Our Girl, Pansy
MHaydn7 Reviews | 10.0/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
The editor inspires the troops.
Warning: The motley crew of writers is back.
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Yes, Pansy, with all her pride as well as her passion, is quite in a dilemma, her motives being speculated upon and being portrayed battling one side or the other--enjoyed Biff turning the tables and Cho trying to turn them back--who will reveal the true Pansy's final choice(s)? Will the editor truly be the deus ex machina and put everyone & everything in order and harmony? Or will she get caught in and caught up in this battle of interpretations--whose side will she side on?'No where in canon does it say, ‘Pansy Parkinson had a great rack.’'--HA! But one is allowed one's own freedom of visualization?:-)Enjoyed the action, humour, angst, speculations, and insight! Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
Thanks. You captured the heart of this chapter, and you quoted my favorite line. Fanon usually has Pansy and Lavender well endowed, and the the film makers followed fanon in their depiction of Lavender. One may very well doubt the ability of anyone to save this story and restore harmony to the office. I think humor is underrated as a method of story telling. Thank you, again.
Well done Pansy, a girl must hold on to her blueberry muffin at all costs.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
I must admit some reviewers have the knack of identifying the central elements in a story. 
Leave it to Theo and Biff to avoid developing the sensitivity theme , and opt for the action
Enjoyed the muff/muffin theme... and play on words--and of course Chocolate Frogs being the demise of Shacklebolt in his rookie years, enjoyed his story by Alastor as a Constable and the bum pinching--and that's our girl, Pansy, she loves Blueberry muffins and chocolate--absolutely!The different approach and observations about the nature of attraction is intriguing, and like Pansy, I feel 'both calm and full of wild urges' every time I read this! Looking forward to more!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
A portrait of the constable as a young man. Sadly enough, no more wild urges for chocolate.With hindsight, the action scence was muffed since muffins shoud have been flying, except, of course, Pansy saved hers. She came through in a pinch. Thanks for all the feedback.
Magical as the moonlight that is weaving its spell in the editor & staff's story & storyline within the story--so happy they are all back! And of course, a Pansy and Remus tale, with Alastor and hints of underground goings-on... I'm gobsmacked and have been *struck by lightning*--utterly in love and impatient for the next chapter! Can't wait! Again, so happy the crew are back and tackling another new, unchartered territory tale to be told
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
Thank you for the extensive review. The moonlight is, indeed, getting to our pair. No doubt, this was inspired by Nagini-Remus although this story does not plumb the social and paychological depths the way its prompt does. This tale is merely a light-hearted (I hope) bit of fluff.
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Any tale written by you is a gem, and a story being one centred around Pansy and Remus is precious & rare, and, of course, my being partial to Remus has made me quite distracted with and immediately mesmerised and eagerly awaiting for more--in other words, I'm on cloud nine! Thank you for writing this tale, looking forward to more and more and more...
Yea! you're back, I wonder if Remua has biten off more than he can chew with Pansy.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
Glad you like Biff and the editor. There's always the worry that the format has been exhausted. Our characters will have a few adventures before he gets to chew on her in chapter four.
I'm getting dizzy from all the twists and turns , on to yhe next chapter.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
Our writers are getting up a good head of steam. Not to mention that one of them is getting all steamed up. It' s steam of consciousness one might say.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
Our writers are getting up a good head of steam. Not to mention that one of them is getting all steamed up. It' s steam of consciousness one might say.
Thoroughly enjoyed this tale--and am reluctant, but must, disagree with Cho-the boys didn't ruin the story:-)--everyone's contribution, yes, even Theo and Biff's, truly developed an intriguing, touching bringing together of Pansy and Remus. Loved her intelligent, clever, courageous and determined, yet self-questioning, approach to Remus every step of the way. A lovely evolving of herself, and her and Remus. And it was a lovely ending, with her questioning and reflecting, allowing someone else to be a part of her life, as never before, to take the risk and care for someone, as never before--her/their adventure is just beginning! Thank you!
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
Thank you for a brilliant analysis of the story. As per usual, when the tale is finished, I'm left wondering what in the world I've written. This might be about a complex person who has been deeply hurt and who is an outcast finding her way back because of an unexpected romance. The conflict among the writers reflecting her inner conflicts. It's possible the action-adventure sequences of Biff and Theo display the depth of her attraction. Pansy hangs in there despite the contradictions, despite the ineptness and clumsiness. As she says to herself, 'Maybe this takes more practice.'Thanks again for all the reviews.
Response from MHaydn (Author of Our Girl, Pansy)
Thank you for a brilliant analysis of the story. As per usual, when the tale is finished, I'm left wondering what in the world I've written. This might be about a complex person who has been deeply hurt and who is an outcast finding her way back because of an unexpected romance. The conflict among the writers reflecting her inner conflicts. It's possible the action-adventure sequences of Biff and Theo display the depth of her attraction. Pansy hangs in there despite the contradictions, despite the ineptness and clumsiness. As she says to herself, 'Maybe this takes more practice.'Thanks again for all the reviews.