enjoyed Debby enough to include some wordplay.The final paragraph introduces future reality although the last sentence is an example of feminine logic since Cissy was more of an instigator than she wants to acknowledge.Thanks again.
Poor Lucius, I hope he can stand the pace.
Response from Fairfield (Author of The Black Sister Tango)
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Poor Lucius. He's had to endure Bellatrix and Riddle and Dumbledore and the Weasleys and Potter. And now this.
Money sometimes makes more trouble than it solves.
Response from Fairfield (Author of The Black Sister Tango)
Thanks for the review. The money, the scrolls, and the artifacts are all sources of conflict and danger.
A very interesting begining, looking forward to more.
Response from Fairfield (Author of The Black Sister Tango)
Thanks. The story is complete in four chapters although the latter chapters still need some touching up.
Intrigued with this Historic Artifacts Division--also lovely to see Lucius getting involved and the historian in him being brought out and given a chance! He wonders why helping them and getting involved feels good though it may lead them all to peril--seems adventure is calling, but he shall not be alone--he has a wide range of participants eager and thankful for his help and contribution; love this exploration of the relationships, in particular between Narcissa, Lucius and Andromeda, as well as the others. Helping others may not be as unpalatable as he thought.Hope Debby the house-elf will be able to endure all of the goings-on in the household despite her sensitive nature, perhaps she just needs more exposure to them in one way or anotherGreat chapter, looking forward to more!
Response from Fairfield (Author of The Black Sister Tango)
Thanks for all the comments. Lucius is being given a chance to use his aristocratic heritage: scholar, inventor, and adventurer. The background, perhaps not brought out enough in the narrative, is that they are all competent misfits with no chance to use their talents in a stagnant society - among other things, a society not able to mount an archaeological expedition. Debby may have a primitive streak in her that still resonates with the goings-on even after twenty years in the household. Perhaps she will resonate as long as the couple continue to do so.
Enjoyed the dynamic interplay between Andromeda and Lucius, all of the humour and word play, their chemistry and revelations of each one's inner thoughts, perceptions, and concerns before taking the plunge with each other. Enjoying the different sides to Lucius portrayed and Andromeda, both of them discovering much aout themselves as well as the other. Hoping Lucius' endeavours will not be detrimental to his relationship/life but can be sustained in some beneficial way(s)--looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of The Black Sister Tango)
Thanks. The idea was that all the tension generated in the first two chapters finally explodes. Lucius has gone from commenting on scrumptious carrots and putting together jigsaw puzzles with his nephew to herding cats on a dangerous expedition and from there to a close encounter with Andromeda while Andromeda has gone from Grandma Tonks to deadly adventurerer to fiery companion. In the next chapter, Lucius must cope with Cissy and consequences.
Enjoyed the lurking dangers of the expedition and the confrontations with the demons--Andromeda and all of her natural glorious witchcraft in action along with the other witches; Lucius has insight and appreciation for their many skills and abilities, and they can return to their lives but now with an understood bond between them and their newfound findings (wondering what each of the artefacts found mean and how it will affect the individual and/or group--will the original owners be traced/identified or are they all from one singular source or clan/coven of magical creatures?). Thoroughly enjoying the humour, both blatant and subtle, as well as the compatible chemistry and balanced understanding between these personalities--looking forward to more!
Response from Fairfield (Author of The Black Sister Tango)
Thank you very much. This is different from the standard Lucius. In this tale, he is a family man. Cissy will not countenance an autocrat, nor will the witches on the expedition tolerate anyone overbearing. His inventiveness and steadfastness see the group through, and he lets all the witches make their contribution. In particuar, Andromeda rises to the occasion, but unfortunately, the story is too short to fully develop the others.Your comment on the artifacts points out a weakness in the story which reflects a weakness in Brit wizardary. Their society is too weak to conduct a rational examination of its past.All of them did manage an extraordinary effort in team work, at least for this short quest. And thanks for the comment on the humor which is a difficult thing to write.